I can honestly say the first 80 or so chapters had promise but the author threw an opponant that was literally stronger than Kaido at the main charachter before he was even remotely close to ready to fight even a normal vice admiral level enemy. The MC was absolutely curb stomped by the guy who was enhanced after already having an over 10 billion bounty level (that's a bit under twice the bounty on roger, rocks was an unknown but was approximately twice as strong as roger or thereabouts). To put this in perspective the admirals wouldn't stand a chance against the guy and neither would dark king who is the person he'd naturally go after which makes him not even being known in the original absolutely and completely absurd if you wanted to have a guy like this. Then the guy gets beat by the main charachter sacrificing 30 years of life expectancy using a sketchy powerup ability he got midfight due to the interferance of actual Gods. It got to the point for me that I was hammering the next chapter button just to get past this arc before giving up after reading the first few lines of like 10 chapters realizing things were not getting better any time soon. I honestly think all actual potential for this one has been wasted and my immersion is completely gone. Moving into the other thing that has progressively gotten worse is the mental problems the main charachter is suffering through, I've not got a split personality so I'm not really able to relate to this and have very little to actually say about it sure it's realistic but also completely unrelatable to most folks. Anyways I rarely review a novel so negatively and really only reserve this for a novel that has truely wasted great potential.

Ps; Author if you read this far I'm begging ya. Please rewrite the latter half of this into something more believable at least. This one desperately needs to be salvaged.

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