Anyone who loves isekai but are a bit jaded should find this parody refreshing. I find the writing style charming as well. I look forward to each chapter.

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Gbot1900

Status: c54

Oct 4, 2024

3/5 stars

It was good 20 chapters in but it was a downward spiral of characters loosing their personalities that the antagonist has more of them even though they get a short screen because half of the time they just become the mc+.

Fourth wall breaks and the meta humour:it just truly breaks out of you in the story, not in a good way it really takes you out out of the story that it justs appears the author is slowly loosing his sanity to have humour that it doesn't feel like the character is talking but the author directly rubbing off your face to just to scream to laugh.

Not really a comedic undertone it screams it at your face you should laugh.

Halfway through the MC isin't even clever it feels like everyone around him is being dumb down for the sake of him to appear clever of them just having an existential crisis even though it shouldn't or it just read out like he got the author manuscript and been cheating his way like that, the only time I think he actually was clever, was the cookies.

Personally rhe therapy... feels over used joke people will probably try and avoid it have ways for them to cope with it another way, or probably try to kill and spite the MC.

World building generic fantasy lite

could have explored everyones character a bit more, rather than it just being just a short passage like they don't matter.

Pacing all over the place that I couldn't digest half of the stuff that's happening it's just high high after high it gets dull. Then some scenes just jumps from there to there making it appear some scenes in between missing. Combat scenes are good some are a miss. The magic system is fine it's generic from the get go

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but having a unique element just cause the author wants it kinda miffed me.

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Romance:It's ok, doesn't make you giddy or heart race, not really romace but it does at least their relationships healthy.

Overall it was ok, it had potential but it fell off half way through, it tells you everything from the get go and description, this is just bored rambling.

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