I am not really that good at writing a synopsis, but here goes nothing.
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Synopsis:
It's about a guy who transmigrates into Bruce Wayne's body after the original gets killed along with his parents. Now, the only way he can survive is to be what the original would have been one day or more.
He would have to be the best Bruce Wayne there is if he even wants a chance to survive in this dark world full of danger. The only 'cheat' he has to make all this possible is Intuitive Intelligence, an ability of his favorite Marvel mutant character, Forge. But is it truly all there is to his power?
Will he be able to survive with it? Will he be an overpowered character, or will he get killed way before he even realizes his own potential? Will he become the strongest being in DC, or will he die trying? Read on to know.
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Starting was good but becomes bad.
The League of Assassins arc alot of bull sh*t. Leave Gotham for 3 years to learn some weak skills and martial arts. Also the fights never use any gadgets. Most of the fights MC use only martial arts, when his water poison and drones can easily kill them.
The pets chapters are fillers, waste of time.
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Good fanfic. Want more of it
5 stars for enjoyment
4 stars for quality for a fanfic. Everything is readable and is something one wants to read.
It is about Bruce Wayne. Not Batman which means that the story goes through the arcs of reaching adulthood and is more than just herodom. Which also mean that the world expands.
It does mean that it is what some would consider slow. But the author has a path that is followed and it seems to be working.
Also it is mature with harem just it is not a Maine foucus. Bruce is not actively hunting women. Romance also takes it time to bloom if it not to grow. Which is good. Like it.
Two annoyances.
One, and the most important one that truly needs fixing. The MC seems to forget that he is reincarnated and has foreknowledge. An example
a mysterious storm that came out of nowhere, his highly advanced plane is struck by lightning which purposefully, as if by magic and design (hint hint), targets everything except Bruce's body. Destroying all his highly advanced equipment, all of which is resistant to a high amount of damage, to nothingness.
Then Bruce, now fully naked and with nothing, wakes up and finds out that he has crashed on the one and singular island in the entire ocean with only women on it that follows the Greek gods.
By the way, if people don't know. The Greek god's leader is Zeus. A god of lightning. You know, like the lightning that striped Bruce bare despite everything. Maybe, just maybe there is a connection between those lightning. But who knows? It is not like Bruce landed on a single Island in the vast expanse of ocean, one with magic protecting it from outside connection, who only have women on it who follow the Greek gods. All while Bruce is familiar with the information.
Not a single time, not a single little time, that follows after, during the arc introducing the Amazones and even beyond that, is Bruce suspicious of what happened. He just it took as if it was a random occurrence. By the way. He absolutely got a long period of calm to think things through before any action happens. It is stupid.
This is not the only example of this happening, Bruce forgetting that he has foreknowledge and can think that is. But it is the one that relevant for the longest time yet. And I can with surety say that this is the only thing that is actively ruining this fanfic, and is is a weird thing since it is a important part of our MC character. If it gets fixed there will be little to complaine about regarding the story.
-Two. How detailes are given. Which is in dialogues. Here is a exaggerated example, the author does a much better job.
——She says " Hi Bruce, how is it? I myself have just arrived from the airport after I left the country three years ago after the Fox incident where I felt unsafe to remain in the city. Now after three years where I was studying in school with great results. I have decided to return. Thus I booked a flight some weeks ago and yesterday morning I arrived at the airport and took an airplane with a stop in between and arrived just now. I came straight here and will now swear an eternal contract to you."——
This giving details in dilouge happens a least once every single chapter in the latter chapters. Most times more. Again, my example is a overexaggeration. The author does it much more smothly.
I like the fanfic. It has good quality also. And most chapters are contained somewhat.
5 stars for enjoyment. 4 stars for quality.
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Solid writing. Few grammar mistakes here and there but nothing major and not frequent enough to be an issue. Pacing could be better but it's not a big problem, just something for the author to improve on in the future. Overall good.
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