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It's so... weird. There's just something wrong when I read it, I don't know how to explain. The writing style and sentance structure just feel off, it's like the author just throws his thoughts without any internal editing, like a big word soup. Things just happen with little to no context at all. Not for me.
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So... First thing I’ll say is the author is very self-aware about the type of story they’re writing. The next thing that really caught my attention with the story was the fact that there wasn’t just one character who was transmigrated, but 100. The story is still early on at only chapter 11, but the story if a little bit fast-paced is still pretty smooth. I definitely think there could be some fleshing out of the characters and maybe slowing the pace of the story so it doesn’t come to an abrupt end due to burning all it’s potential in the early stages. But overall, I like it a lot!
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