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The grammar is quite.
With the problem I had with seeing the novel, is the lack of warnings.
The author's story telling is very good and character development is excellent but the problem I had when reading the the early chapters, are the cliffhanger chapters.
Looking beyond he issues, I found along the way.
It is a good story and will grow on you as the author improves on area's that feels lacking.
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I read your story, and I have to to say In my opinion, it's pretty interesting to say the least. You managed to set up a very grim atmosphere and theme of the story with the death and misery present in each chapter, and the use of dread in the opening Chapters is really captivating to me, as I rarely see it executed properly on stories with a similar setting to yours. I look forward to reading the rest! Good work!
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It was good.
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