Jesse Owens was just an average guy going on a family outing with his sister to the mall. After a tragic accident claims the life of Jesse, he finds himself in the afterlife. To make matters worse when Jesse goes through the judging process, he was misjudged as a criminal mastermind who also happens to be a woman named Jesse Owens. Reincarnated as a girl and with a cursed reincarnation, Jesse must now try to survive in his new world.
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An amazing dark plot that I hope stays through out the rest of the story.
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The way the story is unfolding is amazing and making me anticipate a great climax to come in the future. The author is very capable with writing so no worry, grammar is good with little issues here and there, but otherwise good enough to read without irritation. The plot takes a while to roll and technically it is still only rolling, but I am ready to bet one of my leg and arm that the story will continue to be more amazing with every passing chapters. The characters are likable and I wanna see how the different reincarnations will affect the villain and the hero in personalities when they finally confront each other and spill the beans. I also wanna see those doofus demigod get their ass handed to them by our MC for f**king up such a job. I like the interaction between Teona and the MC so I hope to see more of that and the interaction between the people and our MC in her adventures. Hopefully this world isn't black and white where it is either good or evil, but instead a grey scale that show that there are causes for every actions taken by any characters. I ' am going to stop my tangent here and just say thank you to the author and may this story continue forth with its mighty waves of potentials.
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If you like stories about people in terrible situations overcoming the odds then you should read this
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This story is screwed up from the very beginning because of fatal flaw in logic: gods misjudged a soul because of the same name. Common, everyday tens of humans with the same name dying and the god can make a mistake? The god rely on a computer to identify the soul? Senseless.
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im sad that this has been dropped it was a very nice story good character growth and backstory too no brain dead MC so far and no Harem in site but the
MC x Goddess
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The start of the story is amazing. Although there is a lack of punctiuation sometimes, it is easy to ignore. Sadly the story goes downhill soon.
The problems start when the MC gets back to civilisation. The fact that the MC is op is handeled really well at first. She gets found out and given a high rank instantly. This is great because you don't need the whole hiding powers for no reason thing. After MC is back from her break she has to go on a mission with a bunch of people who do not believe in her, a scenario which can be used so the MC can prove herself. This is not how it is used. The second strongest member gets destroyed by MC in a duel, and she still treats MC as a burden. When a big and strong monster shows up, MC has to fight it together with the rest of her team. This could have been a great moment for MC to learn that she can't do everything on her own and that even people weaker than her can have a role to play. This is not what happens. Instead, she says, while lementing over the death of a teammate, "I could have beaten it in 3 seconds, if I did not need to hold back."You don't. She has to hide her arcane and dark magic, but she could have used any other magic if she wanted. She just did not for no reason.
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Story is so far definitely going somewhere interesting and I'm looking forward to more updates
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The story is written well enough, with new events every chapter to keep things interesting.
My only gripe is that the author hardly mentions what the characters look like, I have no idea what the MC looks like, only that she has black hair and used to have scars.
Also the dialogues feel like conversation between A.I, ending sentences with a simple "said and smiled" or "said with raised eyebrows" or "frowned" or "smirked" can solve that, the only form of expression the characters make is 'sighing'. It doesn't give much substance to the story and makes reading a chore.
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