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(Tim's perspective)
This is not canon, and is irrelevant to the story. I had written this in like a few minutes, so don't expect anything with this one. But you want to read some shitty jokes about literal shit and stench... Well, it's your choice, go ahead I guess...
Elliott... He really died. He died mainly because he developed an allergic reaction to the too much caramel and his digestive and respiratory tracks, so actually he suffocated from not the "gas".
When we genuinely got worried and went over to the toilet he entered, we banged the door for a solid minute while screaming. After that we decided to get in. Upon getting the keys form the owner, a stench has entered our nostrils, that was so powerful one of us fainted immediately. He still gets treatment for PTSD though it's another story. After getting back to our senses, that have gotten shocked from the stench, we immediately went in and got him out of the- of course not! You think any of us were suicidal. Ok we liked Elliott, he had bit of a hard past so we used to help him out when he got into a bind but, man I am telling you. The toilet was like a toxic chemicals disposal facility.
We are lucky that we survived getting the hell out of there alive to be honest. When we got back to our senses, we instinctively ran away, carrying our fallen comrade. Just a few seconds later, the whole café got covered in a thick green. The screams followed quickly after.
One of the elderly had fallen victim to it, upon breathing the gas. She fell to the floor, unmoving. Dead, beyond words. Even on her unmoving and relaxed face expressions, there was hint of disgust that was so fierce and intense, could be called something not a human would be able to feel. At least that's what I heard from Jerry, I was too busy carrying our fallen comrade. After the first victim dropped down, the others -especially the people that weren't in their teens, started dropping down like flies.
You'd expect there to be screams and terror but no. I am telling you, the only thing that was there aside from our sprinting noises, was just silence. But silence that's too noisy, you couldn't really give into the invitation to the sweet embrace of death, yes we were running. Fast as we can, trying to survive but some of the gas had entered our respiratory system, and our eyes too. We were all in pain, one of us started to start stalling. By a new found strength, while carrying out another comrade, I grabbed him by the arm and propelled him forward.
Thankfully, he is alive now. If I were a second late, the "gas" would have taken him. The grim reaper would have, his soul with a swift motion of his reaper. Letting him meet the embrace of death. Now he has two adorable daughters. I don't regret saving him one bit, even if the gas had taken my arm from me. Yeah, I am happy and satisfied. Yep. 100%.
Who am I kidding, of course I am not satisfied. It was just supposed to be a café visit. Why the fuck the "gas" had to take my friend and my arm from me. Don't get me wrong I'd have saved my friend again but why did all those have to happen... Just because someone else signing a contract on behalf of others, doesn't gives others's lives and rights to you. What a stupid system. I wonder how you are doing now Elliott...
Is this gonna have romance? Please no harem, im sick of it.. but its your story so your choice.
Btw just a suggestion.. mc could learn psychokinesis and make himself a golem lol since his skills are all mental ones.. I Think? His split persona can control the psychokinesis to keep him in one piece while he drives it xD
Oh no you spoiled the story...
Just kidding.
Well, that's similar to how am I going to make him able to move.
Aside from the one above, anything under this are speculations on my part too. So they are not exactly spoilers.
And there may be romance, perhaps within future side characters. And to answer your question, the MC himself is still traumatized by the fact that he doesn't have any pipe on his body. So there won't be an instantaneous romance I can guarantee you, that would be awkward and unlikely. And I don't plan on making the MC have a harem, I also am sick and tired of the authors that solely use either the title or the harem trope to lure in readers by playing to their instinctual desiree without writing anything solid in the end. I don't want to be like that, even though I write as a hobby. That said, since it's been confirmed that there are civilizations. It would be weird without some very specific reason to not make the people in power not have harems, so I hope that won't make you sick and tired of my amateur story.
Thanks for reading!
Oh by the way if you are interested into split minds skill, I think you'll like the next chapter. There will be more RPG elements from then on, as well.
Hurrah! No harem! lookin forward to that btw i like mental skills and stuff and i dont care if those in power have harems or not since im more focused on the mc than background mobs
Btw author please dont make the Female MC weak or something.. again its your story so your choice.. xD
@Rizon I am still not too sure about future characters. He needs to get out of this situation first and foremost
@Yurekli_Kedi god no, dont do romance, im sick of good stories getting straight trashed by entrance of some dumb bimbo
@FIEND you probably will like it if the fmc is badass lol like in a certain novel i know xD
@FIEND Well, he'll be a literal rock for a long time. So a relationship other than something like family-bond or friendship would be umm strange...
@Rizon Like in legendary moonlight sculptor ?
@Shadow_Tempest yeah and some other novel which has such a friggin long title thag i forgot xD
@Rizon idk cant see fml being introduced in a badass ml fiction, the only place i see romance is when female is the lead and the male lead is the second main
@FIEND i recommend you read "star child escapes from arrange marriage" where the fmc has godlike talent and is super strong.. much much much stronger than the mc.. they were childhood friends and i gotta warn you cuz the fmc is so possessive he makes the mc dress as a girl thinking no one will be able to steal him but backfired
You dont have to worry since the mc is also getting stronger
@Rizon sounds good u got any where fmc isnt that much of a ret*rd or the ml isnt that much of a simp to let her dress him like that? i love bad bit*hes but not annoying ones. best couple leon and ada , they compliment each other, dont try to posess each other and are subtle but speak volumes with their actions in terms of romance
@FIEND shoulda read "The bleak walker" a roller coaster of emotions xD its completed about a month ago, the fmc is a warrior maiden and gets stronger until she becomes a goddess while mc is an isekaid person who is very cool and always calm due to his experiences, he isnt very strong at the start but he later gains alot of power after like eons (literally billions of years) of mastery over runes
@Yurekli_Kedi Make him a giiirl, do it.
@Fiston I don't know what the future holds for our protagonist. Keep on reading to find out if the Elliott and the R(rock) Fighters become, a girl?
Though don't raise your hopes too high