Earth 65, the world of Spider-Gwen; at least it was supposed to be before she mysteriously disappeared. An up and coming scientist, Felix Faeth, joins Oscorp in hopes of a normal living in New York, but life is never that simple, is it? Ordinary yet gifted with intelligence, Felix is forced to become Spider-Man after a harrowing series of events.
Along the way, he meets friends, enemies, and lovers. This is the story of the Spider-Man of Earth-65.
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It's a great story with great writing. Smut isn't over-done and the plot is consistent. The pace isn't too fast or slow. A great read all around.
Keep up the good work.
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The first 5-6 chapters are super slow. As one of the other reviews mentioned, there isn't really anything to grip your attention, to the point where I had to force myself not to skim. This does improve as time goes on though, but I still find the plot lacking any real urgency.
From the excessive verbosity, inconsistent details chapter to chapter, and the odd sentence that makes little sense in context, I think AI was used to edit the original text. That isn't a problem in itself, but the issues I mentioned are an unfortunate distraction.
The smut is very well done, although the first scene kinda comes out of nowhere and could have done with a bit more foundation, and in general the relationship development is lacking.
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The story doesn't have a strong hook that will make readers want to continue reading. I wouldn't mind that but the character is also incredibly bland. I feel like it would be a good story if I continue however with the writer's writing style and bland character I would probably stop again.
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