This is my first story on this site.
I also dislike writing descriptions.
I've never written an action story before so I'll accept criticism on that end. Nothing else.
The first chapter is an infodump.
The MC is a regular person who gets reincarnated into a fantasy world as a rabbit.
This is a story that has a worldwide system that is split into different subsystems. In the first chapter we discover the two main divisions as well as the overseeing system. Other systems are mentioned in passing.
The two systems work differently, the details will be discussed in the story itself.
I have a hard time directing this story so on hiatus it goes. I like it I just have trouble writing it.