Its actually a pretty fun read, as long as you keep in mind that this is more of a slice of life than a dungeon crawler story. MC is a family man and he takes his role very seriously! If you're looking for tons of action this is the wrong place. My issue with the is actually all the stuff I just mentioned. 

Theres a whole ass dungeon, and MC is just like "bro calm down im just here for the money" and only staying on the first few floors for pretty much the whole story. 

Another problem is that his power is way too confusing. I dont mind an op MC but it makes it alot easier to follow along the story if I actually knew what his power did. This could just be a me problem tho. maybe other people like ambiguous powers? 

Side note, I absolutely love the running gag you got going of, "oh that silly bell broke reality again" problem is that bell doesn't really know what's supposed normal and what he considers normal for a fanasty world is seen as weird or impossible to everyone else. At least he self aware of it,

"hey so like are bags that carry more than they appear a thing?"  "No, and if they are it would be hidden away or absurdly expensive" "Oh... " *puts magical 'bigger on the inside and can freeze the time of any object placed in it' behind his back.*

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IT'S GREAT! At least for me. It's a fun read tbh, though it's only been 10 chapters as I reviewed. 

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Absolutely amazing, the author literally took Danmachi series and changed its genre from shounen to seinen.

It's mostly a slice of life focused on the characters instead of exploring the dungeon but that doesn't mean is boring, MC leads the story pretty well and his interactions with the characters feels natural. It's really pleasant to read their conversations.

I just hope the story get finished some day.

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Overall it was really  good for a unprofessional writer just some hole but it still amazing and its  just kinda rushed so if you plan reading just ignore the sudden development it's a fanfic 

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It's a great story, though it's a fan fiction the originality was overwhelming, I cheer for you to continue this thanks for the chapters

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It's very good, it shows the mechanics of some skills and magics while maintaining most personalities of the characters in the original timeline, I also like that little reference of Fate in some chapters.

Characters - Pretty much the same, I think.

The author also put details in whatever he make, and the way he does things like his personal magic and skills, example. 

The Acton scenes are also pretty okay, not too bad. Overall, I rate it a good 5 stars 

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well... it was actually amazing, definitely worth reading, so I'm eager to read the whole story)

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Definitely worth reading, a self aware Gary Stu.

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