Serenity had deliberately overeaten at breakfast. He wanted to test how it worked. Unfortunately, he’d found that “overeating” wasn’t quite the same when it was more than he’d have eaten before - but not enough to fill the “pocket” of reserve energy for healing. He still felt hungry after breakfast, but wasn’t willing to go get more. He’d just have to fill the pocket up over the next few meals, then try overeating.
Rissa was strangely absent at breakfast, but when he arrived at the Magic Evaluation arena, she was already there listening to the lecture. He’d clearly been a bit late to breakfast after his talk with Kerr, and he settled down to listen. He wanted to hear all about the different Affinities they were teaching. Perhaps it would help with one of his Concepts, or even help open a Path he needed.
After the class, the two of them headed over to the Trial area. Even from a distance, they could hear the yelling.
“We had a plan, dickhead! If you want to set yourself up by cozying up to some asshole who puts a man in a coma for knocking on his door instead of helping out actual civilians, you go right ahead! Get your head out of your ass! Now, are you going to do what you know you should, or do I have to make you?”
Serenity called out to the man attempting to browbeat Lancaster. “Hey, what’s this now?”
The man turned. Serenity was pretty sure he hadn’t noticed the two of them approaching. “You! You’re that man who almost killed Macho!” The man was carrying a gun instead of the melee weapons everyone else carried. Which meant that he was either an idiot or he didn’t listen to advice. The evidence was pointing to both so far.
Serenity could already tell this wasn’t going anywhere good. Perhaps he could bring it out in the open. “I’ll have to do better next time.”
“You - “
Well, apparently the man did have one thing going for him. He must have practiced drawing and firing from the hip. Serenity only realized the other man wasn’t just reassuring himself by having his hand on the gun when he felt a burning pain in his lower abdomen.
Probably a good thing I don’t have intestines anymore.
Before Serenity could reach him, Lancaster had already tackled the man. One of the Trial instructors was there right after that.
“So, what now?” Lancaster seemed to have realized that he was out of his jurisdiction.
The instructor looked at Serenity. “You’re the injured party. Your choice.”
Serenity put his hand over the injury. His body was actively healing, and moving the bullet out through the entrance hole. It hadn’t hurt much until the bullet started trying to come out, but it wasn’t quite in the same orientation as how it had entered.
“No Trial for him today. In fact - his first Trial should be on the 4th day when it’s required. That’s a reasonable cost. Also, take his gun and destroy it. He needs to learn to not see all his answers there. At the least, another weapon will help him stay alive in the long run.”
The bullet had finally come far enough out that he could grip it and remove it the rest of the way.
After Lancaster got off the other man, he handed over the bullet. “Here, you can keep this. Remember that not everything can be killed with a gun.”
He’d run out of energy from breakfast expelling the bullet, and the wound was still bleeding rather notably. He closed his eyes and looked at the healing organ. He’d seen another input, so maybe if he triggered it -
He felt the healing energy rush through him, followed by a wave of weakness. It had completely drained his stamina, and seemed to have eaten quite a bit of the fat stored in his abdomen, but at least it had healed the injury. Quickly, too. He was pretty sure he was going to like this organ. Especially if he could get some food.
“Do you require healing?” That must be the instructor.
Serenity shakily stood up. “No, I’m fine, it’s just stamina loss for the healing.” He rubbed the drying blood off the site of the injury to see what looked like an old scar on his now much tauter abdomen.
Both Lancaster and the man who’d been yelling at him were staring at the healed injury.
“Lancaster, let’s get to the trial.”
They headed up the rest of the hill to the trial area.
“So, I’m assuming you two were partners before this started?”
“Yeah … we didn’t get along that well, but I hadn’t realized he was in favor of Macho. Helping civilians out was his idea. It sounded like a good idea.”
“It is. It just can’t be all we do. I wasn’t joking about those of us who want to be combat focused needing to get good.”
“If you need to get good - what hope is there for the rest of us?”
Serenity snorted. “I’m more or less a Tier 1 combatant. Yeah, that looks good against a Tier 0, but if you push, you can hit Tier 1 in a few weeks. Most people won’t hit tier 1 during this stage of the tutorial, but - that’s the difference between one every four days and one or two a day, especially if you solo any. It’s easy at first. By the end of Tier 0, everyone looks supernatural. Don’t worry about it.”
Serenity was essentially lying. Any Tier 1 that could come close to him would have had to repeat the Tier a number of times. That wasn’t the point, though. The point was that Lancaster couldn’t give up.
“Okay, you’ll probably need a proper healer. I’m a bit weird that way. But a proper healer wouldn’t have any trouble with that injury. Rissa’s looking at going into healing.” Serenity hoped that would help.
This weird ass long authors note is disconcerting. Better put that information in a "chapter 0" or similar. Info dumps always suck.
Not Chapter 0. It should be spread out throughout the story. In this case though I believe the author is putting it out there for feedback on it?
@RandomReviewer Goodness, this is from a long time ago.
Yeah, it was for several reasons. I think everything in it is somewhere in the story ... probably more than once.
@Lillene 18 chapters ahead of this and yes I believe the majority of it has already appeared. So I can imagine it gets beaten like a dead horse over the next 700.
@RandomReviewer I try not to make it too repetitive. It's a hard balance, since I also want people to not get too lost, even if they're reading a bunch of other series and reading this chapter by chapter as it comes out...
I can say that the later arcs are a lot less System-heavy. That's both good and bad, of course, depending on preferences.
I disagree entirely. There is nothing wrong with an author including an appendix to their story. This is especially true for stories with very complicated and/or technical world building components. You will find a lot of the older science fiction and fantasy authors, from decades past, did this. Lillene just put their first appendix as an author note.
With that said, if you don't care for them, don't read them. The reason the appendix is provided is merely for the curious. It isn't necessary for you to read it to follow the story.
My recommendation would for Lillene would be, see if you can't put it into the "Glossary Tab" on the main page of the story. If you can't, it is understandable. I have seen a few authors talk about that tab and discussed how problematic it is to use. I haven't written anything to this site myself, my stories are on Hentai Foundry, so I can't speak to it first hand.
@RandomReviewer The author has been spreading this information out through the last few chapters already. The note was just a condensation of all the information to provide clarity for the curious and/or confused.
@Maddhawk Thanks for the support. You're right about why it's here. I've tried very hard to make the note entirely unnecessary except as a reference/summary.
As for the Glossary Tab ... hmm. I'll have to think about it. I started this story on RoyalRoad, which doesn't (as far as I know) have an equivalent, so I didn't even think about it, I just ported it over as the note. As it is, I have a set of appendices for every 'book'. I don't know if that tab would support that or not ... I haven't even looked at it.