Menu
Read
Series Ranking
Series Finder
Latest Series
Genre
Create
Forum
Scribble HubCreateForum
/ Series / Unfathomable Senior
Unfathomable Senior
Unfathomable Senior
1.35M Views 26645 Favorites 334 Chapters 4 Chapters/Week 2310 Readers
4.3 (239 ratings)
Read Add to Library
Synopsis

It all started after I received that weird email...

What? Click the boxes to select the body type?

Want me to select a starting point?

Let me put in the name and be done with this, it's getting late...

I always was bad with Chinese names... how about... Zhang Dong ... Hehe...

Wait why is everything going dark...

***I don't own the art, first time writing anything and English isn't my first language... so plz no bulli...

Made a discord server for the story: https://discord.gg/QZ5rpuC
Support me on Patreon! : https://www.patreon.com/kuropon

Genre
ActionAdventureComedyEcchiFantasyIsekaiLitRPGMartial Arts
Tags
Clan Building Comedic Undertone Cultivation Fantasy World Game Elements Immortals Level System Mythical Beasts Naive Protagonist Protagonist Strong from the Start Sect Development Transported into Another World Xianxia Xuanhuan
Show
  1. Chapter 3337 hours ago
  2. Chapter 332Jun 18, 2021
  3. Chapter 331Jun 16, 2021
  4. Chapter 330Jun 14, 2021
  5. Chapter 329Jun 12, 2021
  6. Chapter 328Jun 10, 2021
  7. Chapter 327Jun 8, 2021
  8. Chapter 326Jun 6, 2021
  9. Chapter 325Jun 4, 2021
  10. Chapter 324Jun 2, 2021
  11. Chapter 323May 31, 2021
  12. Chapter 322May 29, 2021
  13. Chapter 321May 27, 2021
  14. Chapter 320May 25, 2021
  15. Chapter 319May 23, 2021
    Table of Contents
    Write a Review
    • 5 stars 47% (8)
    • 4 stars 18% (3)
    • 3 stars 18% (3)
    • 2 stars 12% (2)
    • 1 stars 6% (1)
    Reset Filters
      New Phoenix77710
      Status: chapter 331

      I enjoyed reading this story as it's a fresh take on the Xianxia genre. The starting chapters are somewhat hard to bear but after Zhang Dong returns to his clan, the story improves drastically. 

      Read More

      0 Likes · Like
      New Eugenio
      Status: chapter 109
      Spoiler

      The story is okay. The problem is that the protagonist is just too stupid,   and incapable of be harsh. For example when he has to punish the members of his clan for f**king up the only thing he does is scolding them. Not even a harsh scolding just you did this wrong don't do it again...  Moreover he is Really naive, way too much. It spoils the story, the cliché of the misunderstanding is a bit unbearable

      [collapse]

      Read More

      0 Likes · Like
      Vyrphax
      Status: chapter 88

      Dropped this because MC is as generic as they come. Even after everything that happened, MC is still a pushover loser. MC barely learns his lessons and keeps making same mistakes over and over again. It also seems that the author doesnt know the diff between certain words like introvert and antisocial, innocent and naive as MC is always being described as an innocent introvert  but the truth is he's just a naive antisocial loser. Hes also ignorant. (pls do a research next time and use words properly...)

      Other characters are also generic and they only make things worse. In short, MC is a naive ignorant immature generic isekaid retard with unrealistic ideals and a system reliant wussy. Comedy is ok but its not enough to cover for a crappy MC.

      I really tried enduring mc's personality and kept reading but the experience was torture (to me). Even though MC is in his mid-late 20s (forgot exact age I dont wanna backtrack cuz its just too horrible for me) hes acting like a 12 yr old who doesnt know crap about how the world works... This story wouldve been better w/out this kind of MC. If mc's character setting was a little bit diff and he became a little bit better that would be enough to make this story wholesome and interesting (for me)

      If you can tolerate this kind if MC be my guest but if not, stay away.

      BTW MC loses his virginity but it doesnt do anything much to improve mc's crappy personality... 

      Overall this is a huge NO NO for me.

      (This review is my own personal opinion and I dont give 2 craps about what anyone would say about my review on this novel. You can also do the same to me and not also give a crap about what I said as we all have diff mindset, circumstances, experiences, taste, etc... And I will respect that.  Who knows, you might even like this novel, but I certainly dont)

      Read More

      19 Likes · Like
      Alvel
      Status: chapter 140

      Tldr: Interesting basic story which slowly grows into a really good story, and then gets killed by the cliffhangers. Not recommended. 

      It starts off with a very naive, cowardly and soft MC. So if you're looking for the typical "badass" MC who is great at everything, faceslaps/kills everyone around him, is a hipocrite and grows into an evil and arrogant prick, this is not for you.

      Characters: The MC and others around him have plenty of character development, which isn't fast. Because of this it can be irritating during the first chapters, but the end results are great. The author also takes the time to deepen and flesh out other characters. So you will read plenty of chapters without the MC, focusing on side characters. All of this makes for really well developed and entertaining characters. I personally like that you don't see the MC doing amazing things and appearing in every single chapter. 

      World: Starts off a little basic, since the author focuses mostly on characters and their deeds. But as the chapters go on the author improves greatly and covers this issue. 

      My problems with it:

      1. The repetitive cliffs. Way too many. So many that the story was ruined for me. The author makes it clear that there is an inminent threat which raises the tension, and the proceeds to write about something else. Then it seems the threat is coming again! Wait, no it's not. Threat! Tension! Just kidding guys. The author doesn't seem to know how to properly manage de tension yet and the story stopped being enjoyable. I think the author may be trying to maintain a high tension to keep the story "exciting". But he went overboard. 

      2. Explanations of things which can be inferred. I get that the author would want everyone to understand, but if you already get it, it's not enjoyable. 

      3. Long descriptions which could have been short, which makes me just skip paragraphs now and then.

      4. The grammar errors (which are fewer as you go on).  

      Read More

      15 Likes · Like
      sordahon
      Status: c179

      Excellent (a bit lower now) novel, MC is not a murderhobo, he is actually a likable guy. There are some cliches for comedic relief but MC is above them. He acts quite nice to others and is not a hypocrite like in CN.

      Fights are quite descriptive and nice to read, MC has plenty of cool techniques he does use and that have relevance in story. Other characters have their own goals and personalities.

      MC cheat is grindy kind and quite interesting. He also has crafting system with an interesting and funny way of making items.

      Overall I have nothing but praise here, CN and other authors of cultivation novels should learn from this story. It's diamond found inbetween trash arrogant murderhobo genocidal hypocrite main characters of other novels.

      Update: My opinion is a bit lower now due to author making MC quite horny later and overfocusing on descriptions of girls bodies.

      Read More

      13 Likes · Like
      XXII
      Status: some terms.

      Ive been sticking to reading this hoping that the mc's mentality will take a turn for the better. In the first chapters he was cowardly and awkward. Im not hoping that he would just go on a killing spree or something but theres a lot of instances where he can just kill one or few people to save a lot of time and trouble but he just smack them and let them go hoping they would take a turn for the better. While his mentality did improve alot (ch112 while writing this) I still think the character development is lacking. This should be titled "the pacifist in a cultivation world" or "spreading love and peace in a cultivation world"

      The reason as stated by the MC on why he just lets people run free (on the latest-ish chapters) is to test his people if they can handle situations which I think is only there as a filler as most of this people that he's trying to test are no name juniors that we probably wont see again. So instead of getting a character development of the side characters we know of (like gramps or the secretary guy I forgot his name coz what do u guess? Yea he doesnt even have a chapter for him) we get chapters like "no name junior police helps someone" "some people got helped by zhang clan juniors" while in the background we have the villians threatening to beat up MC (lol) or just planning to do this and this to ordinary peoples.

      That was long. In short ill give this a 3/5 its not bad but if u want a MC thats active and have a rapid or fast character development better look for something else.

      Read More

      7 Likes · Like
      madghost
      Status: c29

      this lacks an editor.

      That wall of text, there is only a 5 to 10% conversation and MCs inner monologue going on. The rest is just walls os exposition. Its a hassle to read. 

      I am not a gamer, but the first thing I do when playing a game whether with instructions or not, is to figure out what makes what work. With so much exposition, even idiots will do some experiments to look for fun. We get those moments but nothing really happens. MC reads explanations but does nothing to make them his own, nothing deep is done or shown.

       If there were chapter titles in this work, I could have read them and skipped the chapters. Cause its not worth it.

      My points may look extreme,   but this novel isn't doing anything praiseworthy. Just explanations and MC doing the worst possible thing or just bare minimum thing.

      I wasted my time trying to read it.

      Read More

      5 Likes · Like
      sabazurc
      Status: Chapter 168

      Good pacing and the story is grounded in reality (I am using the term loosely since this is a fantasy novel). One of the best original xianxias I've read. Even among Chinese ones, this would be up there near the top. Still, since it's only 103 chapters, for now, it would not be fair to compare to novels that have 300-500-1000+ chapters.  MC is kind (not a psycho) but not to a level of annoying, there is some world building and side characters are not completely hollow. There are some signs of personality growth in MC. If the author continues to write more chapters and develops story more and more, it can turn into a true gem.

      Read More

      5 Likes · Like
      rg1400
      Status: chapter 104

      This novel is well written.

      It's a breath of fresh air in all those hot-blooded novels. The system has been awesome with nothing going crazy fast or slow.

      Read More

      4 Likes · Like
      CBase
      Status: chapter 52

      The writing gets continously better. From chapter 30+ it gets very good. The worldbuilding and interactions are very realistic and enjoyable.I personally disagree with pretty much every decision MC makes. I wouldnt say I loath him but there is definitly hate!Damn you author for writing every other character so well, that I just cant drop it.

      Read More

      4 Likes · Like
      X
      Write a Review
      You must be logged in to rate and post a review. Register an account to get started.
      Follow Tip
      Similar Series
      I Was Stupid and Hit Someone With My Truck. Now, I Have To Prove That He Was Reincarnated In Another World
      By Cedestroyer
      Light Novel There’s so much isekai out there where the protagonist die because of trucks. What happens to the truck drivers? Van Driver is a self made man who lifted his family out of poverty by being the best truck driver of the
      What I’ve become a vampire loli!
      By RayVer
      All it took was one truck. The beloved truck-kun killed me and ruined my life. Or did it? Wait what’s this, a beautiful angel is going to reincarnate me, woah woah woah woah why am I a vampire loli!
      The Way of a Survivor
      By Hekon
      “As you only wish to live by your own hands be you in a weak or strong state you will now be granted that opportunity.” Tokito orphaned at a young age from his parents dying in a bank robbery saw what money does to people and n
      Scene Unlocker
      By Spaizzer
      A reincarnated prince with power of friendship straight out of a dating game, and he’ll use it to gather a harem and a band of brothers, to defeat the big bad guy that’s coming in three months! This is the adventure of Prince Ca
      Action Required
      You must be logged in to perform this action.