Jack and Jill Conquer the Shattered World
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4.4 (17 ratings)
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- 142: END: The Slow Shifting Of The Camera’s FocusApr 18, 2022
- 141: Trepidation and AnticipationApr 18, 2022
- 140: Taking It EasyApr 18, 2022
- 139: A Very Confused GoblinApr 18, 2022
- 138: Bad MerlotApr 18, 2022
- 137: Carrying On As UsualApr 18, 2022
- 136: Nostalgia GogglesApr 3, 2022
- 135: ConvalescenceApr 3, 2022
- 134: OverfullApr 3, 2022
- 133: Final Boss BlackoutMar 27, 2022
- 132: Going Home To ReportMar 27, 2022
- 131: Unplanned ExcerciseMar 27, 2022
- 130: A Young Man Finds WisdomMar 20, 2022
- 129: Him AgainMar 20, 2022
- 128: TrespassorMar 20, 2022
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Hiatus - Updated Apr 18, 2022
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This story has an interesting premise and the characters and their interactions are quite good, the only thing bothering me is that the author seems to neglect/forget a lot of information, so although I have a good image of the characters my understanding of the world is spotty at best
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Plain and dull. It feels like a nutshell of another story, skipping a lot part of it.
We can't feel emotions of characters as if they are one dimensional. The story feels pretty much like plain text or pile of words just narrating things and events without any depth to them. Whater I do, I can't immerse myself into the story.
3.5/5.
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I feel like I'm reading a summary of events rather than a story in each chapter. Anything and everything that should be shown is sidelined, and we just get a couple of paragraphs outlining what happened. The author has a lot of interesting ideas, but they never describe them, and if they do it's just a couple sentences. This is a classic example of why you should Show instead of Tell.
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