Damn, this is a really cool novel. I haven't read something this good in a long time, especially since it's fanfic. The characters are developed very well and it was interesting to watch them. The plot is very well written, although at first glance it does not look like something special. The humor is good too. Now I really want to read the second book. I recommend reading to everyone else, you will not regret the time spent.

(English is far from my native language, so sorry if the above is painful to read)

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I loved it! I'm not a fan of fanfiction, or at lest I wasn't, but after reading this I can say that is one of the best, if not the best, of the novels I've read when it comes to comedy. It has an awesome balance between comedy, adventure, action and more comedy. XDMy only complain is that I read it in about 24h. Too f*n short!! XD

Thank you so much! 

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This is pure comedy with some action, the best part is that its mostly consistent.

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Not best yuri, but second to none naruto fic (for me, at least. Exceptional mix of humor and plot)

I have read half of story for 3 days and somehow tired of it, so slow pace to 1-3 chp per day, and story regain it charm 

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TL;DR: Story has cultivation, I hate cultivation, I still like the story. Fun story with op MC. Characters are good, powers are mostly cannon based. I rate first ~150 chapters 5 stars, next ~200 3.5-4

First things first, I don't like cultivation stories, never did probably never will. Neither have I actually watched or read the actual Naruto story past the first arc. Most of what I know is from summaries and other stories When I first read the first chapter and saw cultivation I dropped this story immediately. However I ended up coming back and giving it a chance and I actually enjoyed it. For those of you like me who hate cultivation stories this one is actually very light on cultivation for the first 100 chapters and it doesn't become a super significant part until around 300 chapters in.  Even when it does get into cultivation it doesn't devolve into collecting random artifacts and eating weird medicine to suddenly become a god. The main characters do become overpowered but not instantly or to the point where fights become pointless. A majority of their powers are based on the Naruto universe itself rather then cultivation shenanigans. The main characters themselves are pretty interesting and well written. The comedy and character interactions are good. One of the best parts of this story is how some characters are changed. The one that stand out the most is Naruto who instead of being an absolute moron winning fights only because of kuruma and talk no jutsu, actually has a brain and is a competent ninja while still being a fun goofball. The main thing that holds me back from giving it a 5 star is that the latter half of the story just falls off in terms of story. The first ~150 chapters have great story progression and character development while the latter parts ~250+ just devolve into smut and mediocre story telling.

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Alright. Let me start off by saying that this is one of the better self insert (reincarnation/transmigration or whatever) fanfics about Naruto out there. It's definitely not number one but it's still pretty high (I mean, I read like a hundred or more Naruto self-insert stories, there are plenty). 

My biggest complaint is that author keeps badmouthing anything that has to do with the Uchiha.

 Everytime an Uchiha comes into the picture you're gonna hear a complaint about how dumb, narcissistic, and all sorts of stuff there are about them, their family, and mainly Sasuke.

There was also that one point in the story where MC (Yuna) sees how Itachi started a slaughter and she didn't do anything to stop it, even though she realized the whole plot by herself.

I'm not saying that they are without their faults, but I believe writing a self insert story should focus on fixing the mistakes of the main story and starting a whole new plot. You just stopped Sasuke from going insane by fixing his seal, and instead made him really dumb by still going after his main goal with no changes whatsoever. 

You stopped a bunch of characters from dying, and now instead of making them do anything, they became some background characters because it was convinient and easier than doing anything with them.

Now, where was I going with this? I don't know! But it's still a decent story or whatever.

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Title should be "Ice Barbarian; Reborn as Naruto's twin sister"

This is great so far, I just hope it would continue to keep pushing the story

It is entertaining so 5 star for me. Keep it up

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Hard to find good and well-written fanfics here, luckily yours is just that. Nice!

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Seriously good Fan-fiction. Well written enough and actually enjoyable character interactions. I do hope that the author isnt afraid to deviate quite a bit later on, Especially when they get to Shippuden.

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