MC has a negative intelligence modifier applied. Although that's a bit hard to tell, since the original wasn't the sharpest tool in the shed in the first place.

Other points about the novel:

• Wrong words are sometimes used when they are phonetically similar to the correct word (e.g. Advice → advise).
• Becoming a farmer and working hard for hours every day is supposedly a form of retirement.
• Social workers apparently can progress their career by starting caring about farm animals instead of people.
• Spoiler

  State of the art home security systems are about securing everything except the front doors and the main path to the residence.

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I have no hope left for the novel.

Overall I'd give 1/5, but since there was an effort made to ensure correct grammar, occasional mistake notwithstanding, I'm giving it 2/5.

Dropped.

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