The person who kills the enemy keeper will get the drug that will help them overcome their weakness of magic. Flaunt the drug in front of them(the drug can be bullshit or the real deal, doesn't really matter), and send them to the enemy world.
Like this, Dale would not be losing any "good" people and will not be revealing many of his cards.
If enemy is a full tech world, it is probably a confirmed win!
Started with an amazing Idea and went down hill within 3 chapters. Why ? Well of course because MC cannot keep his head out of the gutter. He him self was living a pretty bad life ( working two jobs without getting enough sleep ). He should be more mind full when deciding the blueprint of the whole new world. But no, he aint got no time for that. Pu**y is more important.
Well, considering you have such a biased opinion against the novel even before reading past chapter ten, and honestly, I won't say that I can't see where your viewpoint comes from, I myself would have immediately stopped reading the novel if the MC was any bit more horny, but in any case, the novel is good, you just have to take your time to read it, instead of skimming trough it, stopping on a paragraph, seeing the MC in a relationship, and saying, nope, this is sh*t.
Hi. In my newest story I have a genre-savvy MC make passing reference to World Keeper. Only a passing reference ending more or less that he reads until the middle of chapter nine then another event takes precedence. Hope this would work as a good stopping-off point for him because he's likely to soon after be in another world- lol
(Of course if you had a suggestion for him to stop reading midway in some other chapter, that'd be fine too.)