Back from the dead!
hope you didn't miss me too much.
Got done in by the SAT prep, and I'm still pretty sure I'll do hella shit. 2 more days until I embarrass myself, woooo.
4 chapters going out tomorrow, and this is important, NOT NEW CHAPTERS. The second arc has not started, though I'm certainly working on it. The 4 chapters are a rewrite of the original, just cuz I felt like the first arc wasn't good enough. Lotta problems I had with it, especially in consistency and getting it to an acceptable level for my funky ADHD brain.
Though I can't promise it'll be more satisfying (I actually have a consistent story this time!) , and pretty alien (I moved from the Level part), I'll probably start deleting the older versions as I restart. There will be pretty massive changes, but mainly in the power system (confusing before). Some characters I just straight up deleted or remade. (Dw they weren't that important). The story will still have the original one as a guideline but don't expect it to be 100% similar. Also, the poll included for your opinions. Not that it'll change anything, I had my mind set a few months ago after my friend discovered this, but I would really appreciate some feedback n stuff on where I goofed on the original story (So I can make the rewrite, and the next arc as good as possible).
Upload schedule? Gone (every 2-3 days now, but chapters are longer)
Sleep? Gone
My will to live? Gone.
Still on Haitus technically, so if I someday disappear and stop making chapters after the rewrite, I'm taking a break :D
So yeah, TLDR:
4- possibly 5 rewritten chapters going out tomorrow after I do some formatting. Life has been shit. Yeah.
Oh right, to answer the question of whos on the chopping block,
Well, Hope you guys didn't like the goblin.
poor Gob his village got slaughtered for nothing
@Aschente
Oo If it can be improved it’d great! It was already good, but better is better Brain tired this came out weird but anyway good luck with the rewrite! And the SAT
Thanks! Perfectionism is a pain ITA, but I'll try my best!
(Im already doomed for the SAT lol, but thanks anyways <3)
Oh yeah, loved Shadow Slave's concepts and writing.
Partly why I came back from the dead.
oh shadow slave
I think it might be nice if you kept the old story up, but just renamed it to (old) or (first draft) or something. I know some people like to look back on the old outdated chapters, and if you are looking for constructive criticism it might help them to have something to compare it to. By keeping the old version, people might be able to point out if you did things better or if they prefer things there.
I will try! Currently thinking of either merging all chapters into one big Superchapter at the beginning, renaming it (per your suggestion), or just deleting it. I'll look into it for now, but busy week ahead, so prob nothing much will be done until I come around to it.
Maybe move the old chapter to an arcive fic? Having them here might make new readers confused
If you do a rewrite can you make everything less gamey. I just don't like the stuff like. "you can't attack this till this is destroyed" Stuff like that.