Rank S (Power Level): 30230
Rem Breaker
Heavenly Knight
Stat
Str: 3730 [A*2]
End: 3500 [A*2]
Mag: 7600 [S]
Wis: 11050 [S*2]
Dex: 4350 [A*2]
Skill
Active
Wisdom Eye [S] -- Expansion of Clairvoyance from S-rank Wisdom. Rem can ability to browse the Trace the Astral Conciousness reach the point he could read opponent status, and the detail function of their ability. With enough unerstanding he could even replicate the technique he analyze with [Tenshou] and [Reality Breaker]
Arrival of Dream [N/A] — True Magic: Rem possesses the ability to summon a phenomenon with lore of his own creation into reality by using his True Magic as a fuel. Limitation: Stamina Drain. Range is limited in his Territory.
Tenshou [SS] -- The greatest Master of Tenshou bar none He is capable of Mental cloaking Telekinesis of both brutish power and precise, Telekinetic shield, Astral Projection, Dream walking, Mind trick, Illusion, and mental attack
Contract (Central) [SS]-- Through contract with Central, Rem gain manipulation over psychokinetic Energy
Origin Encroachment [S]-- Allow his Origin to encroach reality, boosting his power and influence even further to the point he is pretty a much a god with his [Territory]
Passive
Garden World Origin [S]--His Origin Substantially boosted all his stat
Territory [A]-- Range: 100 m
Reality Breaker [EX]
The Way of Optimism [N/A]
Clairvoyance [A] — With all of his mental and Telekinetic ability, his [Clairvoyance] is the strongest bar none. Rem sparring with Satholia allowed him to push Clairvoyance to the point he can limitedly evade her attack. It is a breakthrough that pushes his predictive ability past mortal limit.
Enlightened Trajectory [SS] — Through Satholia's training and merciless sparring, Rem learns to optimize his prediction and combat skill in the level of an art. By grasping the past, present and the future, he could respond in every combat situation in an enlighten state. His attack wouldn't miss. And his control unbreachable.
— EAPS —
Illusory World Atop the Poppy Field: Remember when Rem needed to break mental defense to mind fuck someone. Good times. Now, his illusion is invading the very fabric of reality.
Tenna-no-Ken
Illusory Armor
Central Magnum
Rank S: 31350
Luxinna Latoria
Knight of Glass
Stat:
Str: 5350 [S]
End: 5500 [S]
Mag: 8200 [S]
Wis: 2000 [A]
Dex: 10300 [S*2]
Skill
Active
Serene Glass [S]
Bioglass [S]
Arms Creation [S]-- Forget glass. Her usage of [Echo] and vast experience handling weapon allowed Luxinna to instantly create weapon from memory with Serene Glass.
Animal Communication [B]
Edge of ADA (S)
Passive
Child of Lightning (SS)
Atop the Steel Peak [SSS]
Beast of Blade (S); Tactical Form [A], Defensive Mastery [A], Savage Form [S]--All her combat style combine with natural predator instinct hone by the edge of death. Her blade work transcend into the realm that make the monster sweat.
Vein of Thunder God [SS]; Electro Lorde (S), Electro Gift (S), Electro Genesis (S)-- Bioglass Vein and supremes mastery of lighting arcane push the elf to the pinnacle of lightning art.
—EAPS—
[Assault Fauna]
[Guard Fauna]
[Tag Fauna]
[Jewel Sword] — An Arcane focus on gathering and compressing liquid glass and augmenting it damage with Arcane. The liquid glass can extend the sword reach [Extension] or supercharge with higher heat and Kinetic Energy as beam attack [Salvation]. Luxinna can also compress the supercharge blade into single slash, embedding the super-dense high energy glass coating into the target and detonate it later [Golden Cleave].
Rank S: 32060
Melody Solarmaria
Star Forger
Str: 8250 [S]
End: 9100 [S]
Mag: 8100 [S]
Wis: 2450 [A]
Dex: 4160 [A*2]
Skill
Active
Void Surfer Manifestation [A]-- Melody’s True Magic is a manifestation-type enabling her to manifest the power of a dragon. Melody’s chosen species is the Void Surfer, an elusive dragon known for faring in deep space and thus immunity to absolute zero temperature, various radiation and extreme pressure in vacuum environment.
Scarlet Brand Soul-gazer [SS]; Heavenly Eye (A), Maximum Circuit (A), Link Conciousness (B), Authority (A), Spirit Drain (C), Soul Servant (B)
Forging [S]
Dravritra [S]
Geo Lorde (S), Geo Gift (S), Geo Genesis (S)
Pyro Lorde (S), Pyro Gift (S), Pyro Genesis (S)
Passive
Dragon Reactor [A] — Melody Origin that is akin to internal Fusion reactor allowing her to funnel almost bottomless energy
Dragon Warlord [SS]-- Combine from Martial Art (Dragon), Draconic Essence, Armory Grace, Savage Form — Experience in sparring Satholia, boosted Melody's tenacity, instinct, weapon skill, and draconic control to a level it touch the realm of the apex even amongst the dragon.
Anima Enchanting [S] — capable of instilling a function into anything as a soul. It the skill that rewrote the body's fundamental nature itself.
—EAPS—
Soul-gazer (Scarlet Brand Soulgazer + Dragon Reactor)
+Astra-- Soul-base Plasma Canon
+Ara-- Soul-base Plasma Canon blend as weapons
+Vajra-- Soul-base Authority Barrier
Soul Servant (Scarlet Brand Soul-gazer + Other Arcane)
+Dravritra-- A Dragonic Mode funneling the power of Dravritra Arcane.
Rank S: 30410
Hikma De Darwin
Chronicler of Arcane
Stat
Str: 2220 [A]
End: 3800 [A*2]
Mag: 13850 [S*2]
Wis: 5800 [S]
Dex: 4740 [A*3]
Skill
Active
ELEMENTAL LORD (SSS); Aqua Lorde (S), Aqua Genesis (S), Aqua Gift (S), Aero Lorde (S), Aero Genesis (S), Aero Gift (S), Cryo Lorde (S), Cryo Gift (S), Cryo Genesis (S), Geo Lorde (S), Geo Gift (S), Geo Genesis (S), Holy Lorde (S), Holy Gift (S), Holy Genesis (S), Pyro Lorde (S), Pyro Gift (S), Pyro Genesis (S), Electro Lorde (S), Electro Gift (S), Electro Genesis (S), Umbral Lord (S), Umbral Gift (S), Umbral Genesis (S)
Tenshou (A)--weaker than Rem due to lack of dedication
Paradiso (S)
Necta Floral (S)
Entropy (S), Reverse Entropy (S)
Tempo (S)
Realm of Conceptual Ink [SS]
- Denizen: Aegis (S), Yotun (A), Surtr (S), Terrafon (A), Mistral (S) , Tempest (A), Oceana (B), Yaga (B)
Passive
Defensive Mastery [A]
Memoria Revision [N/A] — Eidetic Memory
World Supreme Magus [SSS] — Hikma achieved the unprecedented feat of learning every single Elemental base Arcane of Umbral, Holy, Pyro, Aqua, Geo, Aero, Electro and Cryo. This combines with his Meditation Skill, Psychometry and focus, allows him to understand Supernatural Phenomenon at the level of Hecate, Odin and Thot — calling him a Lord of Magic wouldn't be an understatement.
Father of Conceptual Spirit [EX]
—EAPS—
[Nimbus]
[Tempest]
[Trinity]--Triple layer defence of [Paradisio], [Entropy] and [Tempo]
[Nicholas]-- Combining Conceptual Seal and Arcane to create a win condition
Rank A (Power Level): 40600
Samael Wayward
Blue Fire God
Stat
Str: 8500 [S]
End: 9000 [S]
Mag: 12600 [S*2]
Wis: 1900 [A]
Dex: 8600 [S]
Skill
Active
Speed-reading [B]
Tenshou [S]
Magic Circuit Construction [A]: With Worldly Enlightenment. He breakthrough in understanding the root runic art. Instead, he coded the magic into the air itself.
Physiological Foresight [A]
Passive
Poison Resistance (B)
Determination of Jaggernaunt
(S)—Wayward’s determination is superhuman. Demoralizing him is a
fool's errand and his determination cannot be stopped. He
can endure the amount of pain, stress and injuries that kill
most people a thousand times over and keep going strong. His pain
tolerance was greater than any god. Such an unstoppable determination won
the rank of (S).
Martial Art (S): A
multiplier gain from the user attainment in close combat.
Worldly Enlightenment [S]: Meditation into Mana to achieve the understanding of Astral Conciousness
The Fire Bird [S]; Pyro Lorde [S],
Pyro Genesis [S], Pyro Gift [S]-- The blue flame he wield mix with the inner Amalgram of fire bird. Wayward's fire far surpass the phoenix with his body reforge.
Body of Paragon [S]-- This man have reach the pinnacle where he can impart hot iron-strike to every part of his elestic body... achieving the toughness of steel and the elasticity of rubber upon the baptism of fire.
Original move — [Blue Spear] (torch beam), [Blue Flail] (Tornado), [Blue Axe] (volcano), [Blue Pulse] (suction and counter), [Blue Leap] (Fire propulsion + Blink), [Blue Sword] (chain saw fire slash)
Power level 10500
Shyme Enma
Martial Mage
Stat
Str: 1675 [A]
End: 2025 [A]
Mag: 4500 [A]
Wis: 350 [C]
Dex: 1950 [A]
Skill
Active
Business Savvy (A) — Ability to find and spot Wealth and opportunity
Rapid-spell casting (B) — Increase Spell Casting speed and reduce Mana cost in Rapid cast
Quick-learning (B) — Enhance learning speed
Divine Beast Raiment (S) — Double all stat for a duration. The user stats are half for an hour for every minute of activation.
Mana Analysis (A) — Ability to read the composition of Mana
Passive
Martial Art (C)
Divinity [B] — Authority or closeness to natural Mana manipulation
Goddess Origin (Divine Beast) [S] — Shyme's mana core representing her skill and potential as a goddess enhancing growth, stats, and skills capability.
Divine Beastmen Physiology [B] — Shyme's ability as a beastman such as increasing recovery, resistance to magic and injury and above average physical stats. Condition to use Raiment. Mix with divinity allow the user to recover Mana from surrounding.
Fire Affinity [A]
Wind Affinity [B]
Cytortia
Priestess of Life
Stat
STR: 55 [E]
END: 3200 [A]
MAG: 3000 [A]
WIS: 2500 [A]
DEX: 250 [D]
Skill
Active
Sage Force [S]--Power to increase inherrent Natural value of substance essentially improving a grass into an immortal medicine or a crystal to a magical one
Tir Na Soal [S]--TIme Control that returns all phenomena back to its optimal natural state. A barrier which rewinds all curses and damages to its raw material.
Alchemy [S]
Necta Floral [SS]
Paradisio [S]-- Barrier Arcane
Defensive Form [C]
Surgery [A]
Passive
Benevolence Core [EX]-- The skill possessed the demerit of making its user incompatible with the concept of attacking in exchange on near unmatched skill in defenses and utilities. Growth of all forms magnified in her presence. Cy could learn any crafting and defensive technique with a mere skimming. Her Mana heals injuries and calm life of all forms while her mind utterly laughed at mind-control, restriction and mental corruption.
Beneficences Physiology [SS]-- granted unmatched life-forces, regeneration and utterly halted Cytortia’s age in her twenties — effectively made Cytortia immortal from anything short of cellular disintegration. Her cells constantly emitted a sweet-smelling, soothing pheromone which cleanse poison and curse.
Bio Empathy [SSS]--allowed Cytortia to deduce optimum method to nurture and befriend life by interpreting their preference at Biochemical and Manalogical scale, but cause her to over-empathize with all form of life.
"Hello there!"
A goddess in white rolled on a blackboard.
"Welcome to the Satholia's class for Magic 101 in which we learn the key basics of Phantasia's Magic." Satholia declared. "Our first lesson will focus on Skills."
"As you saw with Rem, Power Level didn't translate to everything in a fight. Skills and tactics also play an important role. But do you ever wonder what Skill is? What separates Scathach's flashy spear-throwing moves from Rem's [Arrival of Dream]? Well, here is the answer!"
"Skill is the crystallization of a person mastery over their craft. It represents an ability to perform an action that is acknowledged by the World. [Sword Mastery], [Water Walking], [Pain Tolerance], [Super speed]; those are simple activities that can be performed above humanity's limit and are thus registered as a concept by the Astral Consciousness. Now we will talk about Astral Consciousness in a future lesson."
"The flashy moves Scathach used is just that: impressive technique. It is a human construct built on Mana and implying no mastery over a craft. Thus it suiting for such a move is acknowledged by society but not the Astral Consciousness. The exception to this is True Magic, which is recognized as a mastery of oneself. Essentially, [Almighty Sword One Heaven] is just how to swing a sword and Mana to create a crater invented by a Swordmaster high on Eight-grade syndrome. It doesn't tell you that the user has a [Holy Attribute Mastery] or [Sword Mastery]."
Satholia blinked.
"What is the True Magic? Don't worry, we will learn about True Magic next lesson."
Satholia continued.
"Now, back to Skills. Skills can be desperate into passive and active. Active Skills, such as [Knife Throwing], required conscious action like throwing a knife to activate. Passive Skills such as [Goddess Core] are either active permanently or activate instinctively to the point it is instantaneous. Also noted that the potency of the Skills sorted into the division of E, D, C, B, A, S, SS, SSS, and Ex. E is human-level, and Ex is Universe breaking ridiculous. Meanwhile, immeasurable Skills, either because of its hidden nature or raw potential, are reserved as N/A. Rem's [Way of Optimism] is one such N/A category. Also, remember that some Skills can combine to evolve. Cytortia [Alchemy] is one such combined Skill."
The goddess waved.
"Lesson over! Have a nice day!"
'The second lesson is focused on power-system."
'The oldest is the Cultivation Technique. This system relies on gathering of atmospheric Mana, refined it, and stored the product as Ki. As the amount of Qi in the body increase, and thus strengthening the physical and magical ability of a person resulting in growth. Qi can also be used to utilize a technique; both physical and magical.'
'Overall, Cultivation stress power stockpiling and Qi purity as its main focus.'
'Meanwhile, the most widely used system in Phantasia is Spell-casting. Spellcasting attempts to copy the god [Divine Core] by creating and growing the core made out of pure Mana. This core essentially acted as a fuel tank to perform spells.'
'Unlike techniques from the cultivation-era which focus on manipulating Qi into a specific pattern in the Merridan, Spell-casting utilizes its output by running Mana through a specific code, creating a magical circle which releases the spells. In this case, the core density, users' elemental affinity, and the spell-payload take a focus'
'Finally, we talk about Horizon Dawn's personal invention: True Magic.'
'Instead of taking outside energy and refined it, True Magic focus on the soul and the Metaphysic. It materializes physic defying power specific to the individual physic and Mana built a bridge that strengthens the connection. As the user connection with the Astral consciousness of the multiverse grew more powerful, the True Magic will evolve. Which lead to its unique feature called Legends. Legend is the trail set by Astral consciousness to test the True Magic-user. This is done because True Magic-user lacks quantifiable limit and insane growth-rate."
'For True Magic, self-reflection, ideal and unwavering faith is the strongest force of all.'
'Now student, we will talk about Mana'
'Mana or the lifeblood of realities is the fluid create from the continual grinding of the All-powerful forces of the Center and the Malice--an omnipotent paracausal forces that is warring since the dawn of time using multiple tactic and strategy to contest for Multiversal supremacy and expansion in its influence.'
'Mana exists in all thing but only specific world have access to it. It can be refined in internal energies, condense into a [Core] both naturally and unnaturally, and burn to fuels spells. Its existence creates the foundation of modern day Spell-crafting and Cultivation. Mana is accessible in the planet atmosphere, but are more abundant in the life vein in the planet crust. These vein or the Leyline are the strategic location to build fortification due to huge natural Mana advantage. This is especially true for the place 2 or more Leyline cross or the Leynode.'
'As an organization, Horizon Dawn pioneers their very own style of Mana usage--True Magic. Instead of burning Mana or altering it, Horizon Dawn member nurture Mana, forming a connection with energy stream in the paracausal force Mana originated and used its to grow their natural True Magic. In combat, Horizon Dawn member used Mana to siphon raw energies from the paracasal well like a straw and used it to fuel their True Magic.'
'While cultivator's Cultivation Technique and mage's [Mana Core] relies on finite internal storage of Mana. My Horizon Dawn's knight relies on an infinite well of power in the paracasal space like I do. This mean a knight of Horizon Dawn will not run out of power. However, conducting such power will burden the body and might tax thier stamina after a massive exertion.'
'Exposure to Mana also strengthening physical and magical capability this is equally true for Mages and Cultivator. But for the Knight of Horizon Dawn, it is more like a modification than strengthening as their body slowly adapt themselves to fit their true magic. In some case a knight can even manually modify their body.'
'Class Dismiss'
Sunny Licensing Act: Through the Congressional power, Extrapolated Arcane Propagation Subroutine (EAPS) is formally recognized by the Congress as an alternative to Cultivation Technique and Spell-craft. To promote the development of EAPS, the ownership and licensing authority over EAPS or any unique invention is formally recognized and protected by the Congress. The first inventor who demonstrated the novelty and method of the EAPS will be reward with the patenting license and thus recieve permission to charge licensing contribution point to teach the working of the EAPS to any other members.
Shyme Enma's Redundancy Act: Through the Congressional power, the security risk proven by Shyme Enma have been recognized. Councillor Remus Breaker must dally checked her royalty through usage of regular [Clairvoyance] should the risk of her betrayal either through coercion or otherwise emerge all memories of Horizon Dawn must be subtly altered and the guardianship of Chuang Tianshang (Charon Sol) will be transferred to either associate Marley the Magpie or Madam Marmel.
1.1 — [Child of ...] All elves have a passive skill that symbolized their close bond to nature. Some even have a rare variation. This skill grant increase affinity and resistance to mention element.
1) We of Horizon Dawn are protector of Truth, Justice and Freedom. Dissection of Falsehood will lead to truth. Truth will lead to accountability and justice. Justice will lead to peace. Through peace, happiness, freedom and progress will prosper.
2) Horizon Dawn shall not impose fate beyond redemption. Sanctity of life is law and rehabilitation will be the first goal in mind.
3) With Great power comes Great Responsibility—If innocents are in danger, all members of Horizon Dawn must do the best in their power to save them.
4) Horizon Dawn will not surrender sovereignty to a foreign body.
5) Openly encouraged, healthy attachment is. Alienate the Civilian body or condemned love, Horizon Dawn will not.
6) The Congress of Hope will engineer the law, drafted by the Councilors led by a Director and overseer by the Queen of Center. The Queen is the commander-in-chief, able to issue an absolute directive to the Congress. In ruling, Councilors and the Director held a vote each. The Director are free to alter the Congress as long as agreed by the Queen of Center and the Councilors.
7) The Constitution of Dawn is unamendable. Do. Not. Try.
- Chapter 170: We of the Media apologize for our slight Bias reporting (THE END… For now)Feb 26, 2022
- Chapter 169: The World Smartest Man and the coming endFeb 23, 2022
- Chapter 168: Outrage! Pygmy dare assault an innocent Duke amidst social protest!Feb 16, 2022
- Chapter 167: Why you shouldn’t invite Nereo into a world warFeb 9, 2022
- Chapter 166: Nothing Happen it the Hidden Vault! NOTHING AT ALL!Feb 2, 2022
- Chapter 165: Local Superhero assault a fiery but mostly peaceful protest.Jan 26, 2022
- Chapter 164: Before the SnafuJan 19, 2022
- Chapter 163 Local Conspiracy Theorist Accuses Foreign Ambassador of ConspiracyJan 12, 2022
- Chapter 162: Local Superhero Incite the Youth toward Violence.Jan 5, 2022
- Chapter 161: The Inevitable ComethDec 28, 2021
- Chapter 160: Terrorist and Superhero abused PTSD Victim! More news at Eleven.Dec 22, 2021
- Chapter 159: Outrageous! Superhero Invade Private Property with a Terrorist!Dec 15, 2021
- Chapter 158: Superhero secret meeting with Terrorist! Betrayal!?Dec 8, 2021
- Chapter 157: Award Winning Doctor succeed in a Life-saving Surgery! Everything is Ethical!Dec 1, 2021
- Chapter 156: Local Superhero employed inhumane torture! The perversion of Childhood!Nov 24, 2021
I read the first five chapters, and here is my impression. Overall, the story is okay. The plot is good, unique, has room to develop, and is interesting. However, one glaring mistake makes this story so much worse in my eyes. The grammar. A few mistakes are okay here and there, but there should not be multiple mistakes in every paragraph. What I recommend working on the most is verb tenses. To sum it up, "Read this story makes me want to jumped into a hole." This kind of grammar need to be fixed. Grammarly is a great tool to help with this, and you can also look up info about how to properly use verb tenses to help with your current issue. Also, you can always ask readers to help. I often point out mistakes I notice in the comments, so authors can fix them and improve. In fact, I was going to do that for this story, but there are simply too many mistakes to fix. However, I am still able to point out broader issues, such as improper tense usage. To sum it up, grammar makes the story so much less enjoyable than it should be. Many authors underestimate the importance of grammar, but I never see stories with bad grammar able to consistently stay at the top rankings. IF you want to improve as an English speaker and writer, fixing this should be your top priority.
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