Ezekiel recognized early in life that he didn't want to follow in his parent's footsteps and spend the rest of his days as a mere farmer. No, his eyes are set on a grander stage, a place where tales of monster hunters, mighty generals, and benevolent heroes hold court — A world of Magic and mysteries.
One day, the opportunity he had been waiting for arrives. Without a second thought, Ezekiel throws himself headfirst into the adventure. However, not everything turns out to be as magical as he had dreamt it to be...
Trinity of Magic is about a young, 14 year old boy named Ezekiel. His dream has always been to enter the magic academy, Elementium, and become a mage with his friends. During a Hogwarts style sorting, however, Ezekiel finds that almost nothing is going the way he planned.
Story: The story is a coming of age story of a boy with magical powers. In the early chapters we see him pining for the chance to become a mage, leave his family for the academy, and go through the sorting. I am not familiar with magical school stories on Scribble Hub, this being my first, but the events of the story play out in an expected, but meaningful, way.
Style: The style is consistent and follows Ezekiel in the third person. I would say the biggest flaw is that things are explained in a way that sometimes made me want to skim through. I think adding in some of Ezekiel's inner monologue may spruce things up, though it is still fine as it is.
Grammar: The only issue I found was with a series of messed up line breaks, which is easy to fix. Full marks.
Characters: Ezekiel seemed like a fully fleshed out teenager who was hesitant, but resolved, to leave his family in order to find something better. He's kind to the other prospects, showing a social personality that looks like it might be the cause of some contention at becoming an outcast from the get-go.
Overall, I'm looking forward to catching up to Trinity of Magic and seeing where things go from here when things really start picking up.
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This is a unique magic system, coupled with brilliant writing. Just read it. Great magic power fantasy, love it. Will become one of the GOATs.
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The story is good untill the author goes full slavery isnt that bad even though he writes in that there are "breeding farms" for slaves in this story, and propt up like its a normal thing too. That kind of systemic evil and the illogical way its shoehorned in completely ruins the story. Its bizzare because the story has no hints of this stylistically for the first bit untill bam its in your face. Not only is it narriatively dissonant and not at all in line with what was happening earlier on, almost tricking you into thing its going to be a classic hero story with a good uplifiting message and then bam heres a philosphy and theme thats completely anathema to the first part. And its doublelly anathama to the way the mc's personality is showed because all of a sudden hes perfectly ok with it and even buys slaves. The way its presented makes it seem like the book is telling you its normal for slavery to be a thing. Honestly the author really needs to watch django unchained so he gets a better idea of how evil and horrible slavery is. Hell the breeding farms are treated as not a bad thing! Theres a reason this is below 4.3 stars even though it seems decent at first.
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Awesome story that keeps getting better as time goes on, combat and worldbuilding is really topnotch, character interactions do improve with time and by book 3 they are really up to par with the best ones on this site.
In addition the Author invests time in doing AI art, it's a hit and miss sometimes but it does add a lot to the story in my opinion, especially when it comes to environments.
Grammar is great.
Give this one a shot if you are looking for a great magical action series, with really great worldbuilding and a well thought of magic system.
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The first 3 (?) chapters are boring, but set the stage. For people like me who really like to see the MC struggle the next few chapters are perfect. The author is a great storyteller. 5/5 Update: B1 32 5/5 it only gets more intense. Edit: B3 - 44 Just read it. The only thing I do not like is that armor seems to be completely useless in most of the fights. If equipment is so useless, why are dwarven smiths so good?
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