It has been restarted and ever since then, it's getting better! Seems like a copy of "Tensura" but there were a lot of changes due to Tanya and her previous world's presence. A fun read!  I'll definitely check in on this story as it progresses. 

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This story takes a somewhat unique and interesting take on the Slime fanfiction by using Tanya as the MC instead of just some random guy or girl and her being a Demon closely related to the Black Primordial makes it even more interesting. While the story is a bit interesting with how it starts there is a reason I choose to give it a 3 star.

First thing is that like all fanfiction authors you don't try changing the story or adding your own spin to it. The whole Tanya as a demon was a nice start but sadly you didn't do much with it by making her into a side character pretty much to Rimuru's story. You replaced some scenes and events with her instead but in the end you kept the story the exact same as the source and that's just lazy writing just like every other fanfiction. I don't know how you would change the story if at all in the later chapters but this is my opinion and review as of chapter 8.

Tanya as a character seems to be a pretty boring character as well. I don't know if its because your your lacking skill as a writer or if its been done on purpose but she lacks a real personality. We know how the original Tanya is, she wants to live a peaceful life pretty much. Your Tanya while should be having the same goal doesn't have her drive and emotion. She feels like a robot and there is not much else I can say to describe her.

The dialogue between the rest of the characters also feels a bit bland? You can tell its not written by a professional if you get what I mean. Everyone feels like they are reading out of a script and I just can't take it seriously. 

Every action has an equal and opposite reaction. Authors of fanfiction just can't seem to follow this one rule. We all know how the original story of these anime/manga/ln goes but, what would happen if you add in an unknown variable like a new reincarnated character or just some other character that shouldn't exists and have them get involved in the main cast of the story? Obviously the characters would act and react differently to certain events depending on how much introduced variable gets involved with the cast. Just the fact that the new character exists in the world means nothing should be the same. The Butterfly Effect is a real thing you authors need to understand to stop ruining these stories.

I would really love to like your story and ignoring every other con as long you change the story in some way I can continue reading this. I'm not here to reread another reskin of the original. If you can't be bothered to try and writing an actual story in a world your copied then I won't be bothered to continue this. 

Again this is purely my opinion as of Chapter 8 and I can admit I'm wrong if you the author proves me wrong. I more then anyone would love the story to be good succeed. Too many fanfiction these days are written very half-assed and authors use the excuse of 'writing for fun' to disrespect the original work by not taking it seriously.

Sorry for the long review/rant I hope you all the best! 

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this is fire🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 keep up the good work

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love your writing and the way your characters interact with each other 5 stars 10/10 would recommend to family

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This Fan-fic has been a pleasant surprise. The quality and execution are fun and more than worth the read. While it is a little more relaxed than the source material, it has a quirky charm that keeps you reading. The author has done an outstanding job of placing our favorite demon of the Rhine in her rightful place as a true demon. Something I would like to happen more is what Tanya is famous for, such as her rants and introspections. Her logical complaining about the heavens and evil nature is the bread and butter of the character. Only when Tanya inspires the making you willing to fight for her cause does she come into her own. This is one of those rare stories where each chapter is worth reading. I can only hope the author does not give up. You have what it takes. I also look forward to any original works you publish. Good luck.

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Love the work!! Just please try to keep the updates constant, like monthly atleast. Please. 🙏🙏 It's excruciating waiting for a series to update you really like and then forgetting the plot bcoz of how long it's been.

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Keep up the good work

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