A Fairy Tale of Night and Day
by Anon2021
Content enticements/warnings:
Mythological/Fantasy, Theatrical
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A beautiful man walked upon the lake in the middle of the night with the clear sky and stars shining bright. The man was not a normal man, but a man with silver hair and light tan. One might ask how this man might be described, but beauty from his face bled down to his hide.
His name was Beluno the White, with his long silver hair flowing down the shoulder to his right. Glowing eyes glistened on his face as he walked softly on a lake, slowly treading for the blobbery fish’s sake. He longed for the sunny days where he would be with the one he could love, a great and handsome man of which others saw stand above.
To this end before he his mind would bend, he went to visit his mother in her grove, for the all light of day remained away, even if he ran and drove.
Beluno: “Mother, I ask, please grant me freedom as a dove, to see him whom I love. I beg of you for my heart is longing, and the tears cannot be held back against that needed belonging.”
The moon Goddess Luna the Silver looked upon her son. She placed her white silk hands upon his face, and kissed his forehead in slight haste. Beluno was not a warrior that was strong, nor was he a schemer that sang songs. He was a dreamer of the world at rest, and helped all mortals sleep their best.
Luna: “My precious son, my lovely son. Your mother cannot see the day, nor can the night where I walk go away. If you leave then I will not see you. If you leave then I cannot feel you. The Terse Believer has cursed me and me alone, and without you I have no place to call home. It breaks my heart when it is ‘no’ I must say when him you love is in the day. If you go to him I will be sad, as I gave birth to you without your dad.”
Beluno’s love was Soluna. The warrior of the sun, a man with golden colored hair all tied in a bun. A man who stood as his foil, with strength he could not have even with toil.
Luna: “I am sorry my son, but if I cannot go with you then I cannot let you go. Sola the Gold is not bound to the day as I am bound to night in this way. She is the light that cannot enter the night. Without the sun for that allows for visual sharpness, all the mortals would die in darkness.”
Beluno: “But mother, there are still the stars in the sky. Without your light the stars will not shy.”
Luna: “My son, my son. If I could leave the night I would enjoy the sunny days and dress you with new sleeves, but I was cursed by the Terse Believer and cannot leave.”
The night was ending and the rhyming slowed. The sun was rising while the farmers sowed.
Beluno did not argue further with his mother. His heart ached but his mind understood no solution was near. He walked once more upon the lake while dawn arrived. It was the only time he could see his lover before he had to leave with night.
Soluna was a taller man with broad shoulders and golden hair. His fiery orange eyes hid behind the golden curls of which some fell across his face but mostly to his left shoulder. His head looked as though it was lit with a burning flame as bright as daylight.
He saw Beluno, the prince of the night. The graceful figure entered his sight and for a last moment before the shine, he found there was only this last rhyme.
Soluna: “Beluno my love, have you asked your mother permission to come to the night?”
A soft breath escaped Beluno’s mouth as he spoke in saddened verses.
Beluno: “I have asked, but my mother could not allow me. Loneliness would drown her. The night is a time when the world sleeps and she mustn’t be the only awake.”
Soluna: “Beluno, my Beluno, do not cry. If you cannot come to the day then I shall ask my mother for a place in the night. First I will hunt and eat and will see my mother at midday. Do not cry for it will cause me anguish.”
Beluno: “Then I shall not cry, I shall wait and for your news while my eyes remain dry.”
There was a barrier between the day and night and neither could reach the other side. Without blessings from the goddesses of light and dark, it was between sunny days and starry nights that marked the void which pushed them apart.
Soluna nodded reaching his hand out, but could not touch the slender Beluno. The golden haired man clenched his fist as the night disappeared and the day became bright.
He took out his bow and walked into the forest. He hunted in the morning and skinned his game. He ate every morsel of meat from the bones, and then he trudged upon the ground leaving deep footprints into the dirt over every blade of grass unlucky to be in his path.
Sola the Golden sat upon a sky lit throne, listening to every song under her zone. She looked near, then looked far. Everywhere that there was light, was everywhere her gaze made bright.
Soluna walked up the sky to her throne. He knelt below her presence alone.
Soluna: “Mother, my lover is in the night. I wish to be with him without light. I want to trade my sunny days for starry skies. Mother, will you grant me this wish, or will you make me catch you a fish named tish?”
Sola: “You are rhyming again my son, you spent too much time with that boy at twilight. It is not that I dislike your rhyme but you cannot go into the night because your light would make it bright. You are the son of the sun. If you go into night, the night would cease and only perpetual daylight will remain. You cannot go because mortals who need light also need darkness.”
Soluna edged his mind once more, sharpened his senses and tried to think. If he could not go to the night then there must be a way to bring Beluno and Luna to the day. The curse was known but could it be broken? The question lingered in his mind.
Sola: “My son, there is a way, but you must remember you will be the sun of day. Meet beloved Beluno on a date, and then have him take the Trial of Balance and Fate. Fail and he dies, but live and he will never need lies. You will become the Sun and Beluno the Moon, but a Moon that is free to roam and zoom.”
Sola hugged Soluna and gave him the place where the trial could be traced. As the day went on, sunset came and Beluno was again distanced the same.
Soluna: “Beluno my love, I cannot come, for light might dispel the needed night. I am the son of the sun. If I go the mortals may never have rest, perhaps apart from each other is best.”
Beluno: “Soluna… is… there no way… is there no way?”
Fearful of a fated death, Soluna took a deep breath.
Soluna: “There is a way, but you may die. It may be best we remain shy. To succeed you will be the moon and I the sun, and my hair will no longer be tied in a bun.”
Beluno: “I… I don’t want to be trapped in a night cage as time flies by every age! Many say I am gentle and soft, but now I need to face fear and scoff.”
Soluna: “What of your mother? What if you die? Would she not then weep and cry?”
Beluno was silent. The consequences were for failure were dire.
Beluno: “My mother was cursed by the Terse Believer, forever in night while none relieve her. As her son I must try, against the curse I will pry.”
Soluna: “My love I am brave, if it could be me your mother I would be save, but to relieve the curse my sword cannot wave. I do not wish to lose you even if I cannot touch you.”
Beluno took the directions on the map and set off at dusk to his fate. At the temple he looked from afar. He journeyed on and reached the gates as it was there he would seal his fate. Become the moon or face his doom.
He entered the gates and walked slowly forward trembling, still his will would not be bending. The darkness of night occluded his sight and the caused his muscles to remain tight. The lack of light pushed on his plight while he took a step with the foot on his right.
At the end of the path he found a bath. A man stood before him as he felt a waft. The Terse Believer was in the bath, smiling all while blocking his path.
Terse Believer: “I see you have come, Beluno my son. You seek to end the curse on your mum. Oh Beluno, Beluno, my dear boy Beluno… do you not know why it is night in which the moon hides? It’s for the oceans and the tides. Move too quickly and it goes out of balance, move too slowly and there is no calm. The curse was not to harm or make worse, it was simply a measure against a life’s verse.”
The Terse Believer waved his hand, and clothings then covered his entire man.
Terse Believer: “I know you love the boy of the sun, but even then it cannot be done. If the moon doesn’t balance the tides of the earth, then it would lose all of its worth. It is a choice of cursed stagnance or a choice of a constant balance. If you should fail, you will die. ”
Beluno stared at the Terse Believer, still unsure if his heart would waver. Determine to free his mother of the curse, he demanded that he could know the balance curse.
Beluno: “Tell me then father, if you are my father. What is the curse of balance?”
Terse Believer: “While sunny days will be constant plays, the starry night will come once a fortnight. The moon can share the sun in the day, but the balance requires a night of lonely sway. Make sure to return and break from the sun, or you will burn and have no fun.”
Beluno: “Is this the trial of Balance and Fate? Where I must always keep track of the date?”
The Terse Believer nodded with smile, as he would not see his son for awhile.
Terse Believer: “You have made your mind, and I will be kind. Please live son, for you are one of mine.”
Beluno: “I will father. I will.”
The curse was removed and the title changed. The Moon was now Beluno and Luna was pained. First she wavered and grew faint, but then she accepted and remained quaint.
To his love Beluno paced, to Soluna their arms would then embrace. The world in day had an eclipse, which caused mortals to gasp from their lips.
Month by month the moon was free to move, but still a balance Beluno must soothe. Sunny days continued on by, while moonless nights left a starry sky.
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Author's Note:
Thanks for reading my entry into the BL Anthology. I remain a reader on SH currently but I publish only on Ritoria. Same user name if you're interested in a long fantasy smut story, although it isn't BL.
The point of it was to be a nursery rhyme fairy tale. There is meaning and yet there is no meaning. Fairy tales seek to explain the things that happen in the world. Like Thor losing his hammer in Fall and getting it back at the end of winter so Spring can arrive. The sun god dying on the shortest day of the year December 25th, and then being reborn so the days start getting longer from that point.
The Sun historically is associated with day, and the moon with night. So I thought about how an eclipse was an event where both are out at the same time and touching. There are numerous fairy tales about an eclipse being a dragon trying to swallow the sun, or a it's associated with witch craft or evil. I just thought it would be fun to make a tale about how the sun and the moon wanted to be together.
this was super unexpected but pretty fun to read! i can't believe you made the whole thing rhyme. it gives me the effect of reading old heroic ballads like Beowulf or Homer's works (except a lot more vernacular and easier to understand). there was a lot of reversed syntax in the work as a result of the poetry (and trying to get the perfect word to end and pick up a rhyme)—which yeah, i know is pretty challenging. some places stuck out oddly as a result (ex: If you go to him I will be sad, as I gave birth to you without your dad which sounds super modern in context compared to the rest of the work), but hey! GOOD JOB AND YOU DID IT!
there were moments of beauty you did very well in the story, especially considering the lack of paragraphs you had to work with it. my favorite was the description about Sola seated: Sola the Golden sat upon a sky lit throne, listening to every song under her zone. She looked near, then looked far. Everywhere that there was light, was everywhere her gaze made bright.
it was simple, but it made her sound so noble and radiant i could imagine the scene in my head. the calm and centered goddess, surveying her realm from her position of authority...awesome.
i wonder if there was a slight typo here:
Soluna: “Beluno my love, have you asked your mother permission to come to the night?”
is it more like "come OUT of the night" since Beluno's already stuck in nighttime? couldn't wrap my mind around it.
overall i liked the old-fashioned feeling the setting, characters, and prose gave off. it was fun to read and i didn't get bored, since your pacing kept everything at a steady progression. i actually found it a plot twist that Terse Believer was Beluno's father all along (can't believe he imprisoned his wife, but old gods seem to have a trend of doing contradictory things LOL). and i loved how the Trial of Balance and Fate was tied to a real life phenomenon: the eclipse! so anyways, thank you for your work and i'm glad they got their happy ending!! (but where does Beluno's mother go from here?)
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this was a very... whimsical piece
The children of night and day fell in love and how Beluno faced a trial to be with Soluna and at the same time, free his mother from her curse. The writing was lyrical and had a fantasy feel to it but it conveyed the tale without a problem.
I think we've been used to how weblit is written nowadays and expect hundreds of chapters for the exposition and character development that we sometimes forget how satisfying it can be when a story is told and completed in one short sitting. It would have been nice to know what sort of trial Beluno went through but like all fairy tales, that, I suppose, is a story for another day.
All in all:
T'was a story I enjoyed, and am in awe of the style employed
The lovers were pure, of their love so sure
Unfortunately rhyming is contagious, of this malady so infectious
This rhyming I cannot stop or the end of this poem will be a flop
Thank you for the story
As I was reading this, I felt that it was so poetic and rhythmic! Also the literal rhymes!!! There was also this fairytale/mythological-tale ambience to it.
Sola: “You are rhyming again my son, you spent too much time with that boy at twilight. It is not that I dislike your rhyme
OMG hahahaha. So only Luna and Beluno rhymed? And Soluna was 'infected' by the rhyming?
Thank you for the lovely tale, @Anon2021 !
That was fascinating to read not knowing it was going to rhyme, it took me far too long to realise why my reading had taken on a rhyming pace.
It was an interesting sweet story with with a strong sense of longing and desire. I really enjoyed it thank you for your story.
Oo..I like the format. It's been a while since I read something with this style of writing. It felt like a poem with all the rhyming, which I think was done excellently.
All I can say is I wrote it all in one day and all the effort went into the rhyming.
That was a very beautiful tale, and the theatrical writing style definitely fit the story very well. I also enjoyed the almost star-crossed lovers type of tale where the two main characters cannot be together but nevertheless always try to find a way. Those type of stories, like this one, creates a very fairytale and beautiful story. Most tales like this usually ends in BE, but I'm glad the characters in this one can find happiness.
One critic I would say is that the climax fell flat, and felt as if there was no climax at all or I guess more accurately, the entire story felt like it should've been a climax of a longer story. I felt like the story was building up the trial as the actual climax of the story, but there wasn't much clear explanation on what it was. Though the language style definitely fit the theme of the writing, the downside is that it has some very confusing parts, at least for me.
Overall, it was an enjoyable story with a alluring style!
Truly and amazing take of the theme of this Antho. I love that you created a sort of a lore how the moon came to be. Its super cute but love prevails.
I love that this is the story of eclipse but it is also fitting that you can actually still see the moon during the day if you look hard enough. Perhaps the sun kept the light on the moon so be it day or night, it hasn't truly left its side.
The cycle of day and light and how Luna was cursed makes me wonder whats does it mean for the countries that the night and day are always in between. Never one or the other.
The fact you managed to share such a story with the word limit and also the constraint of just one-shot amazes me. Its super lovely and makes me go aww .
I wished there was more. Thank you for sharing this story. I truly enjoyed it.
The sun and moon forever revolving around each other. Thats a good love story ❤
Beluno the White wanders a lake, longing to be with his love. So he asks his mother, the Luna Goddess, to be a dove to find his love. But his mother is a single parent and unable to traverse into the day. So he enters a long conversation of negotiation with her, but leaves it when there was no compromise. Since his mother can't live without her son, who is her support.
The story read as an ode about the love of night and day's sons of the goddesses.
A cute story. Thanks for sharing.
this is like leaving bits of crumbs to attract lil me to click! and read! ゚・:*。(ꈍᴗꈍ)ε`*)~。*:・゚