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There is Something Wrong with This Game
There is Something Wrong with This Game
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Year 20XX.
Technology had advanced and Virtual Reality sufficiently developed and become the new mainstream of online games. Now every MMO games uses VR technology, rendering 3D MMO extinct.

Our Loli, Yasaka Ruri (18) was one of the players from a VRMMO game called Ascension.
But, for some unknown reason, she was able to bring out items from the game to the reality.

Now, what will our Loli do?

[Adventum Contest Entry]
Main Themes:
- Combination of Magic and Technology (Magic Infused Tech)

This story is only posted to ScribbleHub and my blog (https://flyingpiratecat.blogspot.com).
If you see it anywhere else, then it is stolen.

Genre
EcchiFantasyLitRPGSci-fiSlice of LifeSupernatural
Contest
The Adventum Contest
Tags
Betrayal Conditional Power Crafting Cute Protagonist Dishonest Protagonist Evil Protagonist Exhibitionism Female Protagonist Futuristic Setting Game Elements Gamers Hiding True Abilities Hiding True Identity Level System Loli Misunderstandings MMORPG Nudity Overpowered Protagonist Ruthless Protagonist Secret Identity Selfish Protagonist Special Abilities Twisted Personality Virtual Reality
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    New Dusk15
    Status: c013 – growing flowers

    Don’t need to say much. Went through the whole story within a day and enjoyed it. Placed a smile on my face. 

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    Old_Man
    Status: chapter 32

    Despite not having English as the native language, this author creates a fairly detail-rich yet mysterious environment in which our tastefully loli... protagonist?... traverses the worlds. Typically, loli-celebrating stories written by authors with cute names are overly simplistic and immature. That is not the case here. Your IQ will not be irreparably damaged by this story. The System is quite detailed, but don't worry - the most major infodumps are skippable without too much detriment, if that happens to be your inclination. I would, however, recommend at least reading the smaller System information boxes. It gets a lot less info-dumpy after about 5 chapters.

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    Rezkin_kdt
    Status: a012 – joining a party

    The MC is a rich blacksmithing evil magical ninja Kuudere loli and then some. She can't grow anymore because of the elixir which saved her life from cancer! SHe is metal bending and inventing the wheel or so to say, while also being the big boss player that no one can touch! Lol, I am loving it so far, the author has another loli MC novel to though not evil nor is in a VRMMORPG.

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    SerikoLee
    Status: plot

    The plot does not show tell how the MC got  so overpowered.

    It is in just the standard overpowered story, you encounter.

    But the each event and development is excellently detailed.

    Spoiler

    One chapter has  the MC do 1, 000, 000 to 2, 300, 000

    [collapse]

    If you love overpowered main character and a detailed story.

    This is for you

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    Sujihiko
    Status: c010 – mana clone and accident

    A different loli genre that I've found in my entire reading life.

    You're tired of lolis being just good? How about a little bit dose of psychopathicness? A loli betraying her guildmates; comrade, you're in for a ride. Crafting and Magic; hehe bois. Not so freakin' overpowered; blin, this stuff is BABUSHKA approved!

    Anyways, some comedy here and there, light there, a bit of darkness there, fluffness and everything nice over here. This is obviously a win-win for us.

    Lastly, this novel is naturally----

    COMRADE APPROVED

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    Eggs4Life
    Status: C002 - The Orc Village

    It's such a nice story and its so interesting as well, I can't wait for the next update!

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    kiurakazama
    Status: b013 – for the greater good

    Good stories..

    Nice MC, with a little betraying complex.

    I hope you write about MC got independent, Loli MC still on the parent house right ?

    I mean, why dont get out from there and cut the ties with her uncaring parent ? Why you dont wreck them and destroy them. 

    While MC sick with leukimia, the 'parent' having fun with their d*ick and pu*usy.

    She betrayed by her family, before she betray others why dont you take some revenge on the 'parent', uncle&aunt or whoever MC loli deemed guilty.

    Thats the only regret I feel, ,

    Also, she can help the sick, and get the money. Experiment diluting the elixir ? To minimize trouble.

    I prefer she fix the life in IRL first. After all done and free, you can do what ever you want author.

    So please please fix her life. So we can read with ease..

    Anyway, nice work Author.

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    jarie435
    Status: ℙ001 – just another virtual reality game

    This webnovel is quite good, the vrmmo leveling is satisfying and the main character is also pretty unique. She's a misanthropic loli (more distrust then hate) who's legal and ingame acts cute but is actually backstabbing the guild she is in. Stealing from the rich has been her thing since she has gotten the game, and isn't it even better that you can cash out the items for real world money? Oh also she can take items inside the game into the real world for some reason which is what solved her leukemia, and is also the reason she's a loli because of the potion side-effect she takes daily. All of it is very satisfying and I'm just waiting for her backstabbing to be revealed, who would think that the guild's loli mascot could be so viscious?

    Though I do have just one gripe which is why I'm putting this at 4 stars and not five. There is just not enough chapters of her real life even though its so interesting. Her parents don't love her because of a forced marriage so she lives all alone, and later in the game we meet some people who are suspected to be one of the parent's side family before they were forced into marriage, but nothing happens with it. I mean we've been through 70 chapters and there is barely any plot progression on this side. Also, one of her classmates is part of the guild in vr and they're uh kinda friends (they know their vr identities cause here people look similar in vr), so uh how are you going to consider the effect on the betrayal of that side author? I know she goes to school through vr but its going to be realll awkward when it happens.

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    ShadoCat
    Status: c013 – growing flowers

    I rate based on how much fun I have reading a story.

    The main character makes decisions that I disagree with but that's part of the fun of reading someone else's story.

    The author makes good use of the spoiler tag to hide game info boxes.  This would be great if I wasn't the type to read every blue box.  Even so, needing just 1 click to read the blue box isn't going to make my finger fall off.

    The blue boxes aren't just blue.  They are presented to look as the game interface would with colors and tool tips.  That's a bit more effort than I have come to expect in stories.

    Speaking of extra effort, there are images and mobile gifs in the chapters.  Personally, they don't do anything for me but other people like them and they don't detract for me.

    I enjoy the small cultural nuances that pervade the story since I didn't grow up in Japan.

    I do suggest that if the author looks to publishing this story through KU or any other US publisher, is that the author get a native English speaking editor.  There are a few pluralization errors and some word choices that are awkward.  This might bother someone who is a card carrying member of the grammar police but doesn't bother me and it is far better than many other foreign authored stories that I have enjoyed.

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    Cavler
    Status: c012 – doren the aprentice alchemist

    I enjoyed the story sofar, I wonder what antics the MC gets upto in the future. 

    Suprisingly I enjoy the irl stuff the most. I hope there will be more worldbuiling in this area aswel.

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