- Announcement 2 – Update on thingsSep 10, 2020
- ANNOUNCEMENT – Update on story postsJun 22, 2020
- Chapter 66 – The Final Trial Part 2Jun 19, 2020
- Chapter 65 – The Final TrialJun 19, 2020
- Chapter 64 – A Tiff with TeivalJun 18, 2020
- Chapter 63 – Training with ArminJun 18, 2020
- Chapter 62 – A Familiar Face Part 3Jun 17, 2020
- Chapter 61 – Return to the CityJun 17, 2020
- Chapter 60 – The Zapada LeopardJun 16, 2020
- Chapter 59 – Otto’s AnticsJun 16, 2020
- Chapter 58 – Diminishing ReturnsJun 15, 2020
- Chapter 57 – A Remnant of the PastJun 15, 2020
- Chapter 56 – The Trial Part 2Jun 14, 2020
- Chapter 55 – The TrialJun 14, 2020
- Chapter 54 – The Day of the TrialJun 13, 2020
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This is great. I cant find any significant flaws at all.
The charectors are well written with most of them (The Mc) being a perfect blend of comedy and seriousness. Actions are well described like the play scenes between sibling sin the start is just the cutest. The charectors actions make sense and are logical, at least from the charectors perspective. There is no sign of intentionally dumbing anybody or anything down to forcibly move a scene forward.
This is a great read with a fun protagonist, interesting story, and excellent world building.
I guess the boy flaw would be that the author tends to be indirect with certain things, providing the proper information a chapter or three later but that's also pretty fun. Nothing feels better than figuring things out with a few clues.
All in all I really reccomend this
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