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new review:
I've read everything up to ch20, the story is really good and I like how you develop the plot and the characters.
I got confused by the multiple time skips in the last chapters, but I understand why you've done it.
Even if I like the whole 'army building' thingy with all its strategic stuff, I would like to see the story focus more on the MC in the next chapters.
For the writing, there are still a few spelling mistakes here and there, but no more major grammar mistakes and I can feel your writing getting better and better. You just have to compare ch20 with the first chapters, the quality improved a lot.
To resume : I love the story, the MC is smart, the writing isn't bad and I hope you will keep releasing it regularly. :)
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old review:
There are still some spelling mistakes, but despite the language barrier the writing is still readable and the quality isn't too bad. The story seems interesting, I hope it won't be too long to get new chapters and the story will not be too spaced out.
This changes from the classic sci-fi cliche and from what I understood with the disclaimer the story will soon refocus on a magical world ? (I guess this is the fantasy part)
I don't know how it will turn out but I hope it'll be done well, the concept is interesting. I've read a novel not too long ago which mixed sci-fi and fantasy, unfortunately the more the story progressed the more the sci-fi elements disappeared, so I hope this novel will be different.
Keep going in this direction it's a good start I might follow your story once it gets more released chapters. Good luck !
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