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Mouikkai Musume
Mouikkai Musume
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Kozuke gently runs the washcloth through the basin of scented soapy water, and begins to gently sponge the sweat off of her body. For some reason, she is always very sweaty in the morning. He suspects her dreams aren’t pleasant.

By the way, this was my first novel. The first serious thing I've written. It's completed, and I'm submitting it here. I could dump a pile of them here, but each chapter should keep most busy for a little while. If I did that, it wouldn't get as much attention, except perhaps through Kamifan or SuperLuminal, so I'm submitting it every week, if I may! Please also read No Face, No Life if you like heartwarming stories with an edge of tragedy. :D

Story Edited by Trismegistus Shandy

Genre
ComedyGender BenderGirls LoveMysteryRomanceSchool LifeSlice of LifeTragedy
Tags
Absent Parents Abusive Characters Adopted Children Adopted Protagonist Appearance Changes Early Romance Heartwarming Thriller
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      emphie012
      Status: chapter one : the girl who...

      The author was skillful enough to tug a readers heartstrings. By that I meant that you can really feel and understand and imagine what the characters are experiencing.

      I appreciate the fact that the words or vocabulary used were not too complicated where I would need to think for a bit what it means, but not too dumbed down that it takes away the severity of certain situations in the story.

      This is the first story I saw when I joined the website, I did not see much of an appeal to it, so I just held off on reading it, but I know realized that I was stupid to do so. THIS IS AN AMAZING STORY. IT IS WORTH ANYONE'S TIME.

      I'd like to thank the author for creating and sharing this to us. THANK YOU SO MUCH. 

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      nowopiejka
      Status: chapter two : the man who...

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      Review based on my comments to first two chapters:

      CHR 1. Boy after a year in coma resulted from car accident wakes up in body of a girl. He is told that genius doctor mistaken gim for a girl, thus restored him as her. It seems interesting, but this is both scary and unbelievable.

      To wake up in body not yours, lose your past (he doesn't remember his surname and other pieces of information, does he?). Like those people after organ transplantation who says to possess memories and habits of someone else. Straight way to identity/personality problem. I can guess he's going to deny his past and start totally new life as a girl.

      Also, how possibly a surgeon with enough experience to make all those operations could mistake a gender!? Bones, organs, hormones, blood composition. Burned groin, really? Like totally burned up (assumed) womb? 

      And their reaction to the fact that he is male?
      "No offense... but I don't see a boy right now". Before end of next chapter his entire psyche will make total reversal I guess.

      CHR 2. I'm done with that.

      So Doctor Frankenstein with taken away medical licence works with terribly mutilated patients and restores their body functions and look.

      As his masterpiece he decided to (non native English, so I couldn't find better word) breed/transform himself a family member (beautiful daughter) through extensive gender and plastic surgery, using a boy who lost family in car accident. Also, this novel has thriller and mystery tags in addition to all those romance, heartwarming and slice of life (ehh, where are they exactly? Currently it't more like beginning of psychological thriller) so we can expect even more creepy developments.

      TL;DR; Author is really good when comes to building up eerie/uncanny atmosphere. It's a "returning to normal life after a tragedy" trope with modern softcore version of Doctor Frankenstein, manipulation of the psyche (Stockholm syndrome) and haunting past (serious nightmares, once mentioned person, possibly part of girls love tag).

      Not my style, but execution seems really solid. Surprisingly deep for a web novel.

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