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Unfathomable Senior
Unfathomable Senior
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Synopsis

It all started after I received that weird email...

What? Click the boxes to select the body type?

Want me to select a starting point?

Let me put in the name and be done with this, it's getting late...

I always was bad with Chinese names... how about... Zhang Dong ... Hehe...

Wait why is everything going dark...

***I don't own the art, first time writing anything and English isn't my first language... so plz no bulli...

Made a discord server for the story: https://discord.gg/QZ5rpuC
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ActionAdventureComedyEcchiFantasyIsekaiLitRPGMartial Arts
Tags
Clan Building Comedic Undertone Cultivation Fantasy World Game Elements Immortals Level System Mythical Beasts Naive Protagonist Protagonist Strong from the Start Sect Development Transported into Another World Xianxia Xuanhuan
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  1. Chapter 202Sep 26, 2020
  2. Chapter 201Sep 24, 2020
  3. Chapter 200Sep 22, 2020
  4. Chapter 199Sep 20, 2020
  5. Chapter 198Sep 18, 2020
  6. Chapter 197Sep 16, 2020
  7. Chapter 196Sep 14, 2020
  8. Chapter 195Sep 12, 2020
  9. Chapter 194Sep 10, 2020
  10. Chapter 193Sep 8, 2020
  11. Chapter 192Sep 6, 2020
  12. Chapter 191Sep 4, 2020
  13. Chapter 190Sep 2, 2020
  14. Chapter 189Aug 31, 2020
  15. Chapter 188Aug 29, 2020
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      sordahon
      Status: c179
      Jan 20, 2020

      Excellent (a bit lower now) novel, MC is not a murderhobo, he is actually a likable guy. There are some cliches for comedic relief but MC is above them. He acts quite nice to others and is not a hypocrite like in CN.

      Fights are quite descriptive and nice to read, MC has plenty of cool techniques he does use and that have relevance in story. Other characters have their own goals and personalities.

      MC cheat is grindy kind and quite interesting. He also has crafting system with an interesting and funny way of making items.

      Overall I have nothing but praise here, CN and other authors of cultivation novels should learn from this story. It's diamond found inbetween trash arrogant murderhobo genocidal hypocrite main characters of other novels.

      Update: My opinion is a bit lower now due to author making MC quite horny later and overfocusing on descriptions of girls bodies.

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      XXII
      Status: some terms.
      May 5, 2020

      Ive been sticking to reading this hoping that the mc's mentality will take a turn for the better. In the first chapters he was cowardly and awkward. Im not hoping that he would just go on a killing spree or something but theres a lot of instances where he can just kill one or few people to save a lot of time and trouble but he just smack them and let them go hoping they would take a turn for the better. While his mentality did improve alot (ch112 while writing this) I still think the character development is lacking. This should be titled "the pacifist in a cultivation world" or "spreading love and peace in a cultivation world"

      The reason as stated by the MC on why he just lets people run free (on the latest-ish chapters) is to test his people if they can handle situations which I think is only there as a filler as most of this people that he's trying to test are no name juniors that we probably wont see again. So instead of getting a character development of the side characters we know of (like gramps or the secretary guy I forgot his name coz what do u guess? Yea he doesnt even have a chapter for him) we get chapters like "no name junior police helps someone" "some people got helped by zhang clan juniors" while in the background we have the villians threatening to beat up MC (lol) or just planning to do this and this to ordinary peoples.

      That was long. In short ill give this a 3/5 its not bad but if u want a MC thats active and have a rapid or fast character development better look for something else.

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      sabazurc
      Status: Chapter 168
      Mar 14, 2020

      Good pacing and the story is grounded in reality (I am using the term loosely since this is a fantasy novel). One of the best original xianxias I've read. Even among Chinese ones, this would be up there near the top. Still, since it's only 103 chapters, for now, it would not be fair to compare to novels that have 300-500-1000+ chapters.  MC is kind (not a psycho) but not to a level of annoying, there is some world building and side characters are not completely hollow. There are some signs of personality growth in MC. If the author continues to write more chapters and develops story more and more, it can turn into a true gem.

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      Vyrphax
      Status: chapter 88
      Aug 29, 2020

      Dropped this because MC is as generic as they come. Even after everything that happened, MC is still a pushover loser. MC barely learns his lessons and keeps making same mistakes over and over again. It also seems that the author doesnt know the diff between certain words like introvert and antisocial, innocent and naive as MC is always being described as an innocent introvert  but the truth is he's just a naive antisocial loser. Hes also ignorant. (pls do a research next time and use words properly...)

      Other characters are also generic and they only make things worse. In short, MC is a naive ignorant immature generic isekaid retard with unrealistic ideals and a system reliant wussy. Comedy is ok but its not enough to cover for a crappy MC.

      I really tried enduring mc's personality and kept reading but the experience was torture (to me). Even though MC is in his mid-late 20s (forgot exact age I dont wanna backtrack cuz its just too horrible for me) hes acting like a 12 yr old who doesnt know crap about how the world works... This story wouldve been better w/out this kind of MC. If mc's character setting was a little bit diff and he became a little bit better that would be enough to make this story wholesome and interesting (for me)

      If you can tolerate this kind if MC be my guest but if not, stay away.

      BTW MC loses his virginity but it doesnt do anything much to improve mc's crappy personality... 

      Overall this is a huge NO NO for me.

      (This review is my own personal opinion and I dont give 2 craps about what anyone would say about my review on this novel. You can also do the same to me and not also give a crap about what I said as we all have diff mindset, circumstances, experiences, taste, etc... And I will respect that.  Who knows, you might even like this novel, but I certainly dont)

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      Alvel
      Status: chapter 140
      May 27, 2020

      Tldr: Interesting basic story which slowly grows into a really good story, and then gets killed by the cliffhangers. Not recommended. 

      It starts off with a very naive, cowardly and soft MC. So if you're looking for the typical "badass" MC who is great at everything, faceslaps/kills everyone around him, is a hipocrite and grows into an evil and arrogant prick, this is not for you.

      Characters: The MC and others around him have plenty of character development, which isn't fast. Because of this it can be irritating during the first chapters, but the end results are great. The author also takes the time to deepen and flesh out other characters. So you will read plenty of chapters without the MC, focusing on side characters. All of this makes for really well developed and entertaining characters. I personally like that you don't see the MC doing amazing things and appearing in every single chapter. 

      World: Starts off a little basic, since the author focuses mostly on characters and their deeds. But as the chapters go on the author improves greatly and covers this issue. 

      My problems with it:

      1. The repetitive cliffs. Way too many. So many that the story was ruined for me. The author makes it clear that there is an inminent threat which raises the tension, and the proceeds to write about something else. Then it seems the threat is coming again! Wait, no it's not. Threat! Tension! Just kidding guys. The author doesn't seem to know how to properly manage de tension yet and the story stopped being enjoyable. I think the author may be trying to maintain a high tension to keep the story "exciting". But he went overboard. 

      2. Explanations of things which can be inferred. I get that the author would want everyone to understand, but if you already get it, it's not enjoyable. 

      3. Long descriptions which could have been short, which makes me just skip paragraphs now and then.

      4. The grammar errors (which are fewer as you go on).  

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      rg1400
      Status: chapter 104
      Mar 19, 2020

      This novel is well written.

      It's a breath of fresh air in all those hot-blooded novels. The system has been awesome with nothing going crazy fast or slow.

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      CBase
      Status: chapter 52
      Mar 11, 2020

      The writing gets continously better. From chapter 30+ it gets very good. The worldbuilding and interactions are very realistic and enjoyable.I personally disagree with pretty much every decision MC makes. I wouldnt say I loath him but there is definitly hate!Damn you author for writing every other character so well, that I just cant drop it.

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      madghost
      Status: c29
      Jun 13, 2020

      this lacks an editor.

      That wall of text, there is only a 5 to 10% conversation and MCs inner monologue going on. The rest is just walls os exposition. Its a hassle to read. 

      I am not a gamer, but the first thing I do when playing a game whether with instructions or not, is to figure out what makes what work. With so much exposition, even idiots will do some experiments to look for fun. We get those moments but nothing really happens. MC reads explanations but does nothing to make them his own, nothing deep is done or shown.

       If there were chapter titles in this work, I could have read them and skipped the chapters. Cause its not worth it.

      My points may look extreme,   but this novel isn't doing anything praiseworthy. Just explanations and MC doing the worst possible thing or just bare minimum thing.

      I wasted my time trying to read it.

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      viper
      Status: chapter 114
      Apr 11, 2020

      Great novel, with a decent plot development that keeps you entertained right the way through, with some funny one liners or references which is always nice to see.

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      Enlightened_Lord
      Status: chapter 127
      May 2, 2020

      It doesn't re-invent the genre and it has a bit of lukewarm naming sense regarding the skill flavours and attacks, but the MC is my favourite wuxua/xianxia one in a Very long time.

      Especially when the genre is saturated with murder hobos, psychopaths and self righteous hypocrits.

      The system was silly at times but it's fine since this story has the "Comedic Undertone" tag, but overall it's a decent system that while it seems broken, it is handled later on in a way that balances the MC OP-ness with the existence of challenging opponents, which is definitely good.  

      I personally liled the characters, aside from the regular young master goon here and there, the "villains" aren't too shabby and the supporting cast is kinda nice, some characters could use development though.

      To end this, its one of the better stories in its genre, read it.

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