As a reader, Cristopher always looked for things that entertained him, didn't matter what the "critics" said, all that matters was his own opinion on the novel, so he started reading "The Novel's Extra", a webnovel that despicts an author who is transmigrated to his own novel. It was fun and all with its own good and bad points, really, one of his favorites novels at the end of the journey, and that's taking into account the little fact that he didn't have too many things he was able to enjoy, not in that empty shell that was called life for him... Why could someone be born like that? With a void inside, an endless void that slowly consumes oneself...
But... for better or worse... everything changed one day, the same day he woke up to discover he had the same fate of the author whose novel he just finished reading, becoming an extra in a novel, becoming The novel's extra's extra...
/Ok, now that's the description I thought of... first of all, for those of you who are reading this, if any, a few points I have to make clear:
1. I'm not an english native speaker, so if you find anything wrong in the text, please let me know, that would help me learn, and I would be thankful for that.
2. I'm writting this out of pure "enjoyment", so while I'll try to be constant, I'll not make any promises.
3. True reason why I'm writing this is because I'm going through a moderate to crippling depression right now (and no, is not because anything trully bad and horrendous happened to me, it seems to have something to do with my brain's malfuctioning, among other things), and doctors told me to try writing as I enjoy reading. So yeah, this is more like a self-help excercise, to keep myself distracted while trying to be safe from my self.
4. I choose to make a fanfiction of "The Novel's Extra" as I don't trully know how to write, and because I really loved that webnovel, though there are some points I didn't particulary liked.
5. If you see some (let's be clear, really much) self insertion on this series, well, that may be me trying to escape reality, to which I make an early warning and disclaimer, and also ask for forgiveness, as I said before, this is more of an excercise, so don't take it too serious.
6. I'll be a slow writer, as I have to still check a few things from the novel, even when I've read it like 3 or 4 times already, and because I know shit about writing a novel or a series.
7. If you get to enjoy this, then that's good, I would be glad about it, maybe even more motivated, but I don't really expect this to be any good.
Thanks to you all who may, or may not, be reading this novel./
I'll be adding this to Royal Road, because why not, right?
Will be under the same username, well, almost, Dvelasquez.
When I first saw the title it made me laugh and that’s why I started reading it and it’s really enjoyable. People who read TNE should give it a try for the first few chapters, they will probably be hooked.
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I Will make it similar with Royal Road reviews (Overral, Style, Grammar, Story, Character)
Grammar: going to begin with grammar, as for a person whom is writing not at his mother language it's really good, I don't actually read searching for mistakes so, as a matter of fact, I almost never find it. It's pretty solid, one thing here or there but it's pretty good so far (and it's your first story also, we don't look for pro job here). We readers can always help also. 4/5
Style: In my opinion "style" is a personal thing and everyone has a way to express themselves. Changing pov's is a thing a enjoy a lot (However, I do think it's better if you just say who person it is, just like you were doing in the beginning, but it's you call and if you prefer the way it is now you should stay with it, doesn't impact negatively at all), and the way you make the characters dialogue it's super funny, sometimes I just laugh alone with Cristopher talking with others. 5/5
Story: Damn, i've never read "The Novel's Extra" so I can't say my opinion at all about things that you are changing Blob Melt Thumbs. I do get a few things that got different from the original due to Sherlock Holmes abilities and the way things are going you still have A LOT of space to work with, and I enjoy a lot that you are not rushing the original story and taking your time to show new dungeons, develop new characters and etcetera. It has a lot potential with Cris and Olivia past, you can always insert new things, and the devil's problem was a smart plot to make (even though it already exists in the original work, you made it bigger) . However I should say to you to make a few opponents that Cristopher CANNOT defeat, as a matter of fact, I believe that you must put a fight that he looses, making a character super strong has the problem that there is no suspense in fights, the reader will always expect the same and. Other thing is: Kill Important (someone important to Cris would be the ideal) characters, not a super colorful world, you can work with that (Of course, it is my opinion and you don't need to actually do it). 5/5 for now.
Character: The comments sad that the characters in the original story suck at the beginning, f**k yeah amazing job copying it to your story, they indeed are a bunch of assholes, tho I believe that with cris around they are not that sh*t as they would be (thank god pappa cris exists). I love the ML, he is fun, he has amazing interactions with the others (specially Hajin, Olivia and the tsundare waitress), he is NOT AFRAID OF women and actually makes s*x thank god, and you have his unknow past to develop him even more and also explain why he acts the way he does. Character development is crucial, and also the hardest thing to do, and you are doing it pretty well till now, I'm growing attached specialy with the ML and the people that he is training. 5/5
Overall: Damn, it is real good, probably top 3 in the novels i've read in this website. This novel has so much potential and you are doing an amazing job with it so far, and the most important thing is that I have fun reading it, which in my opinion is the biggest reason for people actually reading something. This is your first work and damn, it's super good. 5/5Blob Okay Hand
Oh, and the autor sad that the romance is not going to be an Harem... Yikes
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I got curious about this cause of the title (lol). But heck, this novel is great. If you have read TNE then you should try the first few chapters, you will quickly grow to love it.
I recommend it to those who wants to see more of Evandel and Rachel.
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Good novel, if you have read TNE and are not quite satisfied with the ending or how the characters turned out to be, this is your chance for resolution. There are minimal grammar mistakes and it is a fun read. If you're on the edge on this one, read it.
I'd give it at minimum of 10 to 20 chapters and if you still don't like it, then it's not for you.
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What's there not to like? I definetly reccomend this to people who aren't satisfied with the character development of some side characters in the original story (Rachel, Evandel, etc.). I especially love Yoo Yeonha's misunderstandings. Please try it if you have the time.
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Great novel, I just bing through all the chapter available in 1days because its that good
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???????????? Love it
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Amazing Novel Highly Recommended give it a try!!
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nice novel so far, I usually read at work so I don't get to sign in most times to comment, but I tryt o like and favorite where I can
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