
Tenta and Cornelia held hands and slowly walked to Cornelia's bedroll, hearts pounding, knowing they would have their first time soon.
For Cornelia, who was recently just a below-average-looking 18-year-old slum girl, she always thought her first time might go to some random drunk man or a desperate guy who didn't care about looks... Before summoning Tenta, it never even crossed her mind her first time would go to her familiar, who looked like an octopus alien. But she didn't mind. At least she gets to do it with someone she likes.
As for Tenta, he was happy he could pop his 44-year-old cherry with a girl he liked and not some prostitute. However, he was also nervous since it was a bit rushed. He knew her for a month... But it was never on a romantic basis. And he was also afraid of hurting her or being a poor lover.
As they reached the bedroll, Cornelia let go of his hand and slowly started undressing. She knew Tenta had seen everything already... Even the times she went to the bathroom. But now, it was different. Back then, he was a pet... But now, he was a man. A man who she was about to have sex with. Slowly, Tenta saw her peel off her magic robe, revealing her in expensive lingerie from the Stindeer mansion.
Her body, initially malnourished and skinny, gained some weight. Although still on the skinny side, she wasn't all bones anymore, looking more like a regular girl, albeit a bit short, though a head taller than Tenta. Her assets were also not impressive, perhaps even on the small side, but Tenta thought it was pleasant. She wasn't like those porn actresses, models, or social media stars, but she was authentic, a real girl.
"... I am nervous. It is my first time." Cornelia confessed, turning her back, her grey-white ponytail of healthy, straight hair swishing.
"Mine too... In two lifetimes." Tenta admitted. "I never had a girlfriend... Heck, I never kissed a girl. Pathetic, right?" Tenta said self-derisively.
Cornelia lightly smiled, turned around, leaned over, and kissed his face again. "Not anymore."
Tenta's facial tentacles rose slightly, simulating a smile, "I am glad my first time is with you."
Cornelia smiled back and turned her back, moving aside her ponytail. "Can you undo my bra?"
"Sure..." Although nervous, Tenta smoothly opened it. It was little wonder since he saw her doing it multiple times... And he had done a ton of research in his previous life.
Her bra soon fell on the grass, and she turned around, covering her chest. "It is silly... But I am still nervous about being seen by you."
"It isn't silly..." Tenta said, his hands gently caressing her shoulders as if touching delicate porcelain. "It is a normal reaction... And it is my job to help you relax."
As he said that, his face tentacles gently caressed her cheeks and nape while his four back tentacles slid along her legs and back.
"Mm..." Cornelia let out a soft moan, her hand slowly letting go, revealing her modest chest. It was small, with two small pink nipples, and she had a tiny birthmark below her left chest, and Tenta found it cute.
"It is pretty..." Tenta's hand lowered to touch her chest. He then started using his racial ability, Consentacle Skin Oil.
"Ah..." Cornelia panted as her body and chest were rubbed and oiled, trying to immerse herself in the sensation and relax. Out of instinct, she reached out her hands and touched Tenta's shoulders and chest, rubbing them through his clothes.
Tenta would have gone in for a kiss... But his mouth wasn't exactly suitable for it. So, instead, he reached with one of his facial tentacles and gently rubbed her lips.
Perhaps stimulated enough, Cornelia also wanted to kiss, so when Tenta's tentacle touched her lips, she started kissing it.
Mmm* Mwa*
Unknowingly, Cornelia's panties turned wet, and Cornelia's legs started becoming jelly.
Sensing this change, Tenta gently used his back tentacles to support Cornelia, lightly pushing her to the bedroll.
"Hah... Hah..." Cornelia stared at him with a mixture of trepidation and excitement in her eyes.
"I'm going to remove it now..." Tenta said, gently grabbing her panties and pulling them down.
Cornelia didn't resist, letting Tenta take them off, a string of love juice extending as he pulled them down, revealing Cornelia's untrimmed, tight, and wet womanhood. There was a small patch of grey-white hair on her white skin. It was like a garden over healthy virgin soil that faintly smelled like molasses. Tenta's heart quickened, his pants tight.
"Don't stare so much... It's embarrassing..." Cornelia gave a meek protest, averting her eyes. However, her heart raced, and she got a hint wetter.
That only served to ignite Tenta's desire. He wanted to make her feel better and see what expression she would make. His tentacles moved, caressing her body more. Breasts, arms, stomach, buttocks, and inner thighs... One facial tentacle snaked up to her inflamed vagina and started gently rubbing it.
"Nnm... Aah..." Cornelia panted, her entire body stimulated and oiled by a single man, and her cunt slowly desired more.
Although she masturbated in the past, ever since she got Tenta and started adventuring, she stopped. It was too embarrassing to do it. This made her pent-up cunny excited at the attention it craved, increasing her sensitivity.
Opening her eyes, something within her started awakening, like a fire of passion in her veins. She not only wanted to feel more pleasure... But she also wanted to make this caring man in front of her feel even better. It was beyond the instincts of a woman... There was something more.
But she didn't notice it, her body growing hot as her hands reached toward Tenta and started undressing him, revealing his streamlined torso.
Tenta briefly slowed his movements, letting her undo his clothes made from mana. He could have dispelled them, but he chose not to. It was hotter this way.
"Hah... Tenta... You must be in pain..." Cornelia muttered, her hand caressing both his lengths through his clothes.
It was true that Tenta was feeling discomfort, but he prioritized pleasuring Cornelia. He didn't say that, however, as he silently let Cornelia lower his pants, revealing two engorged tentacle cocks. Unlike human dicks that only got erect, his dicks retained flexibility and could be moved like regular tentacles. However, he could also make them stiffer, simulating a human dick, just a very long one.
Cornelia didn't waste time, grasping both dicks with her hands, sending a jolt of pleasure down Tenta's spine. "Oh..." He moaned, his dicks finally receiving care.
"Tenta... Let's do it... I can't take it anymore..." Cornelia whispered, her face flushed and her breath hot.
"Are you sure you don't want some more foreplay?" Tenta suggested.
"I'm sure..." Cornelia said, spreading her legs and guiding one of his members to her tight entrance. "But only use one... I don't think I can take two..."
"But what about contraception? I can create a condom..." Tenta said.
"It's fine... black magic has a contraception magic. Now hurry..." Cornelia breathed out.
Those words made Tenta excited, but he didn't lose rationality.
"I'll be gentle..." Tenta said, letting one of his raw and lubricated dicks touch her wet and unexplored cave. He then gently put some force, letting it gradually widen her tight entrance before pulling back and putting it in again, not breaking her hymen immediately.
"Hn..." Cornelia frowned at the feeling of a foreign object prodding her entrance. There was discomfort but also pleasure and expectation for more, her hips subconsciously gyrating, seeking more.
To distract and relax her, Tenta used his other tentacles to stimulate her body and erect clit, making her writhe in pleasure, his dick inching deeper until it met resistance. He knew he encountered her hymen.
Tenta and Cornelia looked at each other. Since he was much shorter than her, he had to look up. "I am about to enter... Bite this if you are in pain." He said, letting one of his facial tentacles reach Cornelia.
"Okay..." Cornelia said, a look of desire in her eyes. "Take me... Make me a woman..."
That almost made Tenta lose his rationality, but he maintained composure as he silently moved his hips forward, pushing his phallus and tearing the membrane, blood slowly dripping from her vagina.
"Uh..." Cornelia winced as she was deflowered but didn't bite on Tenta. Her hymen wasn't thick, to begin with, and she moved a lot. It was only that her insides were not used to being stretched, so it was uncomfortable. And yet, she also felt warmth and pleasure, which somewhat offset the discomfort.
"Guh..." Tenta groaned, feeling the hotness of her tight and wet cave, his length smoothly penetrating her thanks to her love juices and his oil.
However, he didn't push it all in one go, knowing from his vast research that doing so was a stupid move. Instead, he checked on Cornelia and saw she was fine, so he started slowly moving in shallow thrusts.
"Ah... Ah... Ah..." Cornelia panted in a mixture of pain and pleasure, her body lightly swaying with his movements, her hands grabbing Tenta's bald head, hugging him to her body for support as he thrust inside.
Tenta found it harder and harder to control himself, wanting to fuck her harder. But through sheer will, he held himself back, controlling his thrusts.
The heat in Cornelia's body slowly became a furnace, her pain gradually replaced by pleasure, something in her awakening as she desired more. Grabbing Tenta's head, she made him look up, their eyes locking. "Don't go easy on me anymore... I can take it. Go deeper... Go faster..." She said between pants, her grey eyes revealing a purple tint of lust.
"C-Cornelia!!!" Tenta exclaimed, the last straw holding his rationality snapping. He grabbed her waist and started thrusting faster and deeper, reaching her depths. However, even then, he knew better than to ram his cock against her cervix, instead maintaining a short distance away despite leaving a third of his cock out. As for his other cock, it was lying on her stomach, scrubbing against her clit as he swung his hips.
"Ah! Ah! AH!!! Oh, great mother Ruvara above! Ah! Right there!" Cornelia screamed in passion, not caring she was near Roberta's hut.
"Ha! Ha! Ha!" Tenta panted as he thrust inside, feeling it hard to contain himself. He was close to cumming for a while but held himself back, wanting to pleasure Cornelia first. But he was about to let loose. "I'm sorry, Cornelia, I'm going to cum soon..." He looked up at her and said with deep regret.
Unfortunately, this 'battle' was an unfair one from the beginning. Women held an advantage in the field, and they were both virgins. Virgin women found it more challenging to reach climax, but men many times prematurely ejaculated. It was above expected that Tenta lasted this long...
"It's okay... " Cornelia gently said, embracing him and holding him. "Let it all out inside. I'll take it all..."
"She's an angel..." Tenta thought as he buried his head in her chest and let the dam burst.
Splurt* Splurt* Splurt*
"Guh..." His body shook as Cornelia stroked his bald head, and her legs locked his waist, letting him ejaculate inside her and on her stomach.
"I'm sorry I finished so soon..." Tenta said with remorse, having finished his ejaculation, enjoying her embrace.
"It is okay... I enjoyed it too..." She smiled, stroking him like a caring mother.
"... I promise you... I will do better next time." Tenta swore.
"I have sexual classes... Why not raise some of them?" He thought.
"I'm looking forward to it," Cornelia replied, her body heating up. But at the same time, she also felt sore and increasingly tired. "But now, I want to get some sleep..."
"Okay..." Tenta said, pulling out his half-erect member, a mixture of pink liquid leaving her hole.
He felt like he could go on if he pushed himself, but he knew she was a virgin. He didn't want to push her.
Cornelia used simple cleaning magic on herself, cleaning the body fluids and putting on her lingerie before covering herself and Tenta in her bedroll, letting them sleep together.
"Good night, Tenta. Mwa*" She sweetly smiled and kissed his face.
"Good night, Cornelia..." Tenta's eyes turned soft, his tentacle caressing her cheek as he saw her slowly drifting asleep, and soon, sleep took him as well.
They didn't notice that Cornelia slowly started changing as the night went on...



I think most people expect more smut in a t*ntacle novel and less real story. This story has a potential to be a lot longer with actual good non-smut content while in the dropped story you knew smut will be the priority and the story secondary.
Just follow your own heart. Sometimes you really need to ignore comments, etc. because it is your story and not a community project or story of their own thoughts.
Imo.
It's the second attempt, so people might be more strict with their votes compared to a first attempt that would be more lenient as an encouragement.
Plus the first version was more of a pop corn novel so the expectations were lower. This one actually feels like a more serious work. People don't expect the same standards for a M. Bay or a Spielberg film.
I think the speed and the focus on world and character development of this story is what is leading to a lower rating - it is chapter 31 before there was s*x between Tenta and Cornelia. While the first story also didn't have a lot of actual s*x there was a lot more ecchi content in most chapters (boobs - lots of boobs) and starting much earlier.
I found the quality of the plot element of the first story started dropping off in proportion of Tenta becoming more and more OP and had already started to consider dropping it - if I want to read out and out po*n there are much better places to find that (Archive of Our Own is very good). I like adult/smut stories, but they have to be stories first, the adult/smut content is the nice addition and allows authors to develop their story/world to places a non R18 story can't, but that content should not be a replacement for plot and character development.
I think this story has more potential since things are proceeding a bit more slowly. There are people who enjoy the OP ball of stats rolling through everything without care for what they're actually doing to the world around them, but those kinds of stories get repetitive after a short time.
To be honest I like this one more than the dropped one. This one is more chill and less bs with numbers of you know what I mean
i do like story's with bullsh*t op MCs but I also like storys that take a while to get strong. If my English was better I could tell you more in detail what I like about this one 
I guess when you get a story with the protagonist reincarnated as a t*ntacled monster you would expect a trashy story that was more or less like your first story, since we had the MC who became almost divine after a 30 cap, however this one is more serious and destabilizes you a bit but in any case it doesn't mean that it isn't beautiful in fact even if I prefer the MC to be strong I can still enjoy a slow story from weak to strong so I don't see any problems.
Keep it up you are doing an excellent job even though I am nobody to tell you I can still support you



cookies for you
"I recently returned to check my dropped work and was dumbfounded that the ratings were much higher than in this work, a novel with a better-built world and story."
Don't worry about it. That previous work has been out for longer so it had more time to farm good ratings, this one will soon surpass that one.
"is it also because of a misplaced revenge vote? Just saying people are f*cking petty."
Did you really have to lash out at your fans again? It seemed petty when you did it in chapter 21 and it seems petty now. Just write for yourself and those of us who enjoy it will give you a good rating, so far this one has been an improvement.
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As he said that, his face t*ntacles gently caressed her cheeks and nape while his foud back t*ntacles slid along her legs and back.
his four back t*ntacles perhaps?
Tenta gently used her back t*ntacles to support Cornelia, lightly pushing her to the bedroll.
his back t*ntacles unless Tenta has had a sudden gender change.
Thanks for the chapter.
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