The story sure has potential and I like the way our MC is interacting with the canon characters, although there is a lot that can be improved upon (especially grammer)
A little bit longer review:
Style: the prose is ok but could be better, the sentences (sometimes) don't really flow into each other, at times they seem really choppy and some paragraphs are a bit repetitive in their word choice. The quality in this aspect varies a lot. It's something than can only really be improved with practice
Grammer: here I have the biggest issue with the story. It has many grammatical errors every chapter, although overall the author gets the meaning across, the story would benefit a lot from more proof reading as most mistakes are easy to spot and rectify聽
Story: Not that much to say as of now (ch 7) The plot is in it's infancy but as I mentioned before, I like the character interaction.
After some good polishing, I think this could really be worth your time and I would gladly pump up the rating to 4/5 or 4.5/5 stars. In the end I would really like to love the story but I can not convince myself to give more that 3/5 stars as of now.
I hope this review was helpful and not discouraging for the author. It is not some kind of bashing or hate because of the relatively low rating but an encouragement to improve and give some clues where to start.
Not really a fan of league but the lore is interesting. As I read the story I do love how the MC interacts with lore characters and actually isn't afraid to do so. The writing is also decent to the point it is easy to understand. I wanted to give this a solid 5 but I'm not that far off the novel yet.
Very good, the only decent arcane fic around that I managed to find, great character interactions, MC could use some development himself, so far not much is known about him other than powers and relationships. Feed me moar chapters.
In a land ruled by vile monsters, where death is common and life is cruel, one outcast endeavors to have it all. While there are many misconceptions related to goblins, such as their horrid looks or lack of intelligence, their small stature isn
Year 20XX.
Technology had advanced and Virtual Reality sufficiently developed and become the new mainstream of online games. Now every MMO games uses VR technology, rendering 3D MMO extinct.
Our Loli, Yasaka Ruri (18) was one of the
My name is Tim, or it was until I died. There was no light at the end of the tunnel, no white room to choose any cheats from, nor was there any meeting with God.
I didn鈥檛 die heroically while saving someone, and I certainly didn鈥檛 get hit b
Update Schedule:
Wednesday, Friday, and Sunday on WN, SH, MSB, and RR.
As for the Patrons, almost Daily updates with guaranteed 25 new Chapters each month.
Discord: https://discord.gg/t2gPEt3
Synopsis:
Keith, a
“Bring him to his knees.”
Wait, what? This was supposed to be my reward ceremony, hell, I had just seconds ago finally received the title they decided to push on me.
“Bring me the ring.”
Alice De Vrita
Short review:
The story sure has potential and I like the way our MC is interacting with the canon characters, although there is a lot that can be improved upon (especially grammer)
A little bit longer review:
Style: the prose is ok but could be better, the sentences (sometimes) don't really flow into each other, at times they seem really choppy and some paragraphs are a bit repetitive in their word choice. The quality in this aspect varies a lot. It's something than can only really be improved with practice
Grammer: here I have the biggest issue with the story. It has many grammatical errors every chapter, although overall the author gets the meaning across, the story would benefit a lot from more proof reading as most mistakes are easy to spot and rectify聽
Story: Not that much to say as of now (ch 7) The plot is in it's infancy but as I mentioned before, I like the character interaction.
After some good polishing, I think this could really be worth your time and I would gladly pump up the rating to 4/5 or 4.5/5 stars. In the end I would really like to love the story but I can not convince myself to give more that 3/5 stars as of now.
I hope this review was helpful and not discouraging for the author. It is not some kind of bashing or hate because of the relatively low rating but an encouragement to improve and give some clues where to start.
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Definitely have expectations for this! It's good!馃憣
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This is a really good series the characters feel like actual people the plot and dialogue is very good a good read
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Not really a fan of league but the lore is interesting. As I read the story I do love how the MC interacts with lore characters and actually isn't afraid to do so. The writing is also decent to the point it is easy to understand. I wanted to give this a solid 5 but I'm not that far off the novel yet.
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Very good, the only decent arcane fic around that I managed to find, great character interactions, MC could use some development himself, so far not much is known about him other than powers and relationships. Feed me moar chapters.
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Good so far, I like the interactions between the characters.
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