It is an absolutely amazing story, that makes you sympathize with her and her struggles. I don't believe it will be coming back. Sorry I can't give full stars to a dead story.
I found this story last night and lost a lot of sleep reading it. To any potential readers, it is definitely worth your time. This is a fantastic tale.
The story is great so far! I read up to Ch.21. The plot happens at a perfect pace, with pretty nice english to make reading experience great.
Elania is a very humane character, she suffers and learns and grows from her experience. It doesn’t have a very Monster-protagonist feel yet, but the story is doing perfectly fine. The status windows are maybe not structured enough, but that hardly hampers readers. The fantasy elements are good, detailed but obscure enough to tease and come back for more!
It is slightly lacking on internal monologue for character development for now, but is very well profiled anyway. Also, status levels are maybe a tad inflated, but that might very well be for author’s purposes, so we’ll have to wait and see.
The story itself is rather light most of the time with the dark parts usually coming from human interaction. The general feel and tone sways between 'It's not such a bad place' to 'f**k people, f**k organizations, and f**k everything in general, but f**k this one specific person for being the biggest piece of human scum in the history of everything' in my personal opinion.
The writing is fairly well executed with only minor issues when it comes to a couple of colloquialisms. Word flow is smooth, grammar is nice and tight, and the general worldbuilding while lacking in depth thus far is enough to get a feel for a few places.
Slimes are stupid!
Annoying little pests that don’t think about anything.
How would they? They don’t even have a brain.
They don’t even think about what they do, dissolving anything in their reach.
That
A group of rookie adventurers enter an ancient tomb in the hopes finding treasure
Within they found something priceless but it is not something they expected
Within lay an egg that held a species that existed since life began
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Jean Grey’s soul is fused with one’s of a recently deceased female geek who knows her marvel lore, as she realizes that she was in the Marvel universe, this new Jean Grey takes her destiny in hand to escape her dire fate.
I will
What do you have when you have a socially awkward young girl given a system that has stumbled upon a secret of the world that wasn’t meant to be discovered by someone like her? A recipe for disaster, that’s what. Just how will Zoey Win
It all started after I received that weird email…
What? Click the boxes to select the body type?
Want me to select a starting point?
Let me put in the name and be done with this, it’s getting late…
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Much better than the absolute majority of stories here so far, and it's only on chapter 9.
I didn't find any grammar faults and the MC so far is behaving like a human being, which is rarer than you would think on sites like this.
Also, it doesn't have harem so... Bonus star!
A well done first draft!
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Female lead✔️
No harem ✔️
Not gender bender✔️
Interesting ✔️
Give this book a read it’s nice
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It is an absolutely amazing story, that makes you sympathize with her and her struggles. I don't believe it will be coming back. Sorry I can't give full stars to a dead story.
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I found this story last night and lost a lot of sleep reading it. To any potential readers, it is definitely worth your time. This is a fantastic tale.
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A really exciting and well written story with mystery and adventure! Moar!
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The story is great so far! I read up to Ch.21. The plot happens at a perfect pace, with pretty nice english to make reading experience great.
Elania is a very humane character, she suffers and learns and grows from her experience. It doesn’t have a very Monster-protagonist feel yet, but the story is doing perfectly fine. The status windows are maybe not structured enough, but that hardly hampers readers. The fantasy elements are good, detailed but obscure enough to tease and come back for more!
It is slightly lacking on internal monologue for character development for now, but is very well profiled anyway. Also, status levels are maybe a tad inflated, but that might very well be for author’s purposes, so we’ll have to wait and see.
I can’t wait to read more of Elania’s adventure!
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A rather good read.
The story itself is rather light most of the time with the dark parts usually coming from human interaction. The general feel and tone sways between 'It's not such a bad place' to 'f**k people, f**k organizations, and f**k everything in general, but f**k this one specific person for being the biggest piece of human scum in the history of everything' in my personal opinion.
The writing is fairly well executed with only minor issues when it comes to a couple of colloquialisms. Word flow is smooth, grammar is nice and tight, and the general worldbuilding while lacking in depth thus far is enough to get a feel for a few places.
Overall, a nice read I would recommend.
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