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Ok, I confess, I did write this review cause of the last sentence of the synopsis.
Just genius.
Kudos.
In three words: excitingly twisted story.
However, a proper review always requires a bit more than just one sentence.
In my opinion, the story is well written to remain exciting at least until chapter 13. Without going into detail and giving away unnecessarily there is linguistically and from the plot some effort to maintain gender confusion. Mix ups and false assumptions are the key words here.
After just a few paragraphs and chapters, it becomes clear that there is much more to this story than just "yuri" and "girls love". The potential for the further plot is pretty good to remain very exciting.
At first it is hard to get used to the linguistic peculiarities that are used to keep the entanglement going. However, I think it's worth it.
As a little warning, this story contains elements of mind control and brainwashing. However, the way these elements are incorporated is quite interesting. Worth a look.
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Undertones of NTR make this story unenjoyable for me. I had hoped for a fluffy story, but there's some heavyhanded lampshading going on painting a much grimmer picture, souring what I had expected to be a sweet story.
I also found it strange that none of the synopsis makes it way into the story (at least, not the first 13 chapters). It's as if the synopsis itself is a prologue. Weird.
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