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“Jesus Christ.” I said in surprise as the David Drake personality blocks were lifted and I came back to myself. “Jesus Christ! What the hell was that?” I shook my head several times. “How the hell did they make something like that?”
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“This was... good God.” I shook my head again. “I can't believe something like this exists! How is this not sweeping the world right now? This thing is fucking awesome!”
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It would be too much work to have this system spread worldwide, considering the amount of people needed to maintain a single story. If fifty people played this same story, the choices would need to be reduced and their impacts reduced as well.
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I had to think about that for a minute. “So, you're saying with a smaller player base, you can make it that much more enjoyable.” I said and had to nod. “Okay, I guess that makes sense.”
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You seem to really like this novelization.
Do you wish to play The Rogue Necromancer again? Yes / No
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“No. I think I'll save this thing for later. I don't want to overload myself with just this story right off the bat.” I said and then smiled. “What else have you got for me?”
Well I managed to go through the whole story in about a day after catching up on marsh man, I enjoyed it for the most part but the antagonist was pretty abrupt and the foreshadowing was largely lost on me, the ending was nice but tied up awfully quickly, 7/10 I'd say
I would leave a proper site review but I wouldn't give it 5 stars and I like your works enough that I'd rather not diminish your perfect rating
@bokuboy
BB that was a great story. Thank you very much!
I'm glad you liked it. A lot of people had a hard time being 'dropped into the middle' of the story with characters that had pre-existing relationships. It was my first time doing that and those that liked it, liked it a lot. Those that didn't, barely got through a few chapters and dropped it. LOL
@Bokuboy
Personally, I see it as testament to your creativity and ability that it flowed so well and brought to life the characters so well. I even almost forgot that "David" was just in a "game".
@pincho What did you think of the narrator breaks / questions? Some I added just because it was funny and it lifted some of the dark and dreary feelings of the story content. Too much bad happening all the time is... well, bad. LOL
@Bokuboy
I think it flows well and definitely reminds the readers and MC that this is just a story. Plus it shows that the "system" is a person and not programing.
On a side note it helps understand the follow on story.