Grammar -     0/10

Absolutely terrible from a technical standpoint. I am going to go out on a limb and assume this was not written by a native English speaker; so this is not impacting the overall score.

Characters -    N/A

Plot -   3/10

Russia goes to another world? Okay I'll bite, it might be interesting. Modern Russia goes to another world? Oh, well.

That aside, even assuming something was lost in translation here most of the scenes and actions depicted seem incomprehensible. Why bother transitioning to a family home for the national announcement? It could have been written from the president's perspective. There was nothing about the home scene that made it feel Russian, and the generic family interaction took as much space as the announcement. All that space setting the scene up, and it was discarded without even inserting a reaction to the announcement.

Scene transitions seem rather frequent; but more than that, too abrupt. Add a line break or something between them. This seems more like a screenplay rather than a novel.

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The idea that, in 2024, Russia could defeat even the most pathetic of foes is laughable. They couldn’t fight their way out of a soggy paper bag, let alone take on a fantasy world.

Seriously, at least Gate involved the JSDF, who- despite having never fought a single war in their entire history thanks to Japan’s nonagressor status- at least actually have wargear that isn’t either cold war reject sh*t (90% of what is deployed in Ukraine rn), useless against anything Russia’s enemies have in their arsenal despite being literally their “most advanced weapons” (the T-14 Armata aka “The modern tank with the engine of a WWII Nazi tank destroyer that was famously unreliable” aka “That supertank that broke down in its first public appearance on live television” aka “Russia’s sacred cow that barely manages to achieve design standards that the west surpassed thirty years ago”), or is just plain f**king embarrassing (10 million dollar air defence system go bye bye at the hands of two American-made missiles and some commercially available RC drones literally the first day it was in action; get wrecked scrub).

Slava Ukraini. 

Also, what the f**k, this is literally just Vatnik Gate, this is f**king precious. 

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Plot- 0/10Plot seems dumb, not coherent, and is not following a linear line, let alone the fact there is massive time skips, as well dumb stuff like that "5000 year" life extension serum, that is just plain dumb. Characters- Characters? What's that?Grammar / Writing quality - 3/10

Feels like a non-English speaker doing the writing. There is a lot of room to improve, but there is nothing good right now. The dialogue is not good; it feels dumb, and the world build is not proper, it's not even incomplete, it's missing even the basic parts.

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