- Chapter 110: Arrive The Grand Finale — Chronicler VS OrwellJan 21, 2021
- Chapter 109: Lore, Lightning and CoronerJan 13, 2021
- Chapter 108: Prelude to Chronicler Vs OrwellJan 5, 2021
- Chapter 107: Triumph of HeavenDec 29, 2020
- Chapter 106: The 2nd BoutDec 23, 2020
- Chapter 105: Spoiler! She lost and we all saw it coming.Dec 17, 2020
- Chapter 104: Who the F sent a Dark Soul Boss here?Dec 13, 2020
- Chapter 103: Dawn Ignite IIDec 9, 2020
- Chapter 102: Dawn Ignite IDec 2, 2020
- Chapter 101: Eves of Venistalis’ FinaleNov 26, 2020
- Chapter 100: I come. I see. I negotiate.Nov 18, 2020
- Chapter 99: Invincible NotNov 11, 2020
- Chapter 98: Horizon Dawn Vs Orwell Mehest (Mode: Vengeance)Nov 4, 2020
- Chapter 97: Horizon Dawn Vs Orwell LV: 3.5Oct 28, 2020
- Chapter 96: Ill Feelings & Boss PreviewOct 21, 2020
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I read the first five chapters, and here is my impression. Overall, the story is okay. The plot is good, unique, has room to develop, and is interesting. However, one glaring mistake makes this story so much worse in my eyes. The grammar. A few mistakes are okay here and there, but there should not be multiple mistakes in every paragraph. What I recommend working on the most is verb tenses. To sum it up, "Read this story makes me want to jumped into a hole." This kind of grammar need to be fixed. Grammarly is a great tool to help with this, and you can also look up info about how to properly use verb tenses to help with your current issue. Also, you can always ask readers to help. I often point out mistakes I notice in the comments, so authors can fix them and improve. In fact, I was going to do that for this story, but there are simply too many mistakes to fix. However, I am still able to point out broader issues, such as improper tense usage. To sum it up, grammar makes the story so much less enjoyable than it should be. Many authors underestimate the importance of grammar, but I never see stories with bad grammar able to consistently stay at the top rankings. IF you want to improve as an English speaker and writer, fixing this should be your top priority.
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