This story takes a somewhat unique and interesting take on the Slime fanfiction by using Tanya as the MC instead of just some random guy or girl and her being a Demon closely related to the Black Primordial makes it even more interesting. While the story is a bit interesting with how it starts there is a reason I choose to give it a 3 star.

First thing is that like all fanfiction authors you don't try changing the story or adding your own spin to it. The whole Tanya as a demon was a nice start but sadly you didn't do much with it by making her into a side character pretty much to Rimuru's story. You replaced some scenes and events with her instead but in the end you kept the story the exact same as the source and that's just lazy writing just like every other fanfiction. I don't know how you would change the story if at all in the later chapters but this is my opinion and review as of chapter 8.

Tanya as a character seems to be a pretty boring character as well. I don't know if its because your your lacking skill as a writer or if its been done on purpose but she lacks a real personality. We know how the original Tanya is, she wants to live a peaceful life pretty much. Your Tanya while should be having the same goal doesn't have her drive and emotion. She feels like a robot and there is not much else I can say to describe her.

The dialogue between the rest of the characters also feels a bit bland? You can tell its not written by a professional if you get what I mean. Everyone feels like they are reading out of a script and I just can't take it seriously. 

Every action has an equal and opposite reaction. Authors of fanfiction just can't seem to follow this one rule. We all know how the original story of these anime/manga/ln goes but, what would happen if you add in an unknown variable like a new reincarnated character or just some other character that shouldn't exists and have them get involved in the main cast of the story? Obviously the characters would act and react differently to certain events depending on how much introduced variable gets involved with the cast. Just the fact that the new character exists in the world means nothing should be the same. The Butterfly Effect is a real thing you authors need to understand to stop ruining these stories.

I would really love to like your story and ignoring every other con as long you change the story in some way I can continue reading this. I'm not here to reread another reskin of the original. If you can't be bothered to try and writing an actual story in a world your copied then I won't be bothered to continue this. 

Again this is purely my opinion as of Chapter 8 and I can admit I'm wrong if you the author proves me wrong. I more then anyone would love the story to be good succeed. Too many fanfiction these days are written very half-assed and authors use the excuse of 'writing for fun' to disrespect the original work by not taking it seriously.

Sorry for the long review/rant I hope you all the best! 

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love your writing and the way your characters interact with each other 5 stars 10/10 would recommend to family

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this is fire???????? Keep up the good work

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It has been restarted and ever since then, it's getting better! Seems like a copy of "Tensura" but there were a lot of changes due to Tanya and her previous world's presence. A fun read!  I'll definitely check in on this story as it progresses. 

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This Fan-fic has been a pleasant surprise. The quality and execution are fun and more than worth the read. While it is a little more relaxed than the source material, it has a quirky charm that keeps you reading. The author has done an outstanding job of placing our favorite demon of the Rhine in her rightful place as a true demon. Something I would like to happen more is what Tanya is famous for, such as her rants and introspections. Her logical complaining about the heavens and evil nature is the bread and butter of the character. Only when Tanya inspires the making you willing to fight for her cause does she come into her own. This is one of those rare stories where each chapter is worth reading. I can only hope the author does not give up. You have what it takes. I also look forward to any original works you publish. Good luck.

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First to comment off topic, the novel has been rewritten and some reviews are of the old version.

I'm going to start first with what was bad about the novel and what I liked the least about it. The first is the writing style, it feels like a summary of Tensei anime chapters rather than a novel. The second is the first volume of the novel, which literally feels like Tanya doesn't affect the development of Tensei's story at all.

Now, the good thing about the novel, The story. Oh god, I'm so glad I didn't drop the novel in volume one. As the meme goes "This is where the fun begins". If you are a fan of Tanya, it is a highly recommended reading from the second volume and culminating in the third. Tanya really starts to affect Tensei's story and in a very good way (The return of the empire). Honestly a gem if you love Tanya the evil and highly recommended reading. But if you are a fan of Rimuru, he is relegated as an important secondary character.

I would love to give it 5 stars but the style, which I dislike and the first volume that is somewhat weak prevents me from doing so, but honestly the second and third volumes DESERVE THE 5 STARS simply because of the story.

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Its really good. I binged right through all available chapters and enjoyed the whole trip.

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Love the work!! Just please try to keep the updates constant, like monthly atleast. Please. ?? It's excruciating waiting for a series to update you really like and then forgetting the plot bcoz of how long it's been.

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Keep up the good work

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heyo. this is a random shut-in's honest opinion.

i like this story a lot. pretty much only reason im not giving it 5 stars and instead only 4 stars is because it's dropped (basically out of spite) and theres not even a rushed ending BUT honestly I love it so far. really dreading at how im already bout finished with it.

anyway a bit into what the story is or really how the plot goes...

theres not that much difference in general direction of the plot but the minor changes are pretty good in my opinion. thats really bout it to be honest. im not really a fan of stories getting all jumbled up and changed in fan fics so it is a bit biased.

another thing i'd like to add is how tanya's character is a bit different than how she is in youjo senki. shes more.. well... not as aggressive or "devilish" as she is in youjo senki and her race being an actual demon is just a tad bit confusing on that part but overall her logical mind and calm mindset is bout the same except the few times its made to just "better fit" in with the "tensura theme".

well thats bout it. I recommend the read even if you wont get the whole story. shame but oh well.

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