This story, plus the related bonus content, is a treat.
Can I just end my review here? It's good. Go read it.
No?
Okay.
The story has the advantage of being small and completed yet fleshed out.
The bonus content especially fills this gap; pretty much all the relevant sections of the story are there. I didn't feel like there was anything missing, even though the story is small.
There's really not much wrong with this story, so to say. No bad grammar, not a whole lot of typos (I found 1), no characters so dumb you want to punch them, no random perspective change to unrelated characters for ten chapters in a row...
Basically, a good well-rounded/filled-out short story without any big flaws.
This story, plus the related bonus content, is a treat.
Can I just end my review here? It's good. Go read it.
No?
Okay.
The story has the advantage of being small and completed yet fleshed out.
The bonus content especially fills this gap; pretty much all the relevant sections of the story are there. I didn't feel like there was anything missing, even though the story is small.
There's really not much wrong with this story, so to say. No bad grammar, not a whole lot of typos (I found 1), no characters so dumb you want to punch them, no random perspective change to unrelated characters for ten chapters in a row...
Basically, a good well-rounded/filled-out short story without any big flaws.
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