Main character has a decent backstory that they still feel attached too from the original timeline and they have a logical agenda on how it affects their current plans. The main method and the core of the Main Characters power and organization growth is pretty solid and it's the best thing about the story. It's great to see a villian using the time reset to prepare for a better future while also getting petty revenge.

Only flaw is the secondary powers that the main character has which snowballs hard! Because of that I can only give 4/5 rating since

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as of chapter 26 the character is basically stronger than Ediolon from The Worm/parahumans and I can only see her getting stronger as time progresses.

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New DemoGrazz

Status: chapter 33

Apr 19, 2024

Being fully honest the story is absolutely amazing, I love it and I wish I had discovered it later when there were more chapters out because I just read this entire thing in the span of two days and oh my god.

Quite possibly one of the best superhero stories I've checked out so far, the humor is actually funny, the writing is easy to understand and the characters are actually reasonable for once!

Sure, I don't really enjoy the whole OP protagonist but this story seriously sells the appeal to me. I simply love Sonya's character so much man I an a huge sucker for "Villains" like her!

Needless to say 5 star experience would recommend! ≪ 3

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WhiteNekoKnight

Status: chapter 27

Mar 26, 2024

This is, in my personal opinion, one of the best superhero apocalypse redo story currently on scribblehub. The best part of the story is Sonya, she's well written and OP in just the right way. All haul the future ruler of humanity!

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Rabcor

Status: chapter 33

Apr 18, 2024

This story is a bit like a mix of stereotypical korean redo fics with a sizable hint of the chinese equivalents. It's wrapped in a nice package with a lady that's into other ladies as the lead instead of the stereotypical sociopathic edgelords you always get in aforementioned stories, which makes it automatically a cut above most of them.

It has most of the same problems too, protagonist is OP as balls (she's basically all for one, but stronger) and well that's a little boring (it's called OVERpowered for a reason) and although there is indeed a bit of a girl's love subplot absolutely nothing has been done with it except the protagonist pining for a girl she could easily meet up with if she wanted to but hasn't made any effort to at all (e.g. the subplot isn't convincing in the slightest and underutilized). I didn't expect any better considering the lack or a romance genre tag (there is a late romance tag, but how late can it be, we're at 70k words and the main love interest isn't even in the story yet, except as a name...) but it's still a bit of a letdown because if it was more utilized it could really elevate this story.

So yeah, this story is allright, it's even kinda good for what it is, but what it is is still ultimately a generic time reversal/redo fic, it has not provided me with anything yet to really set it apart from the rest but I will keep reading.

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