Despite not having English as the native language, this author creates a fairly detail-rich yet mysterious environment in which our tastefully loli... protagonist?... traverses the worlds. Typically, loli-celebrating stories written by authors with cute names are overly simplistic and immature. That is not the case here. Your IQ will not be irreparably damaged by this story. The System is quite detailed, but don't worry - the most major infodumps are skippable without too much detriment, if that happens to be your inclination. I would, however, recommend at least reading the smaller System information boxes. It gets a lot less info-dumpy after about 5 chapters.

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The MC is a rich blacksmithing evil magical ninja Kuudere loli and then some. She can't grow anymore because of the elixir which saved her life from cancer! SHe is metal bending and inventing the wheel or so to say, while also being the big boss player that no one can touch! Lol, I am loving it so far, the author has another loli MC novel to though not evil nor is in a VRMMORPG.

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The plot does not show tell how the MC got  so overpowered.

It is in just the standard overpowered story, you encounter.

But the each event and development is excellently detailed.

If you love overpowered main character and a detailed story.

This is for you

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There's Something Wrong With This Girl.

This girl is already eighteen and somehow doesn't understand empathy. Like, there's zero remorse anywhere and she has no friends (like some people think that's she's their friend, but she returns kindness with sh*t).

Like, the story starts with her robbing her own guild, setting back weeks of her teammates efforts (one is earning money to care for his sick sister ffs) ; and why does she do this? F**k if I know. The three levels of experience and 1000 Glory Points just don't seem like a good enough reason imo - whatever gold she earns doesn't even matter, she already had more than she'll ever need from clearing another guild's treasury.

I love the world, but it's wasted on the MC.

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A different loli genre that I've found in my entire reading life.

You're tired of lolis being just good? How about a little bit dose of psychopathicness? A loli betraying her guildmates; comrade, you're in for a ride. Crafting and Magic; hehe bois. Not so freakin' overpowered; blin, this stuff is BABUSHKA approved!

Anyways, some comedy here and there, light there, a bit of darkness there, fluffness and everything nice over here. This is obviously a win-win for us.

Lastly, this novel is naturally----

COMRADE APPROVED

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Funny novel. In general, it can be described in words - the daily life of OP evil loli in an MMORPG... Well, I decided to drop around 30 chp. To be honest, although I can recommend you to read it, I still think it's a wasted potential. 1) There could be a lot more humor here. Humor should be the basis for such work. And so it is. But only 20% of the potential is used. 2) There is neither plot here, nor MC has goal. Just a series of events. 3) There is no Yuri here. Not that it must be here, but its presence could compensate for previous shortcomings..

P.S. The author has a strange quirk on system messages, dialogues, selection of pictures and even imitation of sites. Just go and play some dnd-based game... or create your own game... 

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MC is fun to read and all but she's ultimately unambitious and doesn't seem to grasp the true potential of being able to take things out of a fantasy game. I mean imagine having the potential to turn yourself into a demigod or stronger IRL, yet spending all your time backstabbing and stealing gold coins just so you can be even more ludicrously rich than you already are. Heck, if that's how she really wants to play it she could even bribe (invest in) the developers with her money and ask them to make a special Apple of Eden item for her as thanks for her large investment. 

In a nutshell, MC needs to think bigger.

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Good stories..

Nice MC, with a little betraying complex.

I hope you write about MC got independent, Loli MC still on the parent house right ?

I mean, why dont get out from there and cut the ties with her uncaring parent ? Why you dont wreck them and destroy them. 

While MC sick with leukimia, the 'parent' having fun with their d*ick and pu*usy.

She betrayed by her family, before she betray others why dont you take some revenge on the 'parent', uncle&aunt or whoever MC loli deemed guilty.

Thats the only regret I feel, ,

Also, she can help the sick, and get the money. Experiment diluting the elixir ? To minimize trouble.

I prefer she fix the life in IRL first. After all done and free, you can do what ever you want author.

So please please fix her life. So we can read with ease..

Anyway, nice work Author.

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The author is amazing, I have enjoyed every chapter and I love how the author goes the extra mile by adding images, tables etc. Author you are amazing, continue to keep up the great work!

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It's such a nice story and its so interesting as well, I can't wait for the next update!

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