I really need to careful with what I said. Last time I hope that we can find intelligent lifeform right? Well I just jinx myself. We just found ourselves some intelligent lifeform.
Yesterday during a survey one of the drone detect some anomaly inside the forest. At first I thought that it was just the usual wildlife but Ai-chan said it has a different readings. So we sent some battle drones for further inspection. And it turns out a humanoid creatures. From what I can see this creature is female and she's in critical condition. I want to bring her back to our base but Ai-chan said that she has a high risk to our survival. I somehow convince her and finally she reluctantly agree.
We put her on a medical pod that I ask her to repair before. Why am I repair this thing before you ask? Well actually I was hoping to find another sentient species on this planet. If by any chance they injured at least I can help them. Who would have thought that it's actually useful.
After her treatment I can see her situation stabilise.
"What are you going to do if she try to shut us down?" Ai-chan ask with an angry tone.
Don't worry I doubt she know anything about complex machinery.
"How can you be so sure?"
Well as you can say it's just my instinct.
"I'm cannot trust your instinct."
Ai-chan I'm hurt.
"Don't care."
Even though we are one, she hardly trust me. I wonder why.
"You can only ask yourself." She said nonchalantly.
Anyway let's just focus on our new guest here. She looks no different than usual humans that I know, the only different is her ears. It's long like the usual elf that I used to see in manga back in earth. Her face is quite beautiful, while her body is slender making her looks so fragile. Her chest is well not so big but also not so small.
"That is quite a specific way to describe a women's body, pervert."
Didn't Ai-chan right now acts quite rude towards me?
"I'm just stating the facts, you leacher."
Before this Ai-chan is quite nice to me but right now for some reasons she turned quite sour towards me. Maybe she jealous? Nah, I don't think so, maybe she just antsy that there is a possibly dengerous person in the city.
While waiting our unconscious guest to wake up, we analyse her gear first. She has some weird looking liquid in a small flask. I scan the liquid and found that the liquid has somekind of a healing properties. So that must be a medicine.
She also has a dagger on her but one thing that piqued my interest is her necklace. It made of what I believe is silver and a red jewel that may or may not be a ruby. 'Why am I not sure about it?' you ask. Well the thing is there is some light emitting from the jewel themselves. Ai-chan want to run some test on the necklace but I didn't allow it because it belongs to the girl. She then turn into sulking mode and don't want to talk to me. Well I think I will ignore her for a while.
Suddenly the elf-like creatures wake up. I quickly move my vision to the cctv in the room. I can see that she is confused with her surrounding but also seem excited to. I want to have a talk to her but Ai-chan didn't allow me to. But I did it anyways and once again she turned into sulking mode. Well I will persuade her on another time but for the time being our guest is the utmost important.
I then proceed to focus my consciousness into a nearby drone and move it to the medical bay. When I arrived the girl looks surprised and quickly grab her dagger on the table nearby. I quickly try to calm her down.
"Wait don't be scared I'm not here to hurt you."
She then stop and looked at me with a confused looks. She hesitate at first then proceed to talk. But to my surprise she talk in a different language that I never even heard before. If we cannot communicate how can I convinved her to trust me. I tried to ask Ai-chan to help translate her language but she refused to help me.
Please Ai-chan, can you help translate what is she talking about.
"No." She said it without holding back.
Come on Ai-chan, without you I cannot do anything.
"I agree with that but the answer still no." She said it again.
Okay I know, I'm wrong to bring her here. Can you please help me?
She kept quit at first but then proceed to said, "No."
Okay, I will do anything that you ask after all of this over. So can you help me?
She kept quiet again and then said, "Will you really do anything that I ask?"
I hesitate at first but then proceed to said yes.
"Very well I will help you."
I then proceed to hump my fist as the sign of victory.
"I will directly translate the possible words that she might want to tell you. Don't worry I will do the same for you."
I then proceed to talk to our guest.
"Hello there?" I ask the stranger in Obi-Wan Kenobi tone.
"Who are you?!" She ask me.
"Don't worry I'm the one that help you in the forest. I promised that I'm not here to harm you."
"Then why am I here?"
"I bring you here because you are gravely injured so I bring you here to patch you up."
Even though she still cannot believe me, at least she put her dagger down.
"May I ask you some questions?" I ask.
She then nod her head in agreement.
"Who are you?"
"My name is... La Flora. You can call me Flora. I'm just... an adventurer."
"An adventurer you say... so you were attack by the beasts in the woods?"
"Yes..."
Flora then look at me for some time and then she ask,"...are you the golem that guard this place?"
"Hmmm... well you not wrong per say."
She then continue to inspecting the drone that I currently use. She looks like a curious child that never see a robot.
"How did you move? I cannot sense any magic from you."
I ask curiously.
"Magic? You mean magic exist?"
She then looks at me weirdly.
"Well of course, magic is the essence of life in the world. So it is quite weird that you doesn't need any magic to move. At very least an intelligent golem like you would have a philosopher's stone as core."
Looks like this world is much more interesting than I thought.
"Well what I'm about to tell you, is going to surprise you more than this."
"What?"
ahh i hate those cliffs...
but so far im enjoying this story, this could get interesting joining magic and technology.. skynet with magic and in a more friendly mode
Thank you, I'm also enjoys writing it. I hope you continue supporting the series.
I hate mc so much, but I like setting. f*ck. He didn't allow scanning of necklace because it belongs to her. This is so f*cking stupid it made me hesitate for a few seconds, because I wanted to drop this novel on the spot.
It can be bomb, it can be radioactive or it can be corrupting her. It can have medical properties that is need for her. It can contain information. It can be anything, but from the looks it is a REALLY f*ckING IMPORTANT THING! But he do not allow scabby scanning because it belongs to her.
You picked her up. You patched her. You literally saved her. You NEED to know about her and this thing has high chance of helping you. But you so much of an idiot that you do not allow SCANNING. I get it if you do not want to take this thing because it is hers and you'd feel like stealing, but even so you have rights for some compensation and can take it, if it is not that valuable to her. I get that you do not want to steel. BUT SCAN!? Why? That's like: "I won't allow you to look at it because it belongs to someone"! That's complete utter bullshit, and it really is dangerous!!! What the f*ck is wrong with you?
Author, this is really bad way to not reveal info about this necklace. You could've just said that fast scan can not be done because that thing bends scanning rays and so it needs to be scanned in complex long and excessive way. And that would be an OK excuse. Not perfect but OK. But your reasoning to not scan necklace is complete and utter bullshit.
I just do not believe that Ai-chan would leave it like this. This thing have too high probability of f*cking everything up. Probability of elf shutting down AI is near nonexistent. There are a lot of battle drones, and I don't think they will put her where their core is placed, and I am sure there is some protection of the core. And I am 100% sure she'll need some computer/ingeneering knowledge do do this. But this stone is luminescent. Which means it have some energy stored and it exerts it in the form of light. So it is entirely possible that there is a lot of energy and it can explode, and light just shows that it is not that stable.
So not scanning this stone is hilariously stupid idea. And it is unbelievable for AI to not do this.
BTW, Ai-chan not in the slightest a logical part of their personality. She is more emotional than MC. I like setting, but characters so bad I think I'll drop novel pretty soon. Elfen girl is a bad character too. She behaves like somewhat ret*rded child. But that's OK, because MC behaves like completely ret*rded and completely stupid infant. With only exception that he can talk.
And how are they influencing functions of each other without being able to use them? I don't get it. If they were parts of the same core they'd be able to use all functions, but both would be able to start and block them. And they'll decide what to do together and then do. Or they will need to agree on something to do this, but that is a stupid and unrealistic thing in this circumstances.
So yeah. For now AI core is one emotional and somewhat chuuni part (Ai-chan) and another plain stupid and ret*rded part (MC). No idea how they were able to survive for so long.
nice.
Well that sucks... so basically the reason the ai managed to complete itself is because they were somehow transported into a magical world which supplied the missing pieces to complete it.
May wish to look into further editting, some of the dialogue was very broken in it's structure.
"' Hmmm... well you not wrong per say.'"
""I'm cannot trust your instinct.'"
"Flora then look at me for some time and then she ask,'...are you the golem that guard this place?'"
These are all rough examples that break apart or have words that don't link up correctly.
"Hmm...well you aren't wrong per say."
"I can't trust your instincts."
"Flora then looked at me for some time and then she asked "are you the golem that guards this place?"
These each would flow better for sure.