I really enjoy this story. Most of the characters are well written, have some depth and are consistent. The author has managed to write a protagonist that is able to be ruthless and able to show empathy, depending on the situation. It isn't the usual one dimensional protagonist usually seen in these kind of stories.

The power the protagonist has is not well explained, but I think that works fairly well for the story since it isn't a "LitRPG" story and it lets the author leeway in letting the protagonist pull out over powered abilities left and right, but it still feels ok and it doesn't feel as if it's plot armor.

The author is not a native English speaker and it shows now and then, but I've never had to stop and try to guess what the author meant, which can happen sometimes with stories written by non-native English speakers. The story and the language still flows pretty well despite some of the issues with the language.

I personally do not enjoy comedic relief characters, so I rather dislike Aphy, we have seen some personality growth for the character in later chapters, so it might end up ok.

All in all I hope the writer gets over his writers block, because I personally want to see where this story ends up!

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a_normal_reader

Status: c31

Oct 28, 2020

I like, from the aspect of world building, to the personality of the characters and also the MC himself

Though I kinda wish author to bash the saint feeling much more and make her heart broken and give the MC harem, since the candidate is there after all, but hey it's all my wish

And also thank you for the novel author

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JeffBezos

Status: vol. 3 – chapter 30

Oct 22, 2020

Overall a great story, so far there are some solid characters, interesting subversions of trope and ideas I have not seen in an isekai.

However, some grammatical flaws (i.e. Verbiage and pronouns) does adversely impact the flow of the story as well as cliche/unoriginal plot devices (i.e. Foolish goddess, envy/lack of reasoning, minor plot holes). Although these tropes are ok to use, they often lack any reasoning behind it and are usually for a short term gag or for the convenience of the plot. The lack of character of some characters is frustrating as well, however, I am now nitpicking. In summation, this story has incredible potential and regardless of a possible harem, I am content with the direction of the story and mc/heroine.

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LordMentat

Status: vol. 1 – chapter 11

Jul 26, 2021

A good fic, but it REALLY needs a beta reader, or a pass through Grammerly, or something. The errors break the flow and can ruin the mood when they pop up.

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mr_Tomato

Status: c21

Oct 18, 2020

I'd probably rate this 3-4 stars. The story is interesting and is overall written reasonably well, however there are quite a few parts which don't flow, which is detrimental to the story.

These include the mixing up of gender pronouns and the liberal use of odd names for minor characters create some confusion trying to piece the setting of the scene.

I would strongly recommend fixing the pronouns.

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Avenger1560

Status: c31

Feb 22, 2021

This book is really good in general, and I really like how the characters are actually written with depth, unlike some that are just flat and 2D. Also, the plot and the emotions that are exhibited by the characters are great. Definitely give this book a try. Only thing to complain about is the author updates only once a week : (

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