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Chapter 2.18 – OuroborosFeb 21, 2026
Chapter 2.17 – A Feast That Will Give You Your FillFeb 20, 2026
Chapter 2.16 – Secret Club: The Banquet.Jan 21, 2026
Chapter 2.15 – Teaching Hack. Demon Concubine?!Jan 14, 2026
Chapter 2.14 – Lewd Pet FoxJan 12, 2026
Chapter 2.13 – Stonebury. Auction. Another OtherworlderJan 10, 2026
Chapter 2.12 – True Limit ChallengerJan 7, 2026
Chapter 2.11 – Clone Dungeon Diving. Level 3 GremlinJan 5, 2026
Chapter 2.10 – Magic! Recovered Powers. Shut-In Clone Grinding.Jan 4, 2026
Chapter 2.9 – MeditationJan 2, 2026
Chapter 2.8 – Reincarnated Hell ChallengerJan 1, 2026
Chapter 2.7 – Spawn Camping. Citizenship.Dec 30, 2025
Chapter 2.6 – Bandits and SlavesDec 29, 2025
Chapter 2.5 – Three Months of Cheat GrindingDec 27, 2025
Chapter 2.4 – Comprehension Cheat. Training Plans.Dec 26, 2025

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Marquess

Status: chapter 39 – human purifier. first contact.

Aug 19, 2025

Fascinating, but rushedThat's probably the best way I can put it. This story's premise has gone through a few iterations and landed on something quite interesting. I love the exploration of the main character's ability and all the funky ways it could be used. I love the worldbuilding and the potential for more. I once read a light novel called "Saving 80k gold for my retirement", and this fic is everything I liked about it and more.

This, however, leads to my singular, massive gripe I have with this story: pacing. I swear, the currently available story could easily be stretched to span 200+ chapters and would likely be better off for it. So many things are brought up only to be immediately pushed aside as the main narrative doesn't have time to explore them. Hell, we have:

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7 unique, expansive 'paths' of alien psychic powers.
A world full of city-states, ruled by superpowered nobles.
Moral conflict as a result of biological class segregation.
f**king superheroes are being used by nations as weapons, who are slowly dying without realizing why.
Alien invasion by way of magic crystals, which has also terraformed the city-state planet.
Dungeon-esque exploration as a result of available riches and the need to stop the zombie horde.
Ultra-advanced tech capable of building supercomputers the size of chicken nuggets and 3d printers that can build anything.

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And yet, literally all those points are never properly explored for more than a chapter. The first point, in fact, is shown off in a single chapter, then never explored again.

One world is saved/conquered in ~14 chapters, and the other is dominated in the 9 chapters after that. The initial start of the story is longer than each of those. No, that is not an exaggeration.

Bignt, I love your stories, but please: try not to burn yourself out so quickly. It hasn't gone well before.

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