She took me to the room where she came from, as I entered, I felt gazes falling on me.
‘Oh, this is going to be wonderful.’ I thought sarcastically.
“So, kiddos let me introduce you to our new resident.” Amnestia shouted as cheerily as before.
“So, what is your name?” she asked me.
“Liliana, but Lily for short. Nice to meet you.” I told her.
“My name, as you probably heard, is Amnestia, now you kiddos introduce yourselves.” She commanded the kids.
There looked to be around eleven kids with them being six girls and five boys.
Then a kid that looked to be around seven years old stood up.
“M… M… My name is Mateo.” He said his name.
Then another kid stood up, this time a girl.
“My name is Layla! Nice to meet you!” A girl around nine years old stood up.
“Um… Um… My name is Elias.” A boy around nine years old stood up.
Then others introduced themselves they were like this.
Sofia was the oldest being thirteen years old, well now she wasn’t the oldest because I was fifteen.
Elijah was twelve years old, the oldest out of all boys.
Chloe was eleven.
Everett and Layla with Elias were nine years old.
Riley, Isla and Chloe were eight years old.
And lastly Mateo and Kai were seven years old. (A/N sorry if this confuses you because I myself was confused even more whilst trying to write this.)
That was what I deduced.
“Okay, as you heard, I will be staying here also. So nice to meet you.” I said hello to them since I will be staying here for the next three years.
“Big sister, are you an adventurer?” Kai asked me.
And got to say being called big sister, sure hits differently than being called big brother.
“Yes, though I just registered.” I told him.
“Oooh, then could you tell us a story about your adventures?” He asked me in his puppy eyes.
Got to say kid, that won’t work. But then everyone asked me lots of different questions.
“Big sister Lily why is your hair white?”
“Why are your eyes pink?”
“Do you use that sword?” they asked me all over each other.
“Now, now, please ask one question at a time.” I told them to stop.
“Now then, ask your questions.” I told the group of kids.
“Why is your hair white?” asked one girl whose name I already forgot.
“I was born like this.” I answered her.
“Then what about your eyes?”
“I was also born like this.”
“Then could you teach us how to use a sword?” One of the boys asked me.
“Nope.” I said.
“Why?” he asked again.
“Because a sword is made for the destruction of life, not for fun.” I answered him.
“Plus, I don’t think you can even lift it.” I smirked at him.
“Then give it to me and let’s see.” He told me.
“No.” I simply said.
“Why? Are you scared that I am stronger than you.” He tried to make fun of me. Which caused me to snap.
“Listen here you snot faced brat. This sword here costs more money than your whole goddamn life, so you better watch your mouth boy before you see this blade in your neck.” I told him and then looked at Amnestia.
“Amnestia, can I punch this brat in the face a couple times.”
“No, you cannot do that!” she responded a couple of seconds later.
“Okay kids! Time to go to bed! It’s getting late now, let me show you where you will be sleeping.” She showed me the way to the room, I will be sleeping with the other girls since there were not that many rooms. So I just undressed and went to sleep.
The next day.
As I woke up, everyone was still sleeping. So after dressing up, I went towards where the most noise was coming from.
The kitchen.
I went in to see two women working in the kitchen, Amnestia and someone else. They both saw me and Amnestia came over.
“Good morning, you know you could’ve slept a little bit longer.” Amnestia said to me.
“Yeah, good morning to you too, I just want to go to the guild now. So I planned to grab something to eat quickly and then go on my ways.” I told her.
“Ah then could you wake everyone up, we will be going together, because the adventurer guild helps us a bit with some meat from the hunts.” She told me.
“Ah, okay then.” I said and went on my ways to wake everyone up.
“Okay everyone, wake up.” I said to the girls as I opened the curtains. Then told Sofia I was going to wake up the boys.
“Okay, wake up you idiots.” I did the same thing as I did with the girls. Opened the curtains so that they could wake up more normally. But that one kid from yesterday who pissed me off, didn’t wake up. So, I decided to do one thing.
I grabbed one of the boys by the collar of their shirt, then hoisted him up in the air and threw him onto the one who didn’t wake up.
“Bufa!” he woke up.
“What did you do that for!?” he asked me.
“The first part is for pissing me off yesterday, and the second half for not waking up when you are being woken up.” I explained to him.
The oldest of the group said visibly scared.
“Girls are scary.”
“Then don’t make yourself their enemy.” I told him.
Then we went to the dining room and ate.
And after that we went to the guild.
You can't go give me shinobu vibes that book give people so much pain. I still want shinobu back
You're not the only one who wants her back.
Poor kid
*he's more than just a poor kid*
*you know it*
Wait, Shinobu from velvet abyss is... irrelevant, as the author said.
and you got that part right.
Leeson about the Girl 101, 1rst rule:
Don't piss them of.
yeah, I'm writing here from my own personal experience...
@green_ink lmao
Some kind of nonsense... MC for such behavior and attitude towards children would have been kicked out of the orphanage on the same day.
(A/N sorry if this confuses you because I myself was confused even more whilst trying to write this.)
I've read more confusing sh*t so it all good
Child abuse 101. Also I saw a lot of grammar mistakes...well I'll point them out if you want me to
Still waiting for those mistakes as you promised...
Because currently I'm on a chapter editing spree.
@green_ink I didn't realize you meant this one too. But alright, I'll do it since I got nothing else to do.
Sorry for the wait.
The ' ones are optional on whether or not you want to remove or change them.
“So, kiddos let me introduce you to our new resident.” Amnestia shouted as cheerily, like previously.
"So kiddos, let me introduce you to our new resident." Amnestia shouted as cheerily as before.
“Well, my name as you probably heard is Amnestia, and now kiddos introduce yourselves.” She commanded the kids.
"My name ',' as you have probably heard, is Amnestia. Now you kiddos introduce yourselves."
Then another kid stood up this time a girl.
Then another kid stood up, this time a girl.
Then others introduced themselves they were like this.
Note: I don't really get what you're trying to say here... do you mean when the others introduced themselves that they were similiar to the previous 3?
Then the others introduced themselves like this. (Or) The others were also like this as they introduced themselves.
Elijah was twelve years old, the oldest out of all boys.
Elijah was twelve years old, the oldest out of all the boys.
'Note: if you've already established what number it is, ex: year, decade, century, etc. You don't really need to add (insert whatever here) old anymore. Though that's my own opinion.'
Everett and Layla with Elias were nine-years old.
Everett, Layla and Elias were nine years old. (Why is there a - between nine and years?)
"Okay, as you heard I will be staying here also so nice to meet you.” I said hello to them because I will be staying here for the next three years.
"Okay, as you heard ',' I will also be staying here. So nice to meet you." I said hello to them since I will be staying here for the next three years.
“Oooh, then could you tell us a story about your adventures?” he asked me in his puppy eyes.
He asked me with his puppy eyes. (H is capital since "he" is the start of the sentence)
“Now, then ask your questions.” I told to the group of kids.
"Now then, ask your questions." I told the group of kids.
“Why are your hair white?” asked one girl whose name I already forgot.
"Why is your hair white?"
“Because a sword is made for destruction of life, not for fun.” I answered him.
"Because a sword is made for the destruction of life, not for fun."
“Why? Are you scared that I am stronger than you.” He tried to make fun of me. I snaped.
"Why? Are you scared that I am/I'm stronger than you?" He tried to make fun of me, which caused me to snap.
“Listen here, you, snot faced brat. This sword here in money costs more than your whole goddamn life, so you better watch your mouth boy before you will see this blade in your neck.” I told him and then looked at Amnestia.
"Listen here you snot faced brat. This sword here cost more money than your whole goddamn life, so you better watch your mouth before/or else you see this blade in your neck."
“Amnestia, can I punch this brat in the face a couple times.” I asked her.
"Amnestia ',' can I punch this brat in the face a couple of times?"
“Okay, kids! Time to go to beds! It’s getting late now, let me show you where you will be sleeping.” She showed me the way to the room, I will be sleeping with the other girls, since there were not that many rooms, so I just undressed and went to sleep.
"Okay kids! Time to go to bed! It's getting late now, let me show you where you will be sleeping." She showed me the way to the room, I will be sleeping with the other girls since there are not that many rooms. So I just undressed and went to sleep.
As I woke up everyone were still sleeping, so after dressing up I went towards where the most noise was coming from.
As I woke up, everyone was still sleeping. So after dressing up ',' I went towards where the most noise was coming from.
Note: Everyone is singular, not plural. Why? I dunno.
“Good morning, you know you could’ve slept a little bit longer.” Amnestia spoke to me.
Amnestia said to me.
“Yeah, good morning to you too, I just wanted to go to the guild now, so I planned to grab something to eat quickly and then go on my ways.” I told her.
Yeah, good morning to you too, I just want to go to the guild now.
“Ah, then okay.” I said and went on my ways to wake everyone up.
"Ah, okay then." I said and went on my way to wake everyone up.
The oldest out of the group, said visibly scared.
The oldest of the group said while visibly scared.
@green_ink
I feel like an English teacher correcting the mistakes of a student...
Ah. Might as well say this while I'm here. I'm only pointing out the mistakes that I find obvious. I'll leave the less subtle ones for you to find...or for whichever "Grammar Nazi" to.
And that my English is above average. *No, I'm not flexing.* But there are some that I'm unsure about and I'm too lazy to check. Most of it is correct though.
Most of it.
@Ambly Lessons on how not to flex.
My English is also at the level where I can do this shit, it's just that I've been playing too much genshin impact lately, pulling for those five stars, and it's come to the point where I just make these stupid mistakes and don't pay attention!!! Even though I proofread it at least ten times before uploading.
@Ambly That means you would be a good teacher then.
In my defence I will say this, most of the mistakes that contained (,) or capital letters, those were the fault of that goddamn autocorrect in Microsoft word (Will turn it off soon though if it keeps bothering me.) and me just being too lazy to read it again and adjust the words for the sentence, or my brain just going "everything's fine".
Also just for a little note my native language is so different from English that I need to either get myself into the 'English persona' so that I just sit down and write, or I need to get ready for another two agonizing hours of writing, because you feel you need to take that creativity load off, but you can't get into your 'writer' mode.
I feel like I spoke too much...
Anyways, see ya.
@green_ink so you've developed a gambling addiction. Nice. Also props to your device for handling that game, my laptop turns into a nuclear reaction when I play it.
@green_ink I would be a horrible teacher ngl.
Why didn't you turn that off the moment you realized it was messing with your sentences? Also, I'm pretty sure that 'My brain just going "everything's fine" 'thing is a bad habit.
While my native language isn't that different from English, it's easily like 7 times more complicated. My main language is English, but it's interchangeable (can be swapped/changed/replaced) with Thai.
Whenever I talk to you it feels like "you finally found someone as weird as you." Though that's probably just me.
@Ambly no, you're not the only one who thought that.
@Ambly When I first saw your comment I thought, 'I finally found someone as f*cked up as me'
@green_ink f*cked up people will notice each other and have a mutual understanding on sight I suppose
@Ambly most likely yes.