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There is Something Wrong with This Game
There is Something Wrong with This Game
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Year 20XX.
Technology had advanced and Virtual Reality sufficiently developed and become the new mainstream of online games. Now every MMO games has using VR technology, rendering 3D MMO extinct.

Our Loli, Yasaka Ruri (18) was one of the players from a VRMMO game called Ascension.
But, for some unknown reason, she was able to bring out items from the game to the reality.

Now, what will our Loli do?

[Adventum Contest Entry]
Main Themes:
- Combination of Magic and Technology (Magic Infused Tech)

This story is only posted to ScribbleHub and my blog (https://flyingpiratecat.blogspot.com).
If you see it anywhere else, then it is stolen.

Genre
EcchiFantasyLitRPGSci-fiSlice of LifeSupernatural
Contest
The Adventum Contest
Tags
Betrayal Conditional Power Crafting Cute Protagonist Dishonest Protagonist Evil Protagonist Exhibitionism Female Protagonist Futuristic Setting Game Elements Gamers Hiding True Abilities Hiding True Identity Level System Loli Misunderstandings MMORPG Nudity Overpowered Protagonist Ruthless Protagonist Secret Identity Selfish Protagonist Special Abilities Twisted Personality Virtual Reality
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    New Eggs4Life
    Status: b018 – roaming in the town

    It's such a nice story and its so interesting as well, I can't wait for the next update!

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    Old_Man
    Status: chapter 32

    Despite not having English as the native language, this author creates a fairly detail-rich yet mysterious environment in which our tastefully loli... protagonist?... traverses the worlds. Typically, loli-celebrating stories written by authors with cute names are overly simplistic and immature. That is not the case here. Your IQ will not be irreparably damaged by this story. The System is quite detailed, but don't worry - the most major infodumps are skippable without too much detriment, if that happens to be your inclination. I would, however, recommend at least reading the smaller System information boxes. It gets a lot less info-dumpy after about 5 chapters.

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    Rezkin_kdt
    Status: a012 – joining a party

    The MC is a rich blacksmithing evil magical ninja Kuudere loli and then some. She can't grow anymore because of the elixir which saved her life from cancer! SHe is metal bending and inventing the wheel or so to say, while also being the big boss player that no one can touch! Lol, I am loving it so far, the author has another loli MC novel to though not evil nor is in a VRMMORPG.

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    SerikoLee
    Status: plot

    The plot does not show tell how the MC got  so overpowered.

    It is in just the standard overpowered story, you encounter.

    But the each event and development is excellently detailed.

    Spoiler

    One chapter has  the MC do 1, 000, 000 to 2, 300, 000

    [collapse]

    If you love overpowered main character and a detailed story.

    This is for you

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    kiurakazama
    Status: b013 – for the greater good

    Good stories..

    Nice MC, with a little betraying complex.

    I hope you write about MC got independent, Loli MC still on the parent house right ?

    I mean, why dont get out from there and cut the ties with her uncaring parent ? Why you dont wreck them and destroy them. 

    While MC sick with leukimia, the 'parent' having fun with their d*ick and pu*usy.

    She betrayed by her family, before she betray others why dont you take some revenge on the 'parent', uncle&aunt or whoever MC loli deemed guilty.

    Thats the only regret I feel, ,

    Also, she can help the sick, and get the money. Experiment diluting the elixir ? To minimize trouble.

    I prefer she fix the life in IRL first. After all done and free, you can do what ever you want author.

    So please please fix her life. So we can read with ease..

    Anyway, nice work Author.

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    sZoK
    Status: b009 – escort quest

    At first I was very hesitant to start reading the story beacuse of large amount of system logs in the novel, but when I did so, I couldn't stop and I am actually waiting for future chapters. Many system logs are in spoilers so it doesn't take a much time at all to skip them if one wishes to and extra info about certain skills/system things can be found if clicked the right word. Even without system logs chapters are long plot-like enough and it's obvious that the author tries his best to give us the best reading experience. There is a lot of info about stats, skills and items, but the most important things that you should (at the moment of reading them) know aren't in spoiler. All hail overpowered eternal ninja-archwizard blacksmith loli! 

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    supermonkey12345123
    Status: somewhere?

    I thought that this was just "random generic vrmmo", but it actually surprised me how good this was (compared to some other vrmmo stories). It's by no means the best story, but the use of spoilers as menu screens and the occasional gif made the experience a lot better. The grammar is pretty on-point, with only a few minor mistakes that you won't easily catch if you are only passively reading. If you are the type of person to read Dante's Inferno for enjoyment, you might not like this, but if you are a fan of lolis and decently written stories about the exact same thing but with a small formula break, this is the story for you.

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