Humanity, a group abandoned by their own nation “The Evangelist Federation”, were stripped of their human rights, treated like items, and forced to defend against the nightmarish creatures called Abyssiti, entities from beyond their earthly realm. The Human Restoration Project, an elite military program that combat the merciless anomalies are beginning to lose their effectiveness against them, and the higher ups of the nation are considering discarding humanity all together. Dart, a human that’s fallen victim to their mistreatment, and Soleria Illow, one of the citizens of the Federation; find themselves feeling trapped in the society they were born in. The two must consider what they are willing to sacrifice for change. They both have to find a way to break free from which they are far between.
The grammar is quite.
With the problem I had with seeing the novel, is the lack of warnings.
The author's story telling is very good and character development is excellent but the problem I had when reading the the early chapters, are the cliffhanger chapters.
Looking beyond he issues, I found along the way.
It is a good story and will grow on you as the author improves on area's that feels lacking.
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I read your story, and I have to to say In my opinion, it's pretty interesting to say the least. You managed to set up a very grim atmosphere and theme of the story with the death and misery present in each chapter, and the use of dread in the opening Chapters is really captivating to me, as I rarely see it executed properly on stories with a similar setting to yours. I look forward to reading the rest! Good work!
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It was good.
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