After pulling several overnighters **** *** falls down a broken elevator shaft and gets reborn.
Chosen for a purpose by a goddess who by chance plucked up from cycle of samsara. He tries to live a grand life but for such a life hardship is sure to come to him as fate has plans for him.
This is my first novel I post out there. This site is also the only place I am releasing.
Also the cover isn't mine just gave it a different filter and slapped on the title.
It also should be obvious but I don't own the series just the characters I made.
Cover: https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/3574107?q=dungeon_ni_deai_wo_motomeru_no_wa_machigatteiru_darou_ka+
Schedule: Monday, Wednesday, Friday are two chapters. Sunday is one.
The story is frustrating in many parts. One of which is that it starts out very well! Then it starts to go down. However, I will focus on the MC.
The MC is basically an adult, that forgets he's an adult halfway through the story. It's hard to understand an adult seeking power in a war zone not understanding that their will be horrible situations he will find himself in. The MC doesn't embrace his "apparent" blood lust and it becomes a crux of the story. I say apparent because his actions in the war are hidden from the main story. The MC is ordered to fight and kill to grow stronger. The MC accepts and demands the responsibility for growth. The MC is ordered to go and travel. The MC goes and travels to a war zone to get stronger. The MC accepts punishments to appease people. Accepting getting hurt by others to atone for what he believes is bad but he never forgives himself. He's not a beta MC but definitely a Very passive MC that allows others to dictate what happens. I had to stop reading as I couldn't handle the passiveness and whiny nature of the MC.
Update : cheated and looked ahead in the story - MC is definitely a beta
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Sorry for any spelling mistakes, the entire message was translated by [Google Translator].
The story in general is very good and fluid to read, the only problem, at least for me, is the lack of approximation between the protagonist and ANY character, whether traveling companions or family members.
We don't know if person X likes something or not, even his (possible) romantic interest doesn't have one because she likes the protagonist or a moment to interact and this is something that happens to all characters, including caregivers (adoptive parents?) of the protagonist.
To be honest, the story is good, it's just this little review that makes me like this wonderful story a little less.
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an enjoyable story. Really like that it steps away from the harem focus of most danmachi story's. Character development is solid so far. The fights are fun and not too repetitive. While the MC is powerful they are definitely not invincible or world breaking so far. The way they portray the world is well done. Updates very consistently. The romance aspect while definitely not the main focus is pretty good and not done in a cringy or rushed and unnatural way. So all in all a pretty well rounded story
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At first the short chapters at the front may looks concerning Fret not!!
After several chapters ahead its not that shorts The time skip part maybe confusing but ehh its a necessary I guessIts just I hope at the beginning author did some story background for several characters for readers not to be confusedAlthough after all thatThe story, plot, character development is very spot onI enjoyed themAs his power and all is not breaking danmachi rules and no nonsenseAlthough I'm slightly concern about the romance part, lot of stories fell apart in bringing good romanceOverall 10/10
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