This is great. I cant find any significant flaws at all.

  The charectors are well written with most of them (The Mc) being a perfect blend of comedy and seriousness. Actions are well described like the play scenes between sibling sin the start is just the cutest. The charectors actions make sense and are logical, at least from the charectors perspective. There is no sign of intentionally dumbing anybody or anything down to forcibly move a scene forward.

  This is a great read with a fun protagonist, interesting story, and excellent world building.

  I guess the boy flaw would be that the author tends to be indirect with certain things, providing the proper information a chapter or three later but that's also pretty fun. Nothing feels better than figuring things out with a few clues.

All in all I really reccomend this

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Wow.  Just wow. 

This story is great.  The combination of fluff, drama, adventure and other elements felt so natural, I breezed through the chapters! I'm surprised this story isn't getting the attention it deserves. 

Miss Author did a great job especially in writing her characters and their interactions.  It's what I enjoy best in stories. I wish I could write like that. 

Do give this story a try.  I'm sure it'll be a refreshing break from demon lords, bombshell vixens and smut. 

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