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***(Graeval's POV)***
It has been a long time since I brought everyone to this flowery field. Now, this time jump is necessary to avoid too much trouble... which ones? Well, the introductions of Laila Macrance and Acrisio, then the explanations I gave to Jack, Sarity, and the others during that famous breakfast: that I'm from another world, what is a psyker, etc.
Everyone present was surprised to hear all this. Of course, I didn't mention the fact that my wife is the ex-Demon Queen, also because I don't trust them although, if my wife got in the way, she would be able to deal with whatever kind of boredom they might send against her. Though, I wouldn't give them time to afford the luxury of worrying about their own lives if they just try.
Guuuuu~
As we were talking, I suddenly heard this very familiar moan. When I turned around, I saw that the little Acrisio was holding his stomach and at the same time pulling the hem of his mother's dress. Chuckling, I turned to the King
"By talking we have well-passed lunchtime."
"Apparently..." the King said smiling as he looked at his nephew
"Since it would be a shame not to take advantage of this place, how about if I offer you the lunch?"
“Oooh~! A dish cooked by Graeval!"
"It's been a while since the last time!"
"What good will you prepare to eat?!"
As soon as I made the offer, Ridel, Ishgat, Cordelia, and Sarity began to attack me. Well... they're my regulars so to speak so it's not strange that they react this way.
"Seeing their reactions, it must be something special." stated the queen
"To eat something prepared by the hands of the mighty Aphy's future husband... what an honor for an old man like me!"
"Too bad I have no intention of marrying her." I replied looking at Archbishop Tarquin with a blank expression "Lilith, could you go and get everything you need to set the table?" I asked, opening a portal that led to the Moonlight
“Okay... though, what are you going to prepare? We have no ingredients on hand."
“Don't worry… in my kitchen nothing has ever been lacking.” before crossing the threshold of the portal, I turned to the royal family and the others present “While we prepare ourselves, you can do whatever you want. We will call you as soon as it's ready."
Keeping the portal open, I helped Lilith carry a large round table and a small rectangular one to the other side while at the same time, I was gathering snacks, ingredients, and pots on a trolley so that once everything was ready, I could carry everything to the other side.
Huh? Look, I have an emergency reserve in a very high place... and on top of that, very cold. It won't be the same as having fresh ingredients, but since it's my whim...
Once we got everything together, both Lilith and I rolled up our sleeves and began to do what we do best: serve a customer.
***(Bassilla's POV)***
While we waited for them to call us, we split into three groups: I was sitting under a tree with my sister, Laila, and the other wives of the Hero, Acrisio was exploring the field with my brother, my mother and lady Ishgat, while lady Aphy, lord Jack, my father, and the Archbishop were discussing something... maybe that's my impression, but Lady Aphy doesn't seem very happy.
"It seems that your hometown does nothing but churn out one surprise after another, lady Sarity."
"I was as surprised as you are, Lady Macrance... perhaps much more than you."
"Not that it surprises me~ after all, it's not an everyday thing to find that the childhood friend who dumped you with style, is the most powerful man in the world."
"Ridel?!"
"... And let's not forget who he is married to and who wishes to marry him."
"You too Emilyn?!!"
"True. But what do you mean by that Lady Emilyn? I can understand Lady Aphy but what does Lady Lilith have to do with it now?"
"Ah... ahaha... ah nothing..." Lady Emilyn said, scratching the back of her head "I mean, you have seen how beautiful Lady Lilith is. She can easily rival lady Sarity."
"Now why are you putting me in the middle of a competition?!"
It's a simple chat between women. We were talking about surprises and love in the end. One of my favorite topics, but when both Graeval and lady Lilith were mentioned, the topic caught my interest and bothered me at the same time. Somehow, I have to divert the conversation... That's it!
"I've always wanted to ask you, something ladies Lingxin." I began by attracting the attention of the Hero's wives "How did you fall in love with your husband?"
*Blush!*
As soon as I asked that question all of them, my sister included, suddenly blushed and looked away. Why are they embarrassed? As I asked myself this question, I noticed that Leila was giving an embarrassed chuckle.
"B-Bassilla. I know you've never had any experience but..." my sister began, raising her face to look into my eyes "this question is slightly embarrassing."
"Why?" I asked confused "When I asked mom and dad they were more than happy to tell me."
""""""*Sigh*"""""" all of them sighed
That sigh seemed to sweep away their embarrassment and they all looked at me as if they were dealing with a curious little girl. But despite this, they began to tell me.
My sister Cordelia was the first to speak, so I opened my ears but I was slightly disappointed when she told me that it was simple love at first sight. But it wasn't… normal so to speak. It is true that at the first meeting she felt something, but she believed it was just a passing thing. But then she had to change her mind: she told me how Jack noticed her concerns and how he supported her, how he could easily make her feel better and the troubles they got into when they sneak out of the palace, like many other situations that led her to truly love him.
For Lady Ridel it had been a little different: at first, she and the Hero had a simple student-teacher relationship as Jack possessed the skills necessary to use magic. At that time, she was still one of the most talented court sorceresses in my father's service and when she was ordered to tutor the Hero, initially she saw it as a nuisance. A few months passed and she had to change her mind: Jack was a huge source of satisfaction, curiosity, and knowledge of another world and it didn't take long for their simple student-teacher relationship to change into something deeper and then culminate during the times of campaign against the Demon Kingdom.
Lady Emilyn instead met him at the camp on the eve of his first battle. Since her family is a family of knights, she has trod the battlefields since she was 16, the age at which she obtained the investiture. She had often faced battles against demons and when she saw Jack for the first time, he gave her the impression of being one who after the start of hostilities would die immediately... she had to change her mind too when he saved her life on the battlefield. Since then, she has learned to not judge someone by appearance and begin to respect the Hero. From there, the step was short.
My sister is love at first sight, Lady Ridel has resulted in continuing to spend time together and for Lady Emilyn it was born out of simple respect. And Lady Sarity instead...
Noticing my look, Lady Sarity gave an embarrassed smile
"It seems it's my turn." she began exhaling. “Before meeting Jack, as you well know I was in love with Graeval. We've known each other since childhood and we've always been together, but the way I saw him changed after we turned 6... which is the age he remembered his previous life. But despite this, we continued to be together. His mature side continued to fascinate me and he was also a guide for me.
When I turned 12 they came to get me because I had been chosen by Aphy as Saint and then, believing I loved him, I imposed on him a promise that is silly now that I think about it."
When she mentioned that she wanted to marry him after she had done her duty, my heart sank, and somehow... it annoyed me.
“Despite this, we still kept in touch by exchanging letters from time to time... which were more outbursts than actual letters. But his answers were always reassuring and enlightening at the same time... those messages were the only thing that didn't make me feel alone.
Unfortunately, 2 years later my training was concluded as the blessing of the mighty Aphy allowed me to learn magic rather quickly and I was sent to the rear with the task of treating wounded soldiers and on some occasions, I was even sent to the front to provide support to the troops. At that juncture, it became more and more difficult to maintain contact with my childhood friend and the horrible reality of the war did not allow me to remain a girl and the support of Graeval's letters were no longer sufficient..." she looked up at the Hero with a sweet expression “When he got to the front, Jack and I were like cat and dog and often those heated arguments also acted as an outlet for the stress I was accumulating. However, the longer I stayed with him the more my affection grew until, on the eve of our last battle, we understand how we felt for each other and ended up... consuming our first night before the wedding." she said blushing and scratching her cheek
"All true~" Lady Ridel interjected "Fufufu... those two frequently were at each other throat."
"Hmph!...... I was very stressed at the time."
So, His Holiness and the Hero didn't get along at all at first, but if they fell in love afterward. Then why...
"Why did you still mention that promise made to Graeval when you reunited the first time?"
Embarrassed, with her eyes she seemed to ask me "Do I have to tell you?", but I was curious to know. After all, it was a promise made when they were still children and no one would be surprised if they forgot about it after all the time that had passed.
"...... Because I didn't want to lose him."
"Lose him?"
“*Sigh* Graeval has always been a close friend, but I also regard him as the big brother I've always wanted. Consequently, when I was still 12, I thought I loved him as a man, and maybe when I saw him again after all that time, I thought the same for a moment." she said after sighing "Being used to receiving the attention of many men, I thought that he too would propose sooner or later and so I told him about that promise."
"So that's why you did it..." Emilyn said thoughtfully
"Yeah. However, I never expected that answer... which for a moment made me think that I lost him." after a short break "When Cordelia and I went back to Fago because I missed my hometown, Graeval treated me as if nothing had happened and apologized for that unhappy reunion as if he had caused it."
"Sarity..." my sister looked at her concerned
"I'm an idiot... he always supported me... *sniff* and he always has been here for me just like a big brother would... *sob* while I was just thinking about myself and living in the terror of losing him... *hic* to lose the only one I can define a brother... *sob* I wanted to impose my senseless selfishness on him." tears began to flow down her cheeks "really... *hic* what a childhood friend I am."
Seeing Lady Sarity cry like that made me feel compassion for her and most of all guilt. After all, it was I who made her cry. Instinctively, I started to approach her to hug her
“You're only human Sarity. Being afraid is something we all feel... even me."
“!! *Sniff* Graeval...?!"
Perhaps because all our attention was focused on her, we didn't notice that Graeval was behind us. When I turned to him, he was no longer wearing those dark suits and cloak, but simple, colorful clothes with an apron and a white sash tied on his forehead.
Calmly he walked over to her, taking a handkerchief from his pocket. He stood beside her and began to wipe away her tears... while smiling sweetly at her.
"Graeval... I..."
“I know you've been through a lot since we first separated. And I know what it's like to live on a battlefield... it's a profoundly changing experience."
"But... I... I only caused you problems because of my fear..."
“Fear is a necessary feeling for each of us to survive. However, you have to be careful not to be controlled by it." he began and then began to stroke her head. “The fact that you understood it fills me with pride. So... you have nothing to be forgiven, also because I have a good dose of guilt too. However, I am happy to see how much you have grown."
“*Sniff* *Sob*... Graevaaaal...! Uwaaaah!"
"Relax... everything is fine."
Lady Sarity burst into tears like a child and flung herself into the arms of her childhood friend... no, of her beloved big brother. That was the scene we were all witnessing... and I have probably been a protagonist in the past too. My sister Cordelia was looking at them with a nostalgic expression.
But despite that familiar scene... seeing Graeval hugging lady Sarity... I don't like it.
***(Graeval's POV)***
*Sigh* how troubling is this little sister.
When it was ready and I asked where the girls had gone, the king showed me the place: they were sitting on the ground under a tree.
Now, I do not like to eavesdrop, but when I heard Sarity tell her love story, I felt freezing. No. Not because I was envious of the Hero, but because I neglected her feelings when she returned from the battlefield.
You know by now, but Sarity and I exchanged letters during the time she was away and I could already feel the strong emotions contained within: loneliness, bewilderment, frustration... and fear. I knew exactly what she was going through... after all, she is very much like me: we were both deprived of our best years of life just because someone imposed greatness on us... I have to remember to hit Aphy again later.
But unlike me, she could count on the support of her childhood friend at least... my support.
I'll be clear, I don't regret the choices I made and the words I used with her at our meeting, but if you think I was heartless and didn't suffer... you're wrong. I cried and also felt disgusted with myself. My brain was telling me it was the best thing to do but my heart was blaming me for being too ruthless with my... little sister. I'm just as human as she is.
But when I ignored her true feelings when she and her husband targeted Lilith... no. Even if I had kept my cool, things probably wouldn't have changed that much. So that's why...
“... You have nothing to be forgiven, also because I have a good dose of guilt too. However, I am happy to see how much you have grown."
“*Sniff* *Sob*... Graevaaaal...! Uwaaaah!"
"Relax... everything is fine."
She was crying on my lap again... and I was comforting her again. Consoling her, eh... with what right can I console the girl who sees me as an older brother and whom I nearly killed because I looked away.
"*Sniff* Why you're crying... *hic* too...?" Sarity asked me, looking up
Uh?! I touched my cheeks and realized that tears were running down. Feeling them I gave a wry smile
"Nothing... I was just thinking... we're both idiots."
"...... Yeah... *sob* you can say it loud."
***(Cordelia's POV)***
Maybe we stood there for a couple of minutes before Sarity started to calm down. That scene reminded me of how Bassilla or Atia did the same when they came to me in tears because they had been scolded. But this was different... I began to think When I first met him, he had told Sarity that this was going to be their real reunion... but I think, it just happened and this time.
"Huh? You have red eyes Sarity. Did something happen?" Jack asked, noticing when we reached the round table which had been set by lady Lilith
"Let's say... I've made peace with the past." she answered with a smile that exuded sincerity. A smile that made Jack blush.
It seems that she has matured a little more now. I thought as I sat next to my husband.
“Ladies and gentlemen…” Lilith began with a smile and with plates in her hand “we thank you for waiting. Today's meal will consist of an appetizer and a main course. I hope you will like them.” she finished as she turned to distribute the plates.
Then she went to a rectangular table nearby and brought some soup plates with vegetables... which I know well.
"Giardiniera1for more information click here... right?" I asked looking at her
"That's right, but this time it will serve as a side dish for the appetizer." she stated and then left
"What is this... giardiniera?" My brother asked me curiously
“They are simple vegetables prepared and preserved with a special method. They are very good and crunchy. *Yum*” I said as I brought a piece of carrot to my mouth
Intrigued, everyone tried to taste the dish they had never heard of but had to stop. The sound of a cart being pushed attracted our attention. The cart pushed by Lilith contained wicker baskets with what appear to be golden-colored bundles in them, while next to some cutting boards that had been gathered together, there was something that was oddly shaped... almost like a thigh of an 'animal.
When he placed the baskets in front of us, I sensed an oily scent coming from those little bundles that further tickled my hunger.
“These are called Gnocchi Fritti2for more information click here,” Lilith introduced them
When we caught one intrigued, there was the first surprise: that gnocco fritto had no filling whatsoever. But at that moment I didn't pay much attention to it and I tasted it but I was slightly disappointed: it was crumbly and pleasantly warm but in addition to the slight taste of the oil it lacked salt.
"Fufufu. It seems that they are not what you expected, right?" Lilith began, this time serving thin slices of what looks like dried meat
“! This is...!"
As if she had operated something inside my husband, he took a piece of that meat and put it in his mouth. When he swallowed, his eyes widened
"Prosciutto crudo3For more information click here...?!"
“Ara! As expected from the Hero. That's right and it's a 24 month seasoned."
When I tasted it, I understood immediately why my husband surprise. This cured ham is very tender, slightly salty and the thin white strip of fat melted on my tongue. When I tasted it, it came to me like an inspiration.
I took the gnocco fritto I had just tasted and filled the empty belly with a couple of slices of that prosciutto. When I took it with my hands and bit into it... it was then that I had the epiphany: the fried, crumbly and lightly oiled dumpling was dancing together with the slightly salted ham, while at the same time the heat of the first collided with the cold of the second.
"......Delicious!" I exclaimed surprised
When I looked at the others, I saw that they pounced on the dish after trying to eat it like me. It's delicious... but I don't think it ended there... I remembered the Giardiniera, and I added it to my third gnocco fritto along with the prosciutto crudo. When I bit into it, I also sensed the sweet and sour taste of the vegetable and at that moment the three flavors seemed to play in my mouth.
"I've never eaten anything like it!"
"How can this dried meat be so soft?"
“Ah! It's over!"
*Clap clap*
“Well, gentlemen. With this, the appetizer is concluded..." Lilith interrupted them amused "soon I'll bring you the main dish."
"What is it?" Sarity asked curiously
"It doesn't have a name now that I think about it..." Lilith said thoughtfully "but he told me it will be a dish... explosive."
"Explosive? What do you mean?" Ridel asked curiously
“I know as much as you. Ah, but he said that the children might not like it so for his highness Acrisio- "
"I prepared this."
Graeval showed up behind Lilith with various plates closed by an iron lid floating around him and a bowl of steaming white rice in one hand and a smaller rectangular bowl in the other.
Moving to Acrisio's side, he handed him the bowl
"Now I'll show you a spell." he said smiling at the child who had a questioning expression
When he poured the contents of the other bowl over the steaming rice, I noticed that there were scrambled egg flakes and amber cubes inside, that bounced and shivered on the rice. Suddenly, the cubes began to melt and the rice seemed to have turned into a golden mound. When those cubes were starting to melt, I could smell the delicate smell of chicken meat and my stomach seemed drawn to it...
Guuuuu~
And I wasn't the only one. Almost in concert, our stomachs complained. With a smile on his face, the levitating plates landed in front of us.
"It's ready." he said when he exposes the dishes "Bon appetit!"
In front of me, there was a golden omelet with a reddish sauce on top. Looking at the others, I saw them in disbelief because they seemed to expect who knows what, and if I have to be honest, I too was a bit disappointed.
"Huh? You seem... disappointed. Something wrong?"
“No, it's just…” Sarity began, “it doesn't look like anything special. After all, we praised you a lot when we got back."
“Hahaha. I understand..." he said approaching her and taking the spoon that was next to the plate "But after the topic we discussed today, I thought you learned not to judge a book by its cover."
The theme we talked about today was-
*droll*
When Graeval opened the belly of the omelet, I felt an explosion of aromas that instinctively made me drool, and not only I had this reaction.
As if it were the trigger, I also took the spoon and also cut my omelet. That aromatic explosion was released again and I noticed that inside there was a red risotto4For more information click here that seemed to shine as if I had opened a casket of rubies.
Almost as if my hand did not obey me, I filled the spoon with the dish and when I brought it to my mouth, I felt an explosion of taste inside my palate. Every single ingredient was in perfect harmony and tasted so good that I felt like I was going to pass out at any moment
I forgot that Graeval excels at surprising its customers.
Well thanks for the ride I'll be dropping this series now I honestly cant read anymore of Serenity's BS the fact that she still can't understand that she loved the MC all this time as a man and not as a brother is just downright frustrating the fact that she just believed the lie Alphy told her so easily and thinks she loves Jack is disgusting. Feelings like that do not disappear this quickly her entire being makes me want to vomit.
What if his feelings were really those? She could really have got her head right.
@Emperor93 If her head was right she would have divorced Jack and tried to end up with the MC or at the very least find a decent man and no Jack does not count as he's a immature naive idiot. If her head was on right she would have closely examined the feelings within herself realized she doesn't truly love Jack and tried to find her own happiness after divorcing him.
@Animelovernumber1 well... I think that her feelings towards the hero are genuine but... everyone can see it as they like.
@Emperor93 I don't think she truly does if she did Serenity would never have tried aiming at the MC in the first place after her marriage that thought would never have even crossed her mind. I wouldn't have had a problem with her if she had actually choose a decent man to be with but no she choose a man child. Rather serenity herself doesn't understand love in the first place had she did I don't think she would have chosen Jack. The very fact that she helped slaughter so many innocent demons is also annoying it's even worse knowing they got away with what they did and nothing happened to her or the hero party she doesn't even regret her actions or try to at least make it up to them through life long sacrifice after hearing what the MC said wether it be her actions personality thoughts or feelings I am disgusted by her entire being. I honestly can't continue reading this story knowing her and the "hero" party got a happy ending that none of them deserve.
@Animelovernumber1 well... we'll see
@Emperor93 The “hero” party committed mass genocide of the demon race and got off Scott free on the prejudice that all demons were evil and even after finding out the truth they aren’t doing anything to help the demons who were wrongfully slaughtered and oppressed instead they are living in a castle surrounded by luxury none of them deserve. The fact that Serenity choose a man who was naive and stupid enough to do that is more than enough of a reason for me to despise her to my very core even more so that she had a hand in all the atrocities her party committed. Just how many families have they ruined? How many children are now parentless become of them? And now because they “defeated” the demon lord a lust demon is raping the woman of all races. He’ll she even had a hand is trying to attack the MC and his wife out of jealously the fact that the MC can accept her as a sister figure after all that is just disappointing she’s a disgusting individual through and through and unless she and the rest of the “hero” party are put through unspeakable horrors and atone for their sins in the future I honestly can’t bring myself to read any further.
@Animelovernumber1 I'm proud of you. Ever since I started reading novels and manga this is what always (95% of cases) happened I brought it back here for this very reason: to condemn it.
We know well that there is not a single point of view and for this reason we condemn this horror dictated by politics, by religion and by history written by the victors with the blood of the dead whether they are innocent or guilty.
But remember that there is a thing called karma.
@Emperor93 If Karma comes into play here then their deaths would not be anywhere near enough to pay for the massive amount of negative karma each of them have they would have to endure a lifetimes amount of suffering over the courses of multiple reincarnations to even remotely pay off the massive amount of karma they have for their sins of causing the amount of physical and emotional pain they have caused millions of demons and because their actions resulted in even more pain and suffering to innocent people and continues to cause more they might as well be damned for a eternity.
@Emperor93
The "hero" party committed mass genocide of the demon race and got off Scott free on the prejudice that all demons were evil and even after finding out the truth they aren't doing anything to help the demons who were wrongfully slaughtered and oppressed instead they are living in a castle surrounded by luxury none of them deserve. The fact that Serenity choose a man who was naive and stupid enough to do that is more than enough of a reason for me to despise her to my very core even more so that she had a hand in all the atrocities her party committed. Just how many families have they ruined? How many children are now parentless become of them? And now because they "defeated" the demon lord a lust demon is raping the woman of all races. He'll she even had a hand is trying to attack the MC and his wife out of jealously the fact that the MC can accept her as a sister figure after all that is just disappointing she's a disgusting individual through and through and unless she and the rest of the "hero" party are put through unspeakable horrors and atone for their sins in the future I honestly can't bring myself to read any further.
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I totally agree with his statement , this story started out Exelentrty and now its simple BULSHYT,everybody acts happy like nothing happened Mc forgives everyone and don't even start me whit Lilith,Sory whats hapening in the last 10 chapter I pure BULSHIT.
Ever since I started reading novels and manga this is what always (95% of cases) happened I brought it back here for this very reason: to condemn it.
And after u sad that u just did it actually the sam thing what those idiotic Japanese Mc dose, ah u made genocide on my people nice job here's the food!u just need to ad harem and u can rename it to one of those japanis sh*t novels
@Animelovernumber1 Amen tho that !
@Lord_Grimm Woah... This chapter is realy hated.
Anyway, I do not take back what I wrote and I am not going to argue because what you say is true.
But tell me, when hasn't such a thing ever happened in our world?
While it's true that it's a story I have power over, I'm trying to the best of my ability to think about how we'd react if we were in that world. In OURS TIME, I first of all would condemn it. But the story is set in a world similar to the Middle Ages and at the time life had no value. Think about it.
The atrocities done during the Crusades? or the various wars that took place in the Middle Ages? The inquisition and the hunt of the witch? At that time no one said anything and only we "modern" men do it.
I believe that taking into account the historical context is ALSO important.
@Emperor93 It is not just this chapter dissatisfaction has been building up in a good portion of your readers about the how the hero party got away with what they did and it's not exactly like we can bring ourselves to like them as individuals either they are racist naive genocidal murders who even tried to off the MC's wife and believed she brainwashed him because she was a demon. It doesn't exactly help how crazy the saint has been portrayed as and how much of a bit*h she has been in recent chapters it's made worse by the fact that you unrealistically made her give up on those feelings she has for the MC those don't magically vanish overnight. Your right in the past life was nowhere near as valuable as it is now but as modern people we see the "hero" party's actions are unforgivable and as modern people we will condemn them and wish for their suffering. Unless you give them the fates they deserve and karma gets its due no one will be satisfied with the way things turned out how could we? In human history the only individual who comes close to how bad the "hero" party was is Hitler and the fact that a bunch of people as bad as him got off is just frustrating beyond belief.
@Emperor93 yes and i totally agree whit u on that which is refreshing because i also look at that way.tat this is a fantasy sad in the midle age.but let me clarify somethings on youre statment wher u ar wrong.
1. Human life did not have value until the end of WWI.It was then that even soldiers' life become valuable.
2. in those times MOST of the people did not say or do nothing because of brainwashing by the church or country and lack of education, yet they're still where people ho in the shadows try to change or help those people exp in the witch hunts. Yet we talking about a fantasy world where one person has the power of the country and to change every thing expl Mc , Hero.
# Both of them are from a more advanced era. Hero, i don't know what to say about him ,from the modern era and ACTUALLY and still going thro whit genocide and not connecting the dots that demons are still intelligent beings and just slather them there is no rational excuse for his behavior.ANd yet he is happily dining whit his harem
MC I get it he wants a peaceful life, and he actually understood that what they did is wrong and even try to reason whit them , and after that event is where u ruined an exceptional mc.Now ve have an mc that become the kingdom dogs all in the name of peaceful life ,become sisters whit one of those people hou made the genocide, act like father whit the godes hou orchestrated all of this and making his wife the person that lost the most in the war to serve them diner whit a happy smile.and al from an MC that is from an advanced ERA.
And Lilith no logic,no emotions nothing.
3.Now tell me when in our history after a genocide did the losing party happily accepted defeat and started to serve food to the people that killed soory massacred her kin.
Im not saying he should kill the heroes,I'm not saying she should go on vengeance, im not saying they take over the world but taht she dose not have a spec of hatred in her and whit strate face happily chatting whit them , that he become sister whit her even knowing what she did to her wifes race and happily serving them food and be the dog of the kingdom. sorry dude, there is not many people in the past or present that will do that except if they are a pure saint.
And u ask why this chapter is hated? After the hero /mc showdown u disregarded every human emotion and make the mc/fm purely make desition on rationality not a spec of human emotion in there desition toward the herose,the nation entc
I would not be suprised in the next chapter u make mc and fm fight the demon race whit the hero in name of the peacful life.
i dont know if i put my self in there shous and i am an open mindet person i would not be able to serv them dishes whit a happy face and make marry whit them
@Emperor93 Read Lord Grim’s latest comment he brings up a lot of good points
@Animelovernumber1 The only reason I'm not answering the question it is not because I feel offended (as I have already told you, I love to discuss with you readers to understand what is going and what is wrong), but is to avoid possible spoilers, so you can only find the answer to the question by reading. But as I said, you are not wrong about the points you have outlined. Also because my story is continuing to create little by little because I think about it, I read the readers points, define details in my mind and so on. To make you understand, some points of what will happen in the next chapters I have already simulated at least 20 times in the last two weeks.
And I am still doing it because your comments are always sources of doubt and understanding. I assure you I've never had so much fun writing a story before because I finally have readers who say what they think.
So thanks to all of you!
it's made worse by the fact that you unrealistically made her give up on those feelings she has for the MC those don't magically vanish overnight.
Now I understand!
However, she hasn't quite given up on her feelings but she... kept them at bay? we can put it like this... I think. Let's say it's just a temporary fix for her and then it's been a couple of months (I think) since that fact. So she had time to think about it and maybe she came to the fact that in reality it is brotherly love.
But even though she truly understands that she loves Graeval more than Jack, it's clear now that he only has one person in his heart. Carpe Diem. And she would realize too late that she has lost her moment.
It's cruel, but it happen.
@Emperor93 I’m kinda curious but when she sees him with more than one lover will she try again? Personally I don’t think she or the hero party deserve happiness and deserve a fate far worse than death as I have stated earlier they are worse than hitler himself so I’d rather not see such a disgusting bit*h get any form of happiness and that she should get her due for example being raped and broken by the lust demon that’s nowhere near enough to atone for the suffering she caused but it’s a good start. You might think that’s overly cruel but compared to what she’s done it’s nothing in comparison to the amount of suffering she’s responsible for. Well whatever you do I hope they go through unparalleled suffering as karma for their sins although I won’t know what will happen because I dropped this series. As I said earlier Lord Grimm brought up a lot of good points in his last comment and you should read it
@Lord_Grimm Yeah... this are good points.
Some of these in fact could find an explanation in the chapter I am writing also because I remind you that I try to identify myself to the best of my abilities in the characters I create.
But to answer points that I can confidently answer and above all are not a source of spoilers...
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# Both of them are from a more advanced era. Hero, i don't know what to say about him ,from the modern era and ACTUALLY and still going thro whit genocide and not connecting the dots that demons are still intelligent beings and just slather them there is no rational excuse for his behavior.ANd yet he is happily dining whit his harem
That's true, but I never wrote that it was they who specifically killed civilian demons. With this sentence:
“Just because they are demons do you think they are just a concentrate of evil? Don't screw with me. If you really have to talk about guilt, you have not only killed soldiers, but also old people, women and children just for their race." every word of Graeval was tinged with disgust “You are not heroes. You are just criminals, murderers. So I tell you again: don't put YOUR sins on MY wife just because she is a demon and you don't want to look in the mirror."
In this it can be interpreted that he is not accusing them because they directly carried out the genocide with their own hands, but that the simple fact that they did nothing to prevent it makes them just as guilty. In fact, the others could not reply to his statement or am I wrong?
2.
act like father whit the godes hou orchestrated all of this
If he could educate her properly and ensure that she can lead the world she has to manage better, maybe she could prevent wars like those between humans and demons, right?
Furthermore, it must be said that it is true that the church has declared that "crusade" against the demons, but Aphy has never claimed to want it, or has never spoken about it. Even when she first spoke to Lilith the first time she didn't feel any kind of antagonism towards her (apart from the small detail that she is Graeval's wife). She simply went with the flow instead of doing something to put a peaceful end to that war, albeit remaining within the rule of the gods where they cannot interfere too much with the course of their world.
Furthermore, the rule of the Gods that she mentioned to Graeval in chapter 21, does not imply that it cannot influence a large-scale event such as a war anyway and the prime example was the appointment of Sarity as Santa and the summoning Jack as a hero.
3.
that he become sister whit her even knowing what she did to her wifes race
Have you never had a childhood friend that you still see today and that you consider as a brother or a sister? The same principle is true for them, at least from Graeval's point of view. In fact, he stated this in chapter 4 with the following statement:
"Sarity is the Saint and above all a childhood friend of mine, I PROBABLY CONSIDER HER A LITTLE SISTER."
Also, he doesn't care about demons, but only of his wife Lilith.
4.
MC I get it he wants a peaceful life, and he actually understood that what they did is wrong and even try to reason whit them , and after that event is where u ruined an exceptional mc.Now ve have an mc that become the kingdom dogs all in the name of peaceful life ,become sisters whit one of those people hou made the genocide, act like father whit the godes hou orchestrated all of this and making his wife the person that lost the most in the war to serve them diner whit a happy smile.and al from an MC that is from an advanced ERA. And Lilith no logic,no emotions nothing.
I cannot answer these because I risk spoilers.
@Animelovernumber1 I see. That's a pity
@Animelovernumber1 I have no problem if she dies, yet in my opinion, no women deserve that kinda fate. Torture her, kill her destroy her emotionally I have no problem but rap and child abuse I can`t stand, yes she deserves a lot of bad things but i can't believe I'm saying this she is also the victim of that era, at the age of 12 she was taken, brainwash and later on she meats the idiot Hero. All her life she only knows that demons are evil and need to be eradicated. Now her comes the spin why she deserves all of that. At the showdown, Mc clearly tries to open her mind to the thrut yet she does not listen(if she did i would be happy to see her on an agonizing and not happy redemption pat ) this goes for al the harem members maybe except the princes. Yes, i don't like here since the beginning when she showed up at the mc al high and mighty like a bit*h to say yeh don't dream about me. But the person that deserves most of the punishment is the hero i think i don't need to say why.
@Emperor93 Once last question does the hero party suffer through pain worse than death like they deserve? I’m not asking what their fates are merely if they will truly get what’s coming to them for the nearly unparalleled suffering they have caused other people. If you feel like this final question is too much of a spoiler create a spoiler box for the comment and answer me there or whenever the answer to my question comes in a later chapter write back to me then.
@Lord_Grimm on You're nb 1 statement if I recall they were the reason that the demons lost so sorry there is no excuse for them ,i can role whit that they kill no civilians but Indirectly they ARe the reason.
nb2 the godes summoned the hero to kill the demon lord so maybe i was wrong about the beginning but she is directly involved so my statement there stays.plus she 2 times wanted to kill here.
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Also, he doesn't care about demons, but only of his wife Lilith
Yet she was also one of them that wanted to kill her multiple times and if mc was not strong enough she would try even now,as i say you make mc and fm make rational decision without a single negative emotion towards the hero party. And only in this last chapter u made here think she loves him like a brother it's just unrealistic, and yes i have childhood friend im still good whit also had one for hom i sad f.of
4.sory the part whit the diner and everything is just unrealistic, frustrating so much that i can explain and actually i can't think of a way to redeem this chapter
@Lord_Grimm Regardless of the fact that she was sort of brainwashed into believing that crap fact of the matter is she did it and she needs to pay in any way shape or form she can. Normally I’d agree that most woman don’t deserve to be raped but there are some who do deserve that fate the same applies for the rest of the loser wife group hell because of them multiple woman are being raped while they are living in luxury they didn’t deserve all because they “defeated” the demon king in fact them being raped worn even amount to a fraction of the pain and suffering they caused others.
@Animelovernumber1
Once last question does the hero party suffer through pain worse than death like they deserve?
Even if it was a spoiler I wouldn't answer you anyway. Not because I don't want to, but because if you are really interested in what happens to them, it would be a CORRECT ATTITUDE not so much towards me, but more TOWARDS OTHERS that you continue to read.
I find this question offensive.
@Lord_Grimm
4.sory the part whit the diner and everything is just unrealistic, frustrating so much that i can explain and actually i can't think of a way to redeem this chapter
Don't worry
@Emperor93 Oh well I guess I'll never find out see ya if I ever notice you publish a different series later on bye.
@Animelovernumber1 If the author redeems the last 10 chapters and finishes the story I'm gonna send u a message about what happens to them XD
But whit the rape I have to disagree whit u. as I sad ANY kinda punishment I can stand behind but rape i don't
@Emperor93 Well hope so, rely hope
@Lord_Grimm Thanks
@Lord_Grimm
Yet she was also one of them that wanted to kill her multiple times and if mc was not strong enough she would try even now,as i say you make mc and fm make rational decision without a single negative emotion towards the hero party.
On this point Aphy has clearly understood that it is not convenient for her to make other attempts on Lilith's life (whether directly or indirectly) after the clash with the hero. After all, Graeval is an existence that still scares even the gods. This is found proof in these two statements (chapter 12):
"Just out of curiosity, why don't you tell the Hero through your Saint to finish the job?"
"*Gulp*..." Am I wrong or did she just swallow? "The point is... it could backfire."
"......What do you mean?"
"Jack's sincere nature would lead him to tell him that I was the one who informed him." Aphy resumed dragging herself to my feet and then clinging to my skirt "He'd end up hating me and might go as far as finding a way to claim my head!"
"Now you are exaggerating..."
"You more than anyone know how powerful he is!! And for some reason he became even more so. He might be able to fight on par with me without many problems!"
I don't understand what all this grind is for, but she should know the solution well. After all, she summoned, regardless of the consequences, that Hero on purpose to kill her. I don't understand where the problem lies......... *brrr* I just felt a shiver running down my spine…
Also, let us remember his statement in chapter 12:
"I don't want him to hate me! I want him to love me!! I WANT HIM TO MARRY ME!!!"
Definitive reason why she doesn't want to piss off Graeval
@Lord_Grimm
@Lord_Grimm
4.sory the part whit the diner and everything is just unrealistic, frustrating so much that i can explain and actually i can't think of a way to redeem this chapter
Don't worry
In the sense you could let off steam without many problems.
@Emperor93 In the sense you could let off steam without many problems.
uh sorry i don't really understand the last sentence
And also
"Hmpf." I turned around "Why didn't you intervene earlier to stop these assholes?"
"Because we cannot directly interfere with what happens in the world we manage." she began by separating and standing in front of me "I realized what was happening when you had already started fighting."
"...... And the real reason?"
"I wouldn't have minded comforting you during the mourn- Ouch! Ouch!! Ouch!!!
She cant lie i think u sad that ,yet se did not interfer becouse she wanted her dead its says here,maybe she realy could not or did not want but ..... still it`s a good idea that she stay buy the couple side to mature but the execution of it somhouw feels of .from all the character in the last 10 chapters she is the least irritating actually shes a comic relief so I can get behind here
@Lord_Grimm
4.sory the part whit the diner and everything is just unrealistic, frustrating so much that i can explain and actually i can't think of a way to redeem this chapter
This statement wasn't a way to release your frustration for this chapter?
In the sense you could let off steam without many problems.
Whit this statement I wanted to tell you that you could release it without problems
@Lord_Grimm
She cant lie i think u sad that ,yet se did not interfer becouse she wanted her dead its says here,maybe she realy could not or did not want but.....
True. But this happened after she found out that Lilith was the Demon Queen. She did not know before as he points out in chapter 22
"But if you were aware of the truth... why didn't you ever mention it?" Jack asked. "If you had said so, the fight last night would never have taken place."
"W-well~..." she began scratching her cheek lightly "In normal situations I would have identified her immediately~. But Graeval is a master of hiding things with his powers and I was only able to ascertain her identity as a Demon Queen three months ago when Sarity was kidnapped~"
still it`s a good idea that she stay buy the couple side to mature but the execution of it and the rest i think its por
I understand now.So the problem is how it came about. I will try to improve a little on the point of the succession of events.
@Emperor93 ah ok thx it's late my brain stopt working ,yeh actually my frustration will go away when u redeem that chapter which i have high hopes, the first 20 something chapter was brilliant
@Lord_Grimm Now I'm on fire! I'll do anything to redeem it or die doing it!
@Emperor93 Thanku for listening to us and our frustration,i know its not easy
She cant lie i think u sad that ,yet se did not interfer becouse she wanted her dead its says here,maybe she realy could not or did not want but.....
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True. But this happened after she found out that Lilith was the Demon Queen. She did not know before as he points out in chapter 22
"But if you were aware of the truth... why didn't you ever mention it?" Jack asked. "If you had said so, the fight last night would never have taken place."
"W-well~..." she began scratching her cheek lightly "In normal situations I would have identified her immediately~. But Graeval is a master of hiding things with his powers and I was only able to ascertain her identity as a Demon Queen three months ago when Sarity was kidnapped~"
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still it`s a good idea that she stay buy the couple side to mature but the execution of it and the rest i think its por
I understand now.Blob HmmSo the problem is how it came about. I will try to improve a little on the point of the succession of events.
She know for 3 montsh,know heros where there and sheas not stuped,she could prvent it.But yeh i think i can role whit this ....
Now i cant wait for next chapter
yea i have head shake when i saw this :D idk if it would be good now if they would be together... she looks like mental ill :D but what i hate how autor trick us with that harem tag... for me when i see harem tag that i always know that MC gonna get harem not side character... idk if is right give this importat tag here becouse side character have harem... he is side character who care about him?
@Pokoj11 But the question is... is harem really just for a side character? Harem really means that all the women around the main character love him? Who knows? I don’t know either.