Lavalivarus PoV
I have a game I like to play. Its a little distraction I do when I'm faced with the mundane. Looking through my hosts memories, it seems human children sometimes played a similar game in the slums. The goal is to keep a bag in the air with no arms allowed. Usually the children would form a circle and try to pass the bag to every member of the game, however I play alone so I just try to go for a high-score. It takes a surprisingly high amount of dexterity to keep the game going using only your legs, head, and chest, but its nice to do something fun on the side while your hands are busy. An icicle forms at my finger tips and shoots out skewering a rat as I hit the bag higher than usual for a sec. Well I say bag, but I don't play using a bag. No, making or looting a bag filled with beans and the like would take to much time for just a slightly less messy experience. What I use is a human head. The one I'm using right now came from the leader of the thief's guild. Sure blood will spill everywhere after hitting it but I like, I'm getting blood everywhere already. Whats a few more splatters.
I actually wanted to try playing with more people like in my host's memories, but when I walked up to them they started screaming and running away. Then the guards got involved and they started asking questions like 'Why are you covered in blood?' And 'who's head is that?' And 'Why are you dressed like a prostitute?'. Of course, I'm not a barbarian so I obliged and answered honestly despite that last rude comment. (Tastes these days have really gone south. Sure my clothes are a little riské, but these kinds of clothes were worn by succubi all the time back in the day. Well they seem to have died out while I was sealed so maybe that had something to do with it.) I told them every detail about how I systematically hunted down and killed everyone inside the theif's guild main hideout. Starting with some thugs in the alleyway to the head honcho and his honor guard. I guess because its in a guards nature to be the fun police, they started saying stuff 'please come with us' and 'you're under arrest' and well I'm not going with some random ass guards that can't even take out a measly theif's guild. Who do they think they are? I gotta cull all life on Earth, I can't just let myself get captured.
One thing lead to another and I end up committing a massacre on the guards. I mean really, they should be THANKING me. Did they really expect to be able to deal with the rampant crime rate in this town with that level of skill? NOOOO, instead they call ME the bad guy. I'm cleaning the streets and this is how they repay me?
The commotion of the fight also happened to alert a lot of citizens so they started to run away like the cowards they are, because of FUCKING course their to much of pussies to fight me. All these civilians are the same no courage. At least have some pride in death and come charging at me. At least TRY to get in a hit in. Having to go through the tedium of slaughtering hordes of people is a pain in the ass. Sure it starts out fun but quickly becomes boring. Its all the same 'why are you doing this?' 'mercy, please! At least spare my child' bullshit. That last one got their kid's head bashed in. The despair on their face at that moment . . . Ahhhhhhh it felt goooooood.
I aim a someone who thought they were smart hiding in a trash can. Might've worked if you didn't decide to peek out. Honestly what's with this town and hiding? The amount of ambushes I've encountered in the theif's guild hideout is ridiculous. I get they like sticking to the shadows because they're petty theives, but like there has to be a limit right? Gotta draw those fancy daggers at some point. What are they just for decoration or something? Actually that might be the case considering how ornate they tended to be. Most warriors tend to prefer simple weapons because they often face wear and tear from fierce battles. Only the most skilled fighters or people who don't fight at all can keep ornate stuff like myself pretty.
Oh and how pretty I am. This host and I got me fitted out with a gold trim and matte black finish. A real beautiful job in my completely unbiased opinion. Really puts the fear of me into the hearts of my enemies.
While I was distracted by thinking of my beautiful new paint job, I ended up dropping my head ending the game. Dammit, that was gonna be a new personal record too... It also decided to roll into an alleyway, away from the bulk of the fleeing populace. This is really killing my vibe. Well not like it was that great to begin with. Today has been pretty annoying so far.
Going into the alley to pick up my head, I see a brawny man beating a child. Probably for stealing something, considering the sausage links on the ground. His back is turned so he hasn't noticed me. That means I can finally do something flashy. I toss up the head, bounce it off my ankle, hit with my knee so its at eye level. Finally I headbutt it so hard that when it hits the man's head both heads go splat. Man, I love doing stuff like that. Really puts the F-U-N in slaughter. Honestly it was worth wasting the ball on that. Not like it matters much anyway, there's another head right in front of me waiting to be claimed huhuhu.
However I am given pause, because instead of the usual responses I tend to get in these types of scenarios I got,
"You don't wish me well, do you lady?"
There's a strong look of defiance in his eyes. A look I like just as much if not more than despair.
"You're right. Although I gotta ask how you caught on so fast."
"Your eyes. I don't like your eyes."
"Hahahahaha"
I couldn't help but laugh. This kid's got spunk. I like that.
"Oh? But I sure do like your eyes. Tell you what, take this knife. I'll let you target anywhere on my body. If I die, I'll let you live."
I conjure an iron knife and give it to him. In a matter of seconds he's going for the throat. The blade sinks in deep. Really deep. Deep enough to pierce completely through. My head falls off, but as it falls I use it as my next ball and land it back on my neck. I cough up some blood and the wound completely heals in seconds.
"Oh to bad. Better luck next time . . . Actually there probably won't be a next time huh? Oh well."
His face grows fierce.
"You deceived me! With regeneration like that I couldn't kill you no matter what."
"Oh don't be like that. It was totally possible to stop the regen there. You just had to cut off my sword arm."
His face distorts and he readies his knife preparing for impact. Its a little amateurish but it seems like he could have some talent waiting to bloom. I'm. . . Getting second thoughts.
"Ok I guess I was being a little unfair there. That was a kinda deceptive of me. If I killed you here I'd be no better than those theif's guild cunts. Here's the deal, you're around ten right?"
After a moment of hesitation he nods.
"8 years. I'll start to hunt you down after 8 years. In that time grow strong. Give me a good fight and don't disappoint when the time comes."
His eyes grow wide in shock as he freezes up.
"Well? What are you waiting for? Move."
He runs off into the darkness of the alley. It then occurs to me that I now lack a ball or sack to play with, fuck. Well I can always just kill someone else. I think its worth keeping that kid alive. I think I've met my quota for small fry murdered today. Sometimes its better to let prey escape so they can ripen. Its about quality over quantity for me.
As I step out of the alley and into the street, I hear a distant scream. It seems to be coming closer, weird.
yeah surreal stuff can be real hit or miss
Thanks for the chapter.
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I think you’re right. Let’s close this arc. This is getting boring and I don’t want anyone leaving your story behind because I think you really can do well.
This POV is a bit of a refresher, we also know that the sword possesses the heroine and so she has no real control over herself. Huh. Still, I’m excited to see how this arc is going to end.
Lavalivarus doesn't necessarily always have control of the heroine. They tend to trade off control over the body through mutual agreement, I just didn't show it off well here.
Sure Lavalivarus can completely control the host and force them to do stuff, but he likes their host. The sword wouldn't have accepted them as their wielder if he disliked them. Generally speak Lavalivarus is better at combat so he's pretty much always given control when fighting and the two are pretty much always fighting. Remember this is the game's Sky not the reincarnator Sky. The host is actively supporting Lavalivarus's actions and allowing free access to her memories
@Afewconcepts65 Huh. Well, luckily, that sword was destroyed by the dragon in MC's world, so no maniacs will do harm with those parasites. Thanks for the insight. I appreciate it. And, like you said before, when you will be pretty far in the story or when you finished it, you'll just rework this part here. So it's fine for the time being.
I've gotta ask though because I don't think I understand very much here. Why did you create this arc in the first place? If you wanted to show us something and/or give some info for the world-building, can you tell me/us what? What are the character developments? No offence here, but I feel like we could have done without this arc. Some of the things shown here could have been shown in some other way, or the same, later on in the story.
Oh, and I'm sorry if you realised that sooner and I'm just making you feel worse. I'm not trying to do that, at all. I think you're story is amazing and the concept too. So far, you did an amazing job. Just, this arc was a mistake. But at least you know what not to do later on.
I hope I didn't make you feel too bad. I'm still excited to see where your story will go. I'm not leaving this easily.
@Clayton4956 There was a multitude of reasons for this arc,
First off I just want to say that I love surreal stuff. The intermission chapters (specifically the first and last) were my favorite to write. I kinda wanted a whole arc that really got that same crazy out there vibe.
I was running off the philosophy of a good story explores something. I figured it would be ok to add an arc that felt disconnected from the rest of the world if it really explored some characters psyche. This arc is litterally a bunch of horrific tribulations for Sam to over come. I wanted to solidify Sam as a character because I feel I didn't have a clear vision for their personality. It also would've gotten them a potential ally to help defeat the wire leviathan at the very end of the arc.
As for this round in particular, I kinda felt like I wasted Lavalivarus by nuking him before he can act, so I'm basically trying to have my cake and eat it too. I have the funny moment of nuking the sword from orbit and the epic clash with the cursed sword and it wielder. I also felt it was a good time to introduce the organization's elite because that would realistically be the only help Sam could get. I left most of the organization vague up to this point because I didn't have a good idea of who or what the members would be. This round has really fleshed out the organization's roster and is (in my opinion) a pretty great introduction to them, but it came at the expense of the pacing of this round.
@Afewconcepts65 Ok. I see why this arc was important now. I agree with you for the most part. To have Sam be a more solid character, I think that was done well. I don't see who was the potential ally yet though. For Lavalivarus, his potential in the main story was destroyed yes. So it's understandable to have him play something important here and have him go with a bang. For the organisation though, I don't really feel like the group was fleshed out. They feel more like mob characters with a bit of personality. It feels like they aren't important you know? After the rework, I hope you flesh the organisation more, because here, in this arc, everything is a bit of this, a bit of that, but you don't focus too much and on the different characters and I feel like they are useless. At least that what it feels like for me. I think..... (I'm gonna need to reread to have a better opinion here.)
At least, I see what you wanted to do with this arc. I think you managed to pass those objectives.