Chen Wentian quickly became hard without a touch. Just being seen was enough stimulation. His eyes blanked, his mind was devoid of intelligent thought.
Where am I? What was happening? Is this real life?
He didn't dare move a muscle. He didn't want to leave this strange but alluring dream.
Zhou Ziyun steeled her nerves and extended a petite, well-manicured hand. She grabbed the thick shaft and squeezed lightly. His hips trembled in reaction. She gave an experimental tug, which shot an amazing sensation throughout his body, enough to make him groan.
"Wow..." He uttered.
Her hand was soft and warm. It felt a thousand times better than his own hand. It was like the softest silk. He closed his eyes and savored every sensation.
Zhou Ziyun continued to rub him gently, feeling the heat and power beneath her fingers. She watched him closely, studying his reactions and expressions. She was happy that he was enjoying it so much. She felt a great surge of relief. She had not made the wrong decision.
Drawing from her noble education, she moved on to the next phase of her task. She moved her face closer. She opened her mouth, stuck out her tongue, and gave the bottom side of that twitching purple head a slow, careful lick.
Chen Wentian sucked in a sharp breath. He had not expected this at all. The shock and pleasure were unlike anything else he had ever experienced. Her tongue was so warm and so very wet. She was firm yet pliant, wrapping around his most sensitive part.
His hips shook suddenly. A familiar feeling rose up, exerting pressure in all directions. He tried to resist, his muscles and his spiritual force holding back the inevitable. She only needed to give him a few more licks and that was all it took.
"Fuck!" Chen Wentian shouted.
He came suddenly. His balls squeezed as everything was released. His dick jerked several times as he shot out strand after strand.
Zhou Ziyun closed her eyes in reflex. She felt something hot and sticky land all over her face. There was so much of it. She couldn't hold back a smile. She had done it. She had satisfied an immortal.
Chen Wentian's eyes were still closed as he enjoyed the residual pleasure. His breathing evened out, slowly coming down from an exciting peak.
"Lord Chen?" Zhou Ziyun asked shyly.
Chen Wentian looked down. He saw her shining, watery eyes staring up at him. She still had one hand on his cock. Strands and globs of white covered her lips, her nose, and even above her brow and forehead. She looked so stunning at that moment, peerless beyond words.
He would forever remember this moment and this scene. It was devastatingly sexy. He even felt some vigor returning. Before he had completely softened, he was already steel hard once more.
"Lord Chen?" Zhou Ziyun asked again.
The uncertainty and slight fear in her voice finally knocked some sense into him. He realized what she had just done. He felt a little bad as he didn't mean to make her do anything. She was a pretty good candidate anyway and he just wanted to test her a little more. However, since everything had happened already, it only made his decision easier.
Chen Wentian leaned down and stroked her cheek, his eyes still clouded with passion. He gave her a reassuring smile, "Ziyun... good, call me master."
Zhou Ziyun felt a giant dam of emotion deep inside her burst open. All the pressure and stress she had to endure over the years melted away. Her entire countenance seemed to evolve and her smile was true and lit up the entire room. She looked deeply into his eyes. Fiery sparks flew between them.
"Master!" She called out.
Without his prompting, she moved her head forward and took his cock into her mouth. Her emotions were finally free and her actions were not stiff like the first time. She worshiped him, giving every detail careful attention with her tongue. She swept around the head sensually and would occasionally tease the hole at the center with the tip.
It was a foreign realm of sensation for Chen Wentian. Something completely new and mind-blowing. He felt her tongue doing fascinating movements around him. It lit every nerve on fire. His excitement was ignited to a painful level, especially having orgasmed only a minute beforehand. His entire dick was extremely sensitive and reacted to the sensual blowjob with another raging buildup of pressure.
Zhou Ziyun let more of the cock deeper into her mouth, her tongue wrapping around the underside and caressing the ridge. She collected more saliva in her mouth and started a back-and-forth motion with her head, letting his magnificent cock slide in and out of her mouth. She let it in deep until the tip touched the back of her mouth and then slid back out until her lips were barely wrapped around the head. Back and forth, she worshiped.
"Oh, baby..." He moaned in excitement.
This time around he kept his eyes open as he stared fiercely at the scene of her sucking his dick energetically. What an amazing girl. She was truly the person who was fated to travel the world with him. He swore silently that he would spare no effort to transform her into an immortal so she could be by his side forever.
"Ziyun, baby...I'm coming!"
He couldn't take it anymore. He tried to suppress the raging dragon but it couldn't be stopped any longer. The sensations were too new and his experience was too little. The orgasm quickly approaching was the strongest in his entire life. It was actually painful, everything was white hot.
Zhou Ziyun quickened her pace, wanting him to have the most earth-shattering orgasm possible!
When he came, Chen Wentian didn't utter a sound but closed his eyes and solely focused on the sensation, on the raging boiling wave sweeping through his entire body. His balls squeezed and squeezed. Every powerful twitch sent renewed shocks across his loins.
She stopped after she felt the first stream hit the back of her mouth. She held his cock on top of her tongue and caressed it. She felt each power jerk as it all flowed into her mouth. It went on and on, continually shooting. Finally, when it stopped, her poor mouth was almost full.
He opened his eyes to see her mouth about to overflow with his seed. Her face still glistened from the previous round. This was an even more powerful image that he would treasure forever.
Zhou Ziyun closed her mouth and swirled her tongue around, it was salty and creamy, but she surprisingly enjoyed the taste, it was her master's treasured essence after all. She carefully swallowed it all in two gulps.
She then gave him a dazzling smile and bowed to the ground. "Disciple Zhou Ziyun, greets master!"
At this moment, Chen Wentian felt as if he was the luckiest man in the entire world.
Well... every good looking prostitute ever could probably apply and get in if this is the bar they need to pass...
He really needs to be careful making decisions on a sexual high he will eventually regret most of them.
Lol let him regret it will be a interesting character development if else
I sense she's a good person. No need to be so judgemental. You'd do the same if you were a twenty five year old virgin. Lol. Besides, it's not like he didn't pre screen people for talent.
@Ouroboros I think an Lot more will be the same
@Ouroboros I would also touch a warm pot on the stove if I was 2 years old. But I still tell my nieces and nephews that it’s a bad idea.
I mean, he had already decided to accept her. The handy and blowjob was just icing on the cake (or face).
Character development needed for a virgin immortal at this level. Especially how the story would later unfold. Besides, there was a pre screening. Which is why 99.9% of all candidates failed.
The only person who passed is this Zhou woman. Who fits MC's needs in both skills and personality
Her doing that is a result of a misunderstanding which was implicitly implied earlier.
I've read hundreds of cultivation novels and what the guy did right here is just normal considering all the factors and circumstances hes in. No need to criticize illogically. Especially if there were no faults in writing.
If you say otherwise, you all are hypocritical b*tches who thinks they have 100% control when they are masturbating, As if that is possible if you are a healthy young man. Like I said. "LOGIC". Who here has ever controlled masturbating when they are really in the mood. Furthermore, this is the first time MC was being sucked by a beautiful woman.
Some may cry "he's immortal, he could have stopped her". Well, you just proved how stupid you really are. It was mentioned already he accepted her and he just plans to ask/know more to play hard to get. Immortal wouldn't play the cautious game when facing an ant (mortal).
Would you be cautious when a tiny ant comes to you in real life? That's what I have been saying. "Logic"
Instead of commenting irresponsible and d*mb comments like this, you all better train your comprehension, logic and brain and reread the whole chapter. Then you can learn how to read between the lines better.
People who are asexual gets a jail free card.
@franz2595 It’s almost as though self discipline is a thing.
@BILLYREDNECK34 It is a thing. But being yourself in a cultivation world is also a thing.
That's why geniuses who in full knowledge they would 100% die against an overpowered MC will still fight that MC. Because in their own mind, they are the MC of their own destiny. And that backing off means giving that up and ergo would result to mental demons they wouldn't be able to recover from.
There are no flaws in a cultivation world. Flaws are created because of a person's views of morality. What I believe that exist instead are personalities. You could be an evil, self righteous, perverted however you want to be. So long you stay true to yourself.
He has shown self-discipline so far and with his circumstances also being implied by the author many times, he can be perverted. Because he is a human. A mammal. He has a reproductive organ. And he has a mind to make use of that reproductive organ for pleasure. Before becoming an immortal, he is a human. And what stayed with his psyche is his former self.
The issue with people who criticizes a novel easily simply because a scene is not aligning with their thoughts is due to the fact that
1. They read too fast and miss a lot of details
2. They don't have the capacity to comprehend and read between the lines to have a logical understanding on a scenario/situation why it happened. Similar to what I have said (despite the author not putting it in the novel --> It's the same logic why author does not show in the novel when MC eats, when MC cultivates, when MC poops.)
3. They're just really against the idea despite the logical understanding because they have their own subjective perspective.
Either way, I am here to enjoy the novel and so far it is good. Hopefully future readers would see my comment and insight. It happened many times now that a potential book wasn't read by a reader because of some dumb commenter/review whose review or comment does not make a logical sense.
@franz2595 You’ve managed to throw an awful lot of assumptions, assertions, and insults into your comments. Trying to pull a mic drop moment at the end doesn’t help your case either.
@BILLYREDNECK34 And ive dealt with people like you who acts smart and mysterious cause they cant even make a logical case. Found a lot of you in reddit. People who act smart 🤡 They will throw the vague comments and replies instead of addressing the topic on hand. Everyone can clearly see thats how you have been replying to me so far😂🥲🥲
@franz2595 The idiocy of people who insult & denigrate those they disagree with, then proceed to demand that they be engaged in good faith. Oh, and that's another comment full of assertions.
@BILLYREDNECK34 Rather shocking how a guy with redneck as their username managed to sound more civilized than your average novel reader. Really put into perspective how dumb people think they're smart because they can write long paragraphs on the Internet lol