Chapter 739: Stay Like This For Awhile
Lu Chen fell on the bed with Feng Meifeng on top of him. Lu Chen stared down at Feng Meifeng. Her breath was ragged, and her cheeks were flushed. Lu Chen patted her head. Feng Meifeng stared at him. The two didn't say anything. The only thing they wanted was to rest in each other's arms.
The two of them closed their eyes and went back to sleep. Both had smiles on their face.
...
The two of them woke up a few hours later.
"You were so rough with me." Feng Meifeng could help but pout at Lu Chen. He was doing whatever you wanted without a care in the world.
Lu Chen scratched his head, "Sorry about that. I forgot that it was your first time." His instinct took over, and he went a little crazy.
"Of course...Wait, this was my first time?" Feng Meifeng was going to scold Lu Chen. But then she caught what he said at the end. She quickly pulled the blanket off! She saw fresh blood on the bed.
"Cat's out of the bag." Lu Chen stuck out his tongue. But Feng Meifeng's face turned pale. She looked at Lu Chen,
"You knew?"
"Ahh. yeah."
"You shameless bastard!" Feng Meifeng didn't wait as she tried to attack Lu Chen. But Lu Chen caught her hands.
"Shameless? How can you call me shameless when you want me to take responsibility when I did nothing?!" It was the pot calling the kettle black.
"!" Feng Meifeng paused when she heard that. Lu Chen continued, "Also, think about what you did yesterday."
"What do you mean?"
"Try to remember what you did yesterday."
Hmm? Feng Meifeng thought about it. And when she did, she remembered everything that had happened. Everything she said too.
"Ahhhh!" Feng Meifeng shrieked!
"Kill me! Kill me! Kill me! Kill me!" She slammed her head into Lu Chen's chest as she couldn't believe she would say all those things!
"..." Lu Chen didn't know what to say as he rubbed her back, "There, there. I know it was embarrassing. But you were cute."
When he said that, Feng Meifeng glared, "You took advantage of me!"
"Technically, you were the one who took advantage of me." Lu Chen retorted.
"...Then do you know why I did it?" Feng Meifeng asked again.
"Mmhmm." Lu Chen nodded with certainty.
"Then you accept?"
"Didn't we do it?" Lu Chen laughed. But when she heard that, she hugged him tightly.
"I'm sorry. I'm sorry for not listening to you." Feng Meifeng started to apologize. But Lu Chen shook his head,
"You don't need to apologize."
"But-"
"There's nothing to apologize for." Lu Chen stated, "I'm at fault too. So there's no need to apologize."
"..." Feng Meifeng didn't say anything as she snuggled up to Lu Chen, "I missed this."
"How could you miss this? You haven't hugged me like this before?" Lu Chen chuckled. Feng Meifeng frowned, "Can you not ruin the moment?"
"Can't help it. After all, you took my first time."
"Eh." Feng Meifeng's expression turned blank. Lu Chen nodded, "You're the first girl I ever had sex with." This was his first.
"..." Feng Meifeng didn't know what to say. But she laughed, "I'm happy that I'm your first."
"Me too." Lu Chen said as he kissed her.
"Let's stay like this for a while." But Lu Chen frowned, "I was thinking we should do it one more time."
"Aren't you tired?" Feng Meifeng blinked a couple of times. Lu Chen shook his head,
"No way! I can go for 10 more!"
"...Pervert."
"Says the one who had all those thoughts about me."
"..." Don't remind me. Feng Meifeng sighed, "I guess I won't be attending my classes today." With that, Lu Chen didn't even hesitate as he attacked.
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Its a shame when an author has a real novel waiting but instead gets side tracked onto short stories instead.
Adonis is a rough novel even the most ardent fan appreciates it's short comings e.g. grammar, spelling, etc. But the basis of the story is interesting with interesting characters not just the MC.
The MC's complete aversion to s*x or intimacy of any kind is hilarious considering he was cuckolded since childhood!
I mean did his future wife allow masturbation (of course not). So our erstwhile MC was quite literally a total and complete virgin for neatly 30+ years.
One thing which really made no sense was Mr Adonis despite being used and abused by his wife and even ultimately murdered by her holds no animus whatsoever? And in fact would resume his relationship with her if she showed any interest whatsoever.
I mean FFS I've heard of wimps and cuckolds but going back to your murdereress for a 2nd time around is just pure masochism. 😂😂😂
So I suppose the question is why did you create so much build up 742 chapters of fluff for literally one page of very unsatisfying s*x with quite frankly the least deserving girl of the lot?
I mean let's be real Meifeng is almost as abusive as his piece of sh*t wife anyone see a pattern here. 😳😳😳
Aftermath
With Lú Chen's knowledge of future events the Lú family Rose like a Phoenix. Lu Chen accomplishments included Arcs becoming the number 1 entertainment company in the country signing many new and unknown artists, he also partnered with a unknown computer genius with their fledgling computer becoming the number 1 gaming and computer company, with the Bai/Lú venture it brought more business to his family and his elder brother became the CEO after his dad retired. His second eldest brother became a high ranking government official.
Long Shen lost everything in the business deal he had with the jing family causing even more rift between him and fei fei family because it cost them a third of their fortune. Fei fei still sticks by him and causes her family to disown her cutting her off until she comes to her senses.
The Bai and Huang princess eventually became harem members for Lú Chen making his mom over the roof with now having 6 daughters.
But this is all for the next book
This so called ending was bullsh*t the author bailed on the story and just inserted Meifeng as the random girl he sleeps with. I don't know what this authors problem is I've never seen an author with intimacy issues but this guy/girl absolutely does.
The basis of this story was really good but the dichotomy of this character was just way too extreme. Mr Author total and complete cuckold, wimp, pu**y like your character. Do not have flip sides to their personalities that are super alpha male.
To be honest if your character were anymore a pu**y this guy would be a gang gang volunteer and I'm not joking 🤢🤮🤧
Best girl got his first time... BIG W
Good story but didn't end right, need to complete his harem and finish long shen