The grammar is good, the worldbuilding is good, and the first few chapters are enjoyable, but the chapters following after the tutorial area are just frustrating, so I stopped reading.

As for the reasons I dropped the story:

This story really needs a "Manipulative Characters" tag

This is also my first review so take it with a grain of salt.

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The story and world are intriguing and fairly well written, though not exactly what the author intends. (This is based off of posts  in the comment sections.) Unfortunately the majority of the smut scenes do not include any consent (aka they are rape) and that just isn't what I was looking for when I read this.

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I really enjoy most of this novel but fact that the MC is constantly emotionally abused and just forgives/ignores the culprits is just too much for me to continue with. 

P.S. I would add a girls love tag.

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The story starts well, the protagonist is not a f**king pervert and most of his thought are because he becames a succubus yes not incubus but succubus. He is your typical japanese harem protagonist. He just CAN'T let go, is so exaxperating that I have a knot in my throat while reading this. You are a succubus a lust demon can you act as one? Well, if you are expecting a very smuty story go away. If you want a story like "Kumo desu ga?" but with a SIMP succubus go ahead.

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Basically skimmed chapter 60 to 110. As of about chapter 60, MC hasn't had s*x (that we've seen) since chapter 22 or so. What is even the purpose of writing a story with a succubus as the main character if they don't actually have any s*x? With anyone? Ever? Seriously, it might as well not be tagged smut at this point. If someone could direct me to when MC starts actually being a succubus I'd be glad to pick it back up from whatever chapter that is, but I'm fed up at this point. (Not like every story has to be full of s*x, I'm not some insatiable horn dog, but when you make the main character a succubus and title the story my succubus system, I expect the LITERAL s*x demon to have s*x more often then once every hundred chapters.)

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I was going into this looking for some trash to pass the time but got a pleasant surprise the first few chapters kinda went as I expected but after a while it kinda just stopped the s*x scenes I mean sure there is still some crumbs of erotic stuff but it got dropped except for the villain but that's like a few sentences not that much compared to the start tbh I don't know how I feel about this novel on one hand I want to see more development in powers and setting and see a grind of all skills and on the other hand I want garbage a tough choice as it is as of writing this is keeping a sense of normalcy and balance with what it's doing so I can't complain I just hope that the author goes in the right direction and has a plan anyway I think if you want trash then then this is decent but you could find better if you want to see cool abilities different paths moral questions with a light dose garbage every now and then your in luck because this is that this is very reminiscent of the second coming of gluttony but more light hearted and fun I think this novel is always improving and I hope it keeps up the trend until the end this is my first review so I hope I did well also this should be at 4.3 at least Jesus 

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Worldbuilding is decent but expect abuse to be constantly heaped onto a traumatized MC for their "own good" and her to accept that and consider it normal. The litrpg element itself is not that great; the MC gains exp from s*xual situations yet actively avoids them until forced. I went through most of the available chapters hoping it would improve. It did not. If anything it went further down the rabbit hole with the MC being abducted, restrained and forcing into an "intervention" to remove her reservations about s*x triggering a full on ptsd episode. Their solution to this, is to punish her with "s*xual torture" if she doesn't complete assigned tasks. Anyway I'd avoid if you're fetish isn't normalized abuse and corruption/moral degeneration. At least the tagging is correct. 160+ chapters and no romance, just gals being pals.

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Contrary to what the other reviews are saying, there is no rape, and the s*x scenes are no different from any of the other r-18 novels on this site. There is no rape.

Great novel, interesting plot and well developed characters.

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[After awakening in a new world a young man changes his life drastically by becoming a busty, lust craving succubus?

Adventia, world of fantasy, where adventurer classes of all types live and thrive. Our intrepid hero acquires the Succubus class, transforming her into a carnal loving she-demon with a desire for all things erotic! In fact, to level he (I mean, she) must lewd!

My Succubus System is a progressive fantasy isekai adventure with themes of s*xual exploration.]

This novel was a major disappointment for me, I'm not saying it is bad but is dosen't reflect what the title and synopsis would lead one to expect upon reading it, the synopsis would lead a new reader to think this is a novel about a man turned into a "lust craving succubus", "a carnal loving she-demon with a desire for all things erotic", instead we get a MC who can't accept the situation he is in, he doesn't identify as a women and actively avoids s*xual situations as much as he can, the synopsis would make you think the MC would have to have s*x sometimes just to level "in fact to level he (I mean she) must lewd!" but the MC decides to level by killing mobs like a regular adventurer.

My last complaint is from the s*x scenes that do happen, most of them are not from the mc's choice, most are him being forced into the situation.

I'm not trying to be overly negative about the novel, it's not for me but others might like it, if the synopsis gets changed to reflect the mc's personality and what to expect from the novel I would change my star rating.

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An interesting story with lots of character development. Indeed as the story goes on it seems that the class given to some characters reflect their past lives in some way. There is s*x, but it is kept light on details on the whole. There is one scene other reviewers have had complaints about. I would say it is ambiguous as to what is occurring and more detail would have cleared up the problems surrounding it. Story and growth wise I would give it full marks, but there are afew things that just jarr for me reading it.

- There are some words that have been used in the wrong tense and some chapters that need editing more.- I would prefer it if the writer would use one system of measurement and stick with it, you give heights etc in imperial, adding metric afterwards is disjointed and breaks the narrative and accuracy is not needed in a story unless it is of significant importance.- Boobs,   need to be given more detail. Using cup sizing is lazy and inaccurate in a bad way. They can fit three different sizes of cup which is why they are a bad form of measurement.

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