All romantic interactions were initiated by the girls. The protagonist is passive despite being experienced. Girls act very bold and horny despite being virgins. They just threw themselves on him for no reason. Slow burn my ass. This dynamic would make more sense if you switched the genders. The protagonist also uses prostitutes.

After encountering rapist bandits, the protagonist uses the minimal force required to apprehend them and gently escort them to the nearest village. But he has no problem desecrating the corpse of a person who gave his life fighting evil. For fun. He brags about it.

The kingdom is advanced enough to guard and feed bandits. If there was no economic reason to become a criminal, aren't they just evil?

In this world, it is apparently normal for a farm girl to not know how to sew.

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Very good story. The writing is clean and clear and the story is engaging. The MC is native to a fantasy world with typical (and some creatively, engagingly unique) creatures. One of the more interesting aspects is that many pantheons of the gods are represented -- Greek, Norse, Celtic, etc. Plus, the gods show up, much to the MC's disgust. I won't give away the background, but he's a mercenary adventurer who hires out to help Chosen Ones defeat Dark Lords, but he has little respect for most Chosen Ones or the gods who choose and bless them. It's a structure that allows for some real personality and humor to show in the MC, and the author delivers.

As a harem novel, there's always the question of how the MC gains members of the harem. Well, in this case, it's through relationship development over time. In other words, a slow burn. After the first woman joins him, she's the one to initially suggest the second, and it seems (at this point in the story) that the third will join due to mutual attraction by all parties. So, no insta-love and no magical domination.

Finally, there's a big picture story that's foretold and the author sets up interesting plot and character developments. For example, at the point where I'm writing this reveiw (Vol.2 Ch.4 - Falling for Her), the MC and his "mates" are helping a very disagreeable and unsavory Chose One that they were warned away from by both a goddess (whom the MC neither respects nor trusts) and a clerk of the adventurers guild (whom he did respect and trust). Yet, they agreed anyway, partially for money, but, to me, also partially because the MC really doesn't want to see more villages like his destroyed by Dark Lords. So, it's personal. But the setup with the no-good-nik Chosen One is fun.

Bottom line: If any of this sounds like your kind of story, give it a shot. I don't think you'll be disappointed!

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In my personal opinion this story is one of the better ones on scribblehub. The fights are amazing, the grammar is decent, the characters are well done and relatable, and the s*x scenes are enjoyable. The protagonists isn't your normal harem douche, and the romantic interests aren't door mats. The fights flow and are intelligent. The world is interesting and I look forward to seeing it fleshed out. Honestly if you're looking for a polygamous relationship action adventure novel this is it. 

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This story has been a blast to read. The erotic scenes are well written and 9/10 timrs feel original. Story development, character development, clearly defined personalities. 

A big plus is the author DOES NOT make the 2 most common mistakes most amateur writers do. One is overly explaining every detail of something/someone. Two is repeated explanations of the same things in various chapters to fill in space. The author progresses the story in a very smooth fashion

My only complaint is, CAN WE PLEASE GET SOME ARTWORK OF FELIX AND ATHENA IN THE GLOSSARY? No homo but I like being able to properly visualize the authors characters

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Interesting premises so far. No major grammar errors. Good character development. I would like to see the two main women's history more fleshed out, but that will surely come in time as the story progresses. The few smut scenes so far have been enjoyable reads.

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Definitely top 3 in its category on this site and the competition isn’t even close (aside from maybe Welldark or rebirth of the nephilim)

 just read it you won’t be disappointed, everything is amazing and is paced well.

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Quite enjoyable. Love the action sequences and the drama!

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This is one of those stories that, at least for me, ends up getting read or not getting read depending on how bored I happened to be when reading the first few chapters. In this case I had some free time and no plan to spend it, so I kept going. In an alternate universe, maybe I stopped there.

The whole thing is pretty rough. Characters are highly one-dimensional, anime-style formulations such as "the one who likes fruit too much" or "the one who was tortured at one point." Nobody has a distinct voice, except one line I can think of in the entire series where one character develops an accent for half a dozen words. If someone plucked a line of dialogue from the story you'd really struggle to tell who said it without massive context clues. The whole thing is written in a very conversational style, dialogue included, which seems to subscribe to a "tell, don't show" philosophy. Grammar is shaky. Character development is nonexistent. Later in the series, plot armour (not by this name) becomes a literal in-universe plot device which the main character is aware of and starts referencing and taking advantage of. Villains essentially don't exist: you hear that they're out there doing Very Bad Things and then you meet them for a big fight scene where they get beat up.

It occurs to me when writing this that structurally this is basically a megadungeon LitRPG. If the characters explicitly arrived on a new floor, overcame a bunch of monsters and traps, beat a level boss they stumbled into, and then moved on, it wouldn't meaningfully change the structure or the narrative. This is at least a bit better delineated in the first few volumes thanks to their (in comparison) shorter arc lengths, but in vol 4 it really starts to blur together because it's so long: go to a place, fight some bad guys, get some loot, smut scene, go to a new place, fight some bad guys, smut scene, get some loot, repeat.

Despite that, it's enjoyable enough if you're in the right mood. It never, at least for me, veers into outright wince-inducing writing like most stuff on this site does. So if you want a generic fantasy harem adventure and have nothing better to read, give it a whirl: it may be your thing.

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God I love the story I hope you keep making this story for years to come and I get to buy books of this 

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