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I had watched the previous novel and just wanted to say that the main problem with your previous novel.
In this what I mainly want to see is magic realism and I don't mind if MC is overpowered but at least tell why.
Like in the previous novel I had quit during hotel transelvania because man what was up with tigress?!! Like in months tigress became able to take on hundreds of her former self as if she was this talented but like did she not work hard her entire life. Even though after joining MC she couldn't have had trained more than a few hours.
Basically try to make It realistic please. Even if they are made op at least give reason. Even if the reason is like MC cum can increase talent.
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