After an epic battle with the final boss of the Great Labyrinth Of Terror, a team of adventurers mutually kills the boss, leaving the dying slave baggage carrier, Deadmeat, who they thought was dead, as the sole survivor. With his last breath, Deadmeat barely grabs the final relic and dies... Or so he thought.
Awesome story so far. Not too many (if any) grammar mistakes. And I look forward to seeing the plot unfold.
However, as another reviewer said, please remove the [R-18] from the title.Thanks.Read More
Going with WN style:
WQ: So far it's good.. Good grammar, which makes reading easier as well as give us good immersion.. (1st star)
US: Pretty stable updates since it's a starting of new novel.. (2nd Star)
SD: A better story development so far, can't say much now since it's barely 11 chapters.. (3rd Star)
CC: Good character creations till now, The reaction of noble, the honorary rankings of lower to higher rank adventurers made the story great. Though I would have liked to know his (MC) time with his friends or their start of adventuring, but meh, I don't like tragedies so just skipping to the main story is good too.. (4th star)
WB: From the talks between characters or by the going of isekai theme genre, we can know there will (might) be more exploration of other kingdoms, empires or maybe continent of different races like elf or beastkin? (Eh a 5th star for the future, meh)
Personal Note: You should probably change the title a bit (don't take it wrongly, just an advice) , it's weird to read it as Deadmeat Saga since he was Deadmeat for only first two chapters, and with his powers, he will just get stronger with time and resources, so calling it Deadmeat Saga will be weird af.. Just saying..
And you should probably remove the R-18 from the title too (read title, not tags), not saying it out of malice or anything but most of the R-18 titled (titled as in written with the story name) stories are smut stories (with or without plot) and yours is bona fide fantasy story, there might be R-18s, but you can just use the tag R-18 for that.. No need to write it on title.. Again just saying, not trying to offend you or anything..
Keep up the good work 👍
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