- A Familiar PowerJan 23, 2021
- Midnight Nectar (Trigger Warning)Jan 21, 2021
- It’s Coming!Jan 19, 2021
- I Think, Therefore I GropeJan 18, 2021
- Familiar Choker (2)Jan 16, 2021
- Familiar Choker (1)Jan 12, 2021
- Tales Of Demons (And Familiars) (2)Jan 4, 2021
- Tales Of Demons(And Familiars) (1)Jan 4, 2021
- Chapel Of Demons(2)Jan 1, 2021
- Chapel Of Demons (1)Dec 31, 2020
- Kirlunst (2)Dec 31, 2020
- Kirlunst (1)Dec 28, 2020
- Fox-Tales (2)Dec 25, 2020
- Fox Tales (1)Dec 24, 2020
- Cute A.F.Dec 21, 2020
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The grammar is good, the worldbuilding is good, and the first few chapters are enjoyable, but the chapters following after the tutorial area are just frustrating, so I stopped reading.
As for the reasons I dropped the story:
Chapter 20: The threesome comes off as rape-y, with Agni's succubus instincts overpowering her actual desires and the other two taking advantage of this fact. Also, Abeni's reason for wanting to dominate Agni comes off as petty when one considers that Abeni's defining character trait this far in the story is "s*xual harassment."
Chapter 22: Agni and Katrin's stuff was stolen by the three stooges (these three don't really seem evil, just frustratingly douchy). It is also shown that all three are manipulative backstabbers.
Chapter 23: Agni reacted too calmly to the incident, as if she is okay with being taken advantage of (basically a doormat character).
Chapter 24: The flash-forward was the last straw for me. It just shows the protagonist being abused, stomped on, and stabbed by a random guy three months into the future. Talk about a sudden tone shift.
This story really needs a "Manipulative Characters" tag
even if it's only for chapters 20-22.
This is also my first review so take it with a grain of salt.
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The pacing is perfect for me, and I love it. Not everyone will. Read it and leave if you dont, but give it a chance.
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