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I finished the story so far aether starting yesterday and although I want to give you my full feedback I'd prefer to do it with an actual chapter, which leads me to cheer for you, as long as you think about this history any hiatus is justified for it's quality.
Just know that I'm enjoying this much more than expected and it also surprises me how well thought and developed it's been, also I don't know if you had planned most of the important parts or if you take the feedback for it but the story and it's pacing, I just can't get enough of it.
Thanks a lot for the story and wish u can sort well whatever's going on right now, I'll be waiting as long as it takes for the next chapter.
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*huggles you lots and lots*
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Thank you!
Tbh, I'm currently trying to finalise my overall story plan for the rest of it so I don't end up messing up the story. I had a strong idea of how I wanted what's already been written to be like, so I could do it without doing an overall plan. (I did do chapter plans, though). I've done most of it so far, I just need to add in bits here and there to fully flesh it out and make it flow without feeling incongruous/forced in places.
I'm sorry that it's taking longer than the week I said in the announcement. I just don't want to get it wrong and regret not mentioning things when I could have due to improper planning.
>w<
I'm glad you're really enjoying the story! It makes me feel so happy. Again, apologies for having to wait for more now.
>w<
*huggles you again*
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@Nahrenne Good to see you are still at it. I was getting kinda worried, since such quality is rather rare .
I also read Charm of soul pets in the last month after reading you got inspiration from it and luckily i can just chuckle at the totally overdone numbers in it and alot of goofy scenes (that world has alot of moons and night comes really fast)
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@DrachenSeele Well, quite a few Chinese cultivation-esque novels tend to be OTT with the numbers.
Hope you managed to enjoy it, even with such grandiosity.
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No problem, real live matters are more important than a story :)
hmmm, I don´t know if you have read the story before, but your story could take an example of "The Charm of Soul Pets". It is a Korean story which you can find on the site "WuxiaWorld" currently at some 1200+ chapters which is kind of similar to yours.
The story has some pro and cons, but I think you could take an example for some problems/topics which could crop up in the future like additional soul/cristal pets, fights between people, world building etc.
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I'm seriously grinning like a madman right now. The Charm of Soul Pets has been a favorite of mine for a while, and seeing someone reference it, FINALLY, makes me unnaturally happy.
Also, author: Take your time! A week's not that long and it's a lot better to have high quality than rushing.
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I've read about a third of The Charm of Soul Pets. It influenced a few things for me when I came up with this story. Saying that, it is in no way a fanfic since it's definitely not in the same world as that story.
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@Asheigha TCoSP is one of my favs as well ^^ but I stoped reading at the halfway point... maybe I should read it up, but honestly the story has some cringe moments cause of the naivity and arrogance of the MC which destroyed my reading experience.
And some story plots which are frankly straight ouf of a weired anime.
The worldbuilding in itself is aweasome, but how the story is beeing build up and everything in the story turning around the MC is frustrating.
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@RockimPark I have to agree. There are many "cringe" moments, and the quality and readability (is that a thing) isn't on par with most published stories. But the story's still fun, and I love the premise (Pokemon but better). And...*glances around
*...while I shrink at some parts, my inner child still screams at the face-slapping.I'm rambling now, sorry, but to me it's a nice read while we're all lounging around staying inside.
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@Asheigha That´s true, Pokemon should take an example from the stroy :)
And yes... The face slapping in the story is ok, but I would suggest to enjoy it in small doses and not in a binge read like I did· 1 Like · 1 · 0 -
@RockimPark Did you read my mind? It's not like I intentionally read the first 200 chapters in one sitting (sideways laying) last summer!
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Hi. I am hoping the 'irl' stuff is nothing tragic-
Ah, don't worry.
Nothing tragic at all.
(^-^)
*huggles*
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Thats what backlogs are for
*has not had a backlog the entire time*
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@Nahrenne ... aha, the old "Iron man" game mode!
as i say whenever this come up take your time healthy author is much better then regular updates
I know.
I just want to be sure I actually finish the story and don't end up fizzling out.
>w<
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Yeah, but we all wait because we want quality. So its fine.
Its been kinda long since i read this, youtube recommended me sth about hyenas and their impressive bite force and i thought about RaaCB. I dont even know if she fought with claws or teeth primarily, but seems like their bite force is quite strong (spotted hyena) no idea if our bug eater has that strong of a bite too in nature
@DrachenSeele
Nearly finished the overall story plan.
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